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Yukira08

Aug. 9, 2025

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My Dream

I really want to improve my English. Because I want to study MBG in the future. And of course I want to study in abroad. I can't say my English is really bad but it's not that good too. Thay's why I install that app. I hope I can improve my English skills.

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My Ddream

I really want to improve my English.

Because I want to study MBG in the future.

And of course I want to study in abroad.

I can't say my English is really bad but it's not that good tooeither.

Thay's whyt’s the reason I installed that app.

I hope I can improve my English skills.level of English.

Because I want to study MBG in the future.

make this line and the previous line all one sentence - "because" is a connective which means it connects two phrases together.

And, of course, I want to study in abroad.

I cawouldn't say my English is reallythat bad but it's not that good tooeither.

Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

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Amazing job! A few errors but mainly just making it sound more natural :)

My Dream

I really want to improve my English.

BI really want to improve my English because I want to study MBG in the future.

"Because" is a kind of word called a conjunction. (Other conjunctions include "but," "and," "when," and "since.") In formal writing, a conjunction should connect two clauses. It's safest to put a word like "and," "but," or "because" in the middle of a sentence, though what you wrote is OK in a casual context.

And of course I want to study in abroad.

Again, starting the sentence with "and" is more casual, though it's OK.

I can't say my English is really bad, but it's not that good tooeither.

Great job with a tricky construction.

Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

You would say "that app" to talk about a different app than the one we're both using. (like あのアプリ)

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Nicely done!

My Dream

I really want to improve my English.

Because I want to study MBG in the future.

And of course I want to study in abroad.

I can't say my English is really bad but it's not that good too.

Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

I hope I can improve my English skills.

Feedback

Chase your dream! You got this! <3

I really want to improve my English, because I want to study MBG in the future.

Because I want to study MBG in the future.

This isn't a full sentence, so it should be added on to the other one

I can't say my English is really badterrible but it's not that good toogreat either.

Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

My Dream


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My Ddream

I really want to improve my English.


I really want to improve my English, because I want to study MBG in the future.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because I want to study MBG in the future.


Because I want to study MBG in the future.

This isn't a full sentence, so it should be added on to the other one

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

BI really want to improve my English because I want to study MBG in the future.

"Because" is a kind of word called a conjunction. (Other conjunctions include "but," "and," "when," and "since.") In formal writing, a conjunction should connect two clauses. It's safest to put a word like "and," "but," or "because" in the middle of a sentence, though what you wrote is OK in a casual context.

Because I want to study MBG in the future.

make this line and the previous line all one sentence - "because" is a connective which means it connects two phrases together.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And of course I want to study in abroad.


And of course I want to study in abroad.

And of course I want to study in abroad.

Again, starting the sentence with "and" is more casual, though it's OK.

And, of course, I want to study in abroad.

And of course I want to study in abroad.

I can't say myb English is really bad but it's not that good tto.


Thay's why I install that app.


Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

You would say "that app" to talk about a different app than the one we're both using. (like あのアプリ)

Thayt's why I installed thatis app.

Thay's whyt’s the reason I installed that app.

I hope I can improve my English skills.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope I can improve my English skills.level of English.

I can't say my English is really bad but it's not that good too.


I can't say my English is really badterrible but it's not that good toogreat either.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can't say my English is really bad, but it's not that good tooeither.

Great job with a tricky construction.

I cawouldn't say my English is reallythat bad but it's not that good tooeither.

I can't say my English is really bad but it's not that good tooeither.

I can't say myb English is really bad but it's not that good too.


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