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Runa_67

March 6, 2025

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My dream

My dream is going to the U.S. someday.
This is because I want to eat very big hamburger.
When I go to the U.S. , I will make friends and we are going to go shopping.
I can’t wait to go in that country.


私の夢はいつかアメリカに行くことです。
理由は、私はとても大きいハンバーガーを食べたいからです。
アメリカに行ったら、私は友達を作り、買い物に行きます。
その国に行くのが待ちきれないです。

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My dream

My dream is goingto go to the U.S. someday.

This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger.

When I go to the U.S. , I wi'll make friends and we are going to'll go shopping together.

I can’t wait to go into that country.

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Good English! Mostly tense corrections and verb form corrections.

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Runa_67

March 6, 2025

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I’m glad you said so.I see.I’ll try to be careful!

My dream

My dream is goingto go to the U.S. someday.

This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger. (or I want to eat very big hamburgers).

When I go to the U.S. , I will make friends and we are going to'll go shopping (together).

I can’t wait to go into that country.

We always go "to" somewhere

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Well done

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Runa_67

March 6, 2025

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Thank you your hard work!

My dream is goingto go to the U.S. someday.

This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger.

When I go to the U.S. , I willhope to make friends and we are going to go shopping.

I can’t wait to go into that country.

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Hope you have a nice experience in the USA.

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Runa_67

March 6, 2025

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Thank you very much for your kindness!

This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger.

When I go to the U.S. , I will make friends and we are going towill go shopping.

I can’t wait to go into that country.

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Runa_67

March 6, 2025

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Thank you for correcting it as soon as possible!

My dream


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My dream is going to the U.S. someday.


My dream is goingto go to the U.S. someday.

My dream is goingto go to the U.S. someday.

My dream is goingto go to the U.S. someday.

This is because I want to eat very big hamburger.


This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger.

This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger.

This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger. (or I want to eat very big hamburgers).

This is because I want to eat a very big hamburger.

When I go to the U.S. , I will make friends and we are going to go shopping.


When I go to the U.S. , I will make friends and we are going towill go shopping.

When I go to the U.S. , I willhope to make friends and we are going to go shopping.

When I go to the U.S. , I will make friends and we are going to'll go shopping (together).

When I go to the U.S. , I wi'll make friends and we are going to'll go shopping together.

I can’t wait to go in that country.


I can’t wait to go into that country.

I can’t wait to go into that country.

I can’t wait to go into that country.

We always go "to" somewhere

I can’t wait to go into that country.

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