March 5, 2023
My Dream
I was waiting in line for being photographed, there were kpop idols at my side. Once it was my turn, I posed. The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body for the body of a fish. There was Jim Kwik behind the camerawoman, so before leaving I said to him "Hello! I like your book."
After that, I walked to the amusement park. There was giant games. I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to scape. In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie catched me down.
Then, I played another game. It consisted of coconuts that you have to kick without falling.
My Dream
I was waiting in line for beingto be photographed, and there were kpop idols at my side.
わー！
Once it was my turn, I posed.
The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body forinto the body of a fish.
There was Jim Kwik was behind the camerawoman, so, before I leavingft, I said to him, "Hello!
I like your book.
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After that, I walked to the amusement park.
There wasere giant games.
I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape.
In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie catchhased me down.
Then, I played another game.
It consisted of coconuts that you haved to kick without falling.
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わー！面白い夢ですね。上手に書けています！
March 6, 2023
ありがとうございました。(^o^)
My Dream
I was waiting in line for beingto be photographed, there were kpop idols at my side.
Once it was my turn, I posed.
The camerawoman edited the photo and changed my body for the bodyto look like that of a fish.
Sophisticated!
There was Jim Kwik behind the camerawoman, so before leaving I said to him "Hello!” to him.
“I like your book.”
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After that, I walked to thean amusement park.
There wasere giant games.
I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape.
In order to do that, I climbed these/some giant stairs, but a zombie catchhased me down.
Depending on the context, you can use some (colloquial).
Then, I played another game.
It consisted of coconuts that you haved to kick without falling down.
Had because it is past tense!
Adding the down creates more coherency. We only don’t have it when it’s urgent e.g. imperative voice:
“It fell down.”
“It’s going to fall (down)!” “Be careful, or it’ll fall (down)!”
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What an interesting dream 😂 I was a bit tired today of course I am happy to provide detailed explanations for any queries you may have.
March 5, 2023
Thanks! I really appreciate them. :)
I was waiting in line for beingto be photographed, there were kpop idols at my side.
There wasere giant games.
I entered a zombie game in which zombies pursued me and I had to escape.
In order to do that, I climbed giant stairs, but a zombie catchhased me down.
caught me also works, it depends whether you mean the zombie was chasing you or did catch you. Caught means did catch
March 5, 2023
Thank you so very much!
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It consisted of coconuts that you have to kick without falling. It consisted of coconuts that you ha Had because it is past tense! Adding the down creates more coherency. We only don’t have it when it’s urgent e.g. imperative voice: “It fell down.” “It’s going to fall (down)!” “Be careful, or it’ll fall (down)!” It consisted of coconuts that you ha |
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