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July 8, 2022

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my dreamhouse

My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms the kitchen should be a ice mascine in the fridge a ice ceam bar and a turn table. The living room is a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn. The bathroom a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer the toilet . Four bedroom in diffrent colors the basement is a small fair and a room with two massage chair masseur and a tv to watch. The garden has a whirdpool with chairs and umbrella and a smootie machine. The house have the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .

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my dreamhouse

My dreamhouse is a villa with ten rooms. the kitchen should bhave an ice maschine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.

Be careful with articles like "a" and "an". These go before nouns. Also be careful with spelling

The living room is a big cinematheater room with a big screen and popcorn.

The bathroom has a big tub with a mirror and, a hand dryer the, and a toilet .

The verb "has" is very important. Again watch out for artcles like "the" and "a"

The house has Four bedrooms in different colors. the basement is a small fair andhas a room with two massage chair masseurs and a tv to watch.

"Fair" does not make sense here.

The garden has a whirdpool with chairs, and umbrella, and a smoothie machine.

"Pool" or "hot tub" is probably what you meant here.

The house haveis the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .

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Great job overall! Very nice detail. You have a great vocabulary.

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prisci

July 9, 2022

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thank you for the help

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huliamaria

July 9, 2022

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thank you for the help

of course! :D

mMy dDreamhouse

My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms the, a kitchen, there should be an ice maschine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.

The living room iswould have a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn.

The bathroom would have a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer near the toilet .

Four bedroom in different colors t. The basement iswould be a small fair(?) and a room with two massage chair masseurs, and a tv to watch.

I'm not sure what 'fair' was meant to be here.

The garden has would have a whirdlpool with chairs, and umbrella, and a smoothie machine.

The house have the colorwould be white with twenty windows and a balcony .

my dreamhouse


mMy dDreamhouse

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My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms the kitchen should be a ice mascine in the fridge a ice ceam bar and a turn table.


My dreamhouse is villa with ten rooms the, a kitchen, there should be an ice maschine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.

My dreamhouse is a villa with ten rooms. the kitchen should bhave an ice maschine in the fridge, an ice cream bar, and a turn table.

Be careful with articles like "a" and "an". These go before nouns. Also be careful with spelling

The living room is a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn.


The living room iswould have a big cinema with a big screen and popcorn.

The living room is a big cinematheater room with a big screen and popcorn.

The bathroom a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer the toilet .


The bathroom would have a big tub with a mirror and a hand dryer near the toilet .

The bathroom has a big tub with a mirror and, a hand dryer the, and a toilet .

The verb "has" is very important. Again watch out for artcles like "the" and "a"

Four bedroom in diffrent colors the basement is a small fair and a room with two massage chair masseur and a tv to watch.


Four bedroom in different colors t. The basement iswould be a small fair(?) and a room with two massage chair masseurs, and a tv to watch.

I'm not sure what 'fair' was meant to be here.

The house has Four bedrooms in different colors. the basement is a small fair andhas a room with two massage chair masseurs and a tv to watch.

"Fair" does not make sense here.

The garden has a whirdpool with chairs and umbrella and a smootie machine.


The garden has would have a whirdlpool with chairs, and umbrella, and a smoothie machine.

The garden has a whirdpool with chairs, and umbrella, and a smoothie machine.

"Pool" or "hot tub" is probably what you meant here.

The house have the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .


The house have the colorwould be white with twenty windows and a balcony .

The house haveis the color white with twenty windows and a balcony .

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