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July 29, 2024

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My dog

My dog's name is Tuzik and he's a very good dog. His cjoat is a light yellow colour and his eyes are deep and thoughtful. He likes to walk alone. Unfortunately it doesn't know any commands. But that doesn't stop him being a favourite. The charming dog loves us. And we love his.


Моего пса зовут Тузик и он очень хороший пёс. Его шерсть светло желтого цвета а глаза глубокие, задумчивые. Он любит гулять один. К сожалению он не знает команд. Но от этого он не перестает быть любимым. Очаровательный пес любит нас. А мы любим его.

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My dog

My dog's name is Tuzik and he's a very good dog.

His cjoat is a light yellow colour, and his eyes are deep and thoughtful.

He likes to walk alone.

Unfortunately ithe doesn't know any commands.,

Bbut that doesn't stop him being a favourite.

The charming dog loves us.,

And we love hism.

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Nicely done!

My dDog

My dog's name is Tuzik and he's a very goodn awesome dog.

I used a synonym of good to enrich your text.

His cjoat ie has a light yellow colour and hat. His eyes are deep and thoughtful.

He likes to walk alone.

Unfortunately it, he doesn't know any commands.

I made sure to use the he pronoun for consistent usage.

ButHowever, that doesn't stop him being a one of my favorites/favourites.

I put the American and British spellings of the word, favorite. I also replaced the word with however to add more variety in the sentence structure of your text.

The charming dog loves us.

And wWe love hism back.

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He sounds like a marvelous dog.

My dog's name is Tuzik and he's a very good dog.

His cjoatfur is a light yellow colour and his eyes are deep and thoughtful.

Unfortunately, it doesn't know any commands.

It is also normal do refer to a pet by the pronouns he and she.

And we love hism.

My dog's name is Tuzik and he's a very good dog.

His cjoatfur is a light yellow colour and his eyes are deep and thoughtful.

when describing colors, you don't need to use the word 'color'
examples:
'his eyes are blue'
'mark just bought a new red car'

He likes to walk alone.

Unfortunately ithe doesn't know any commands.

no need to suddenly switch to 'it' when you have established that the dog is a 'he'

But that doesn't stop him from being amy favourite.

The charming dog loves us.

And we love hism.

or if you want to keep 'his' then you could say:
'...his eyes'
'...his smile'
etc

My dog


My dDog

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My dog's name is Tuzik and he's a very good dog.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My dog's name is Tuzik and he's a very goodn awesome dog.

I used a synonym of good to enrich your text.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

His cjoat is a light yellow colour and his eyes are deep and thoughtful.


His cjoatfur is a light yellow colour and his eyes are deep and thoughtful.

when describing colors, you don't need to use the word 'color' examples: 'his eyes are blue' 'mark just bought a new red car'

His cjoatfur is a light yellow colour and his eyes are deep and thoughtful.

His cjoat ie has a light yellow colour and hat. His eyes are deep and thoughtful.

His cjoat is a light yellow colour, and his eyes are deep and thoughtful.

He likes to walk alone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Unfortunately it doesn't know any commands.


Unfortunately ithe doesn't know any commands.

no need to suddenly switch to 'it' when you have established that the dog is a 'he'

Unfortunately, it doesn't know any commands.

It is also normal do refer to a pet by the pronouns he and she.

Unfortunately it, he doesn't know any commands.

I made sure to use the he pronoun for consistent usage.

Unfortunately ithe doesn't know any commands.,

But that doesn't stop him being a favourite.


But that doesn't stop him from being amy favourite.

ButHowever, that doesn't stop him being a one of my favorites/favourites.

I put the American and British spellings of the word, favorite. I also replaced the word with however to add more variety in the sentence structure of your text.

Bbut that doesn't stop him being a favourite.

The charming dog loves us.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The charming dog loves us.,

And we love his.


And we love hism.

or if you want to keep 'his' then you could say: '...his eyes' '...his smile' etc

And we love hism.

And wWe love hism back.

And we love hism.

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