Oct. 22, 2025
My dream
Hello, My name is Zoé, and I have one dream.
It's my biggest dream, and maybe he'll never become reality.
But, I don't care.
I'm just going to try to realize it.
6 years ago, I've been in New-zealand for almost one month.
And it was the best period in my life.
I've met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with Maori.
When I come back in France, It was like i forgot my soul in the Kiwi's country.
At this moment, my first goal is to go again, and try to live here for the rest of my life.
So, I will come back again next year for one year.
Maybe I'll refound my soul. And I found a solution to stay more time.
I know it's almost impossible. But if I don't try, i regret it.
Perhaps life will help me !
However, I think i'll pass an amazing year in this country.
My dDream
Titles follow special capitalization rules
Hello,. My name is Zoé, and I have onea dream.
Saying "one dream" is insisting on the fact that it is a singular dream.
It's my biggest dream, and maybe he'it will never become reality.
He/She is nearly always reserved for animals that can be defined as male/female
But, I don't care.
I'm just going to try to realize it.
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"I've been" is when you want to say that you were doing this in the past and are still doing so today - not for when it has already ended. Example: I've been studying art for six years = six years ago I began studying art, and I am still doing so today.
And it was the best period inof my life.
I've met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with the Maori.
When I coame back into France, Iit was like i forgoI left my soul in the Kiwi's country of the Kiwis.
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This is to say that your current goal is to do another travel, but your overall goal is to move permanently (and maybe this won't be possible by the end of your travel stay)
So, I will come(go back again/ return) next year for one year.
"Again" is redundant with "go back"
Maybe I'll refouind my soul.
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Solutions are for problems, I would say "way" in this context
I know it's almost impossible.
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Perhaps life will help me !
There are no spaces before question or exclamation marks
However, I think iI'll passhave an amazing year in this country.
Feedback
Great job.
It may not be easy, but I'm sure it's very possible. I had a very close Kiwi friend (past tense because he has sadly passed away) and he was always very proud of his country, especially the beautiful landscape.
Oct. 22, 2025
Thank you for the correction and the encouragement.
Sorry for your friend.
Were you able to visit him in his country?
Oct. 22, 2025
No, unfortunately it wasn't possible for me to travel during that time. Maybe one day. My husband would love to go, but I really hate flying (and it's so far away!)
Oct. 22, 2025
Aha, effectively, it's so far ! It takes me approximately 30 hours to go there. How long would it take for you?
Oct. 22, 2025
At the time, I was in California, so it would have been at least 14 hours to visit my friend. Now that I'm in France, Google says 26 hours minimum to NZ 💀💀💀
Oct. 22, 2025
Ahaha, but you have a good choice of country not far from France, and without plane. Are you staying in France?
Oct. 22, 2025
I moved to France in 2022 because my husband is French. :) I'm personally happy just to explore new areas of France! I do want to visit many other European countries, too. But my husband is adventurous and loves going to far/exotic places
Oct. 22, 2025
Oh, ok! I hope you are happy in France! It's not difficult to communicate with others or meet people?
Which part of France are you ?
And what countries have you already visited?
Oct. 22, 2025
Yes, I love France. We're in Bourgogne, what about you? I've visited Canada several times from the US, and from France, I've gone to Germany and Switzerland very briefly.
My French is good enough for daily communication, even at work. I know this sounds bad, but I avoid people, so I haven't made friends outside of my belle-famille. I know that I should, but it's hard to fight your nature.
Oct. 22, 2025
Oh, I have never been on this part of France! It's pretty? I'm on the south of France, not far from Spain. Here, we have the sea, the mountains and the sun. You should come in Spain, it's a little bit exotic for your husband, and you don't need plane. :)
Oh, I very wand to go in Canada. In US, I went in Miami because my brother live there.
What is your work?
Oh, I understand you, my husband avoid people too ahah! I don't think it's bad. If you don"t need that and if your are in peace with this part of you, it's ok.
If you want, you can answer me in French. :)
Oct. 23, 2025
Oui, j'adore la Bourgogne. J'ai entendu dire par des Français qu'elle est considérée comme « isolée », mais je ne la trouve pas ainsi. J'ai toujours vécu dans des villes très peuplées aux États-Unis, et je ne veux plus de ça. Même visiter Paris me stresse.
Tu vis près du Pays basque, peut-être ? J'aimerais visiter cette zone de la France, ainsi que l'Espagne.
Le paysage du Canada est magnifique. Tout doit être écrit en français, ça peut t'aider. :) Est-ce que la Floride t'a plu ?
J'étais scientifique (domaine pharmaceutique), mais j'ai quitté en avril. J'adore la science, mais je ne pense pas pouvoir travailler dans un environnement professionnel « normal ». C'est un sujet compliqué. À la place, je prévois de créer ma propre petite entreprise en tant que pâtissière.
Normally, conversations don't go on and on like this on this website in replies; the focus is correcting the main text and moving on. If you want, you can share an email or a chat app handle (e.g., Discord)? I'd be happy to keep chatting.
Oct. 23, 2025
Oh, i'm ok to share a chat app ! Are you ok for discord? Because, I need to speak english, not just write, and I think it's possible on discord? I dowloaded this app yesterday, so I don't know how does it work...
Oct. 23, 2025
Sure! I'm no expert, but it's pretty popular and easy to use. You can use it on mobile (phone) or on PC which is nice. It can be used for voice or text chat. You can go to "Add Friend" and search my ID : amethystsorciere
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My dream My Titles follow special capitalization rules |
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When I come back in France, It was like i forgot my soul in the Kiwi's country. When I c |
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At this moment, my first goal is to go again, and try to live here for the rest of my life. At this moment, my first goal is to go This is to say that your current goal is to do another travel, but your overall goal is to move permanently (and maybe this won't be possible by the end of your travel stay) |
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So, I will come back again next year for one year. So, I will "Again" is redundant with "go back" |
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Maybe I'll refound my soul. Maybe I'll ref |
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And I found a solution to stay more time. And I found a Solutions are for problems, I would say "way" in this context |
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I know it's almost impossible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But if I don't try, i regret it. But if I don't try, |
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Perhaps life will help me ! Perhaps life will help me There are no spaces before question or exclamation marks |
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However, I think i'll pass an amazing year in this country. However, I think |
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Hello, My name is Zoé, and I have one dream. Hello Saying "one dream" is insisting on the fact that it is a singular dream. |
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It's my biggest dream, and maybe he'll never become reality. It's my biggest dream, and maybe He/She is nearly always reserved for animals that can be defined as male/female |
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But, I don't care. But |
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I'm just going to try to realize it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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6 years ago, I've been in New-zealand for almost one month.
Stylistic subject, but usually numbers 1 - 10 are preferred to be spelled out in writing. "I've been" is when you want to say that you were doing this in the past and are still doing so today - not for when it has already ended. Example: I've been studying art for six years = six years ago I began studying art, and I am still doing so today. |
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And it was the best period in my life. And it was the best period |
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I've met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with Maori. I |
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