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Ksenia222

July 9, 2025

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My dreams

I often dream about my future. I want to work in marketing or finance sector. I want to buy car and home for me and my family. Now I learning English because I want to go to University in Georgia. I need to improve my listening and writing. Every day I watch movies in English, write letters, and learn new English words. In the future, I want to be a journalist. I think, I can do it. Good luck to me!

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My dreams

I often dream about my future.

I want to work in marketing or finance sector.

I want to buy a car and home for me and my family.

Or "for my family and I" - this is more formal

Now, I'm learning English because I want to go to Uuniversity in Georgia.

I need to improve my listening and writing.

Every day I watch movies in English, write letters, and learn new English words.

In the future, I want to be a journalist.

I think, I can do it.

"Я думаю, что... / Я считаю, что..." I think the comma is mandatory in Russian, right? There's never a comma here in English: "I think... / I think that"

Good luck to me!

Or "Wish me luck!"

Feedback

Nicely written, good job!

My dreams

I often dream about my future.

I want to work in marketing or the finance sector.

OR "I want to work in the marketing or finance sector".

I want to buy a car and a home for me and my family.

Now I'm learning English because I want to go to University in Georgia.

I need to improve my listening and writing.

Every day I watch movies in English, write letters, and learn new English words.

In the future, I want to be a journalist.

I think, I can do it.

Good luck to me!

Feedback

Good luck to you!!

My dreams


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I often dream about my future.


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I want to work in marketing or finance sector.


I want to work in marketing or the finance sector.

OR "I want to work in the marketing or finance sector".

I want to work in marketing or finance sector.

I want to buy car and home for me and my family.


I want to buy a car and a home for me and my family.

I want to buy a car and home for me and my family.

Or "for my family and I" - this is more formal

Now I learning English because I want to go to University in Georgia.


Now I'm learning English because I want to go to University in Georgia.

Now, I'm learning English because I want to go to Uuniversity in Georgia.

I need to improve my listening and writing.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every day I watch movies in English, write letters, and learn new English words.


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Good luck to me!


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Good luck to me!

Or "Wish me luck!"

In the future, I want to be a journalist.


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I think, I can do it.


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I think, I can do it.

"Я думаю, что... / Я считаю, что..." I think the comma is mandatory in Russian, right? There's never a comma here in English: "I think... / I think that"

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