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toshinou_kyouko

Nov. 12, 2022

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My dogs

I've got two cute corgies.
The oldest one is Kora and she's almost two years old. The youngest one is Ada and she's around one and a half years old.
Kora has got three colour fur (black, white, ginger) and Ada is two colour corgi (ginger and white). I didn't actually know that there's three colour corgies before I started to look for one to adapt. Usually corgies are known be two colour.
We go for a walk twice a day. In the morning and in the evening. I usually take one of them for the walk and my girlfriend takes the second one. We can't really walk together because the youngest dog starts to be agressive towards the oldest one if we meet other dogs on our way. This is a huge problem I don't know how to solve yet.

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I usually take one of them out for thea walk and my girlfriend takes the second oneother on separate walks.

We can't really walk together because the youngest dog starts to be aggressive towards the oldestr one if wethey meet other dogs on ouralong the way.

This is a huge problem that I don't know how to solve yet.

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Either are acceptable

Kora has got three tri-coloured fur (black, white, ginger) and Ada is two a bicolour corgi (ginger and white).

Color is the american spelling and colour is the U.K. spelling.

I didn't actually know that there's three were tri-coloured corgies beforeuntil I started to look for one to adaopt.

Usually corgies are known be two bicoloured.

We go for a walk twice a day.

Could also say 'we go for walks twice a day.'

InOnce the morning and once in the evening.

I usually take one of them for the walk and my girlfriend takes the secondother one.

We can't really walk them together because the youngest dog starts to bewill start getting aggressive towards the oldest one if we meet other dogs on our way.

This is a huge problem and I don't know how to it solve yet.

I've got two cute corgies.

This is informal. You can also say 'I have two cute corgies'.

The oldest one is Kora and she's almost two years old.

The youngest one is Ada and she's around one and a half years old.

Correct, or you can say "she's about one and a half years old".

Kora has gotfur with three colour furs (black, white, ginger) and Ada ishas fur with two colour corgis (ginger and white).

Color = American spelling
Colour = Australian spelling

I didn't actually know that there's three colour corgies before I started to look for one to adaopt.

Usually corgies are known bto have two colour furs.

I usually take one of them for the walk and my girlfriend takes the second oneother on separate walks .

We can't really walk together because the youngest dog starts to be aggressive towards the oldestr one if we meet other dogs on ourthe way.

This is a huge problem that I don't know how to solve yet.

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This is a great topic, I love dogs! You're doing great!

In the morning and in the evening.


InOnce the morning and once in the evening.

My dogs


I've got two cute corgies.


I've got have two cute corgies.

Either are acceptable

I've got two cute corgies.

This is informal. You can also say 'I have two cute corgies'.

I've got have two cute corgies.

The oldest one is Kora and she's almost two years old.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The youngest one is Ada and she's around one and a half years old.


The youngest one is Ada and she's around one and a half years old.

Correct, or you can say "she's about one and a half years old".

Kora has got three colour fur (black, white, ginger) and Ada is two colour corgi (ginger and white).


Kora has got three tri-coloured fur (black, white, ginger) and Ada is two a bicolour corgi (ginger and white).

Color is the american spelling and colour is the U.K. spelling.

Kora has gotfur with three colour furs (black, white, ginger) and Ada ishas fur with two colour corgis (ginger and white).

Color = American spelling Colour = Australian spelling

Kora has gotfur with three colour furs (black, white, ginger) and Ada is twohas fur with three colour corgis (ginger and white).

I didn't actually know that there's three colour corgies before I started to look for one to adapt.


I didn't actually know that there's three were tri-coloured corgies beforeuntil I started to look for one to adaopt.

I didn't actually know that there's three colour corgies before I started to look for one to adaopt.

I didn't actually know that there'sActually, I didn't know that corgies with three fur colour corgiess existed before I started to look for one to adaopt.

Usually corgies are known be two colour.


Usually corgies are known be two bicoloured.

Usually corgies are known bto have two colour furs.

Usually corgies are known bto have two colour furs.

We go for a walk twice a day.


We go for a walk twice a day.

Could also say 'we go for walks twice a day.'

I usually take one of them for the walk and my girlfriend takes the second one.


I usually take one of them for the walk and my girlfriend takes the secondother one.

I usually take one of them for the walk and my girlfriend takes the second oneother on separate walks .

I usually take one of them out for thea walk and my girlfriend takes the second oneother on separate walks.

We can't really walk together because the youngest dog starts to be agressive towards the oldest one if we meet other dogs on our way.


We can't really walk them together because the youngest dog starts to bewill start getting aggressive towards the oldest one if we meet other dogs on our way.

We can't really walk together because the youngest dog starts to be aggressive towards the oldestr one if we meet other dogs on ourthe way.

We can't really walk together because the youngest dog starts to be aggressive towards the oldestr one if wethey meet other dogs on ouralong the way.

This is a huge problem I don't know how to solve yet.


This is a huge problem that I don't know how to solve yet.

This is a huge problem and I don't know how to it solve yet.

This is a huge problem that I don't know how to solve yet.

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