June 22, 2023
My diary 1
My diary is in English and before I'll write this story there, I'd like you to check my grammar. Thanks.
After my recent heartbreak I told to all my friends that I was not going to fall in love with anyone any time soon. How wrong I was!
A month ago I got to know an attractive girl with an old money vibe from my English class. She used to compliment me quite often during my course and we've had a few smalltalks. I remember how once after we finished our lessons, I was walking out of the classroom with my another friend and suddenly I heard someone calling me by my name. That was her. We already were in the hallway so I stopped to listen to what she was going to tell me. She was outstretching a hairpin and telling me how she saw it falling from my bag. I told her it wasn't mine (actually, I stopped using all those hairpins and elastics decades ago because my hair is quite short), but her acting was pretty good (well, I believe it was an acting considering the fact how much attention she gave me, yk, compliments and so on) and she continued to insist that she saw it falling, so I told her again that it's not mine and went home. A few lessons later I tried to do the same she did, to compliment her first. So when our class ended, I wanted to tell her that she has an unique style, but I was so nervous so I told her that I like her lipstick shade lmao. After that I couldn't even walk like a normal person because my legs were trembling and in that moment I realised I have a kind of attraction for her. A few weeks later, when our English course was coming to an end, I took my heart and asked for her contacts. She gave me her IG and suggested to walk together to the bus stop. I agreed. During our walk we had a pretty good conversation, she was really outgoing and talkative. She even asked if we could go and have a coffee, I really wanted to but I had to refuse because I was hurrying to get home. I remember how excited I was after this walk, so I called my friend and I was literally screaming while I was telling her what happened. We didn't chat very much until June 15 because she had to prepare for her exams and I just don't like disturbing people. After she passed her exams, we started texting more often. You know, I rarely do get to meet someone in real life who is as interesting as her, which is one of the reasons why I am so anti-sociable. Anyway, I genuinely like spending time with her, partly because she is really talkative as I said and I do not have to make her talk (I had this problem with other people I was interested in). I often have a feeling like we are so similar but at the same time we are so different. I had never met anyone like her. My feelings for her started growing and I felt like now it's more than a simple attraction, it's a crush. But this thought made me feel more hopeless because we live in a very homophobic country and I knew that most likely I have zero chances + she's going to move away to another country before autumn.
My diary is in English and before I'll write this story there, I'd like you to check my grammar.
Thanks.
After my recent heartbreak I told to all my friends that I was not going to fall in love with anyone any time soon.
She used to compliment me quite often during my course and we've had a few smalltalk made smalltalk a few times.
I remember how once, after we had finished our lessons, I was walking out of the classroom with my another friend and I suddenly I heard someone calling me by my name.
ThaIt was her.
We were already were in the hallway so I stopped to listen to what she was going to tell me.
She was outstretchingheld out a hairpin and telling me howold me that she saw it falling fromout of my bag.
Can also say 'she held a hairpin in her outstretched hand' if you would like to use that word
I told her it wasn't mine (actually, I stopped using all those hairpins and elastic-bands decades ago because my hair is quite short), but her acting was pretty good (well, I believe it was an acting considering the fact how much attention she gave me, yk, compliments and so on) and she continued to insist that she saw it falling, so I told her again that it's no wasn't mine and went home.
A few lessons later I tried to do the same thing that she did, to compliment her first.
So when our class ended, I wanted to tell her after class that she hasd an unique style, but I was stoo nervous so instead I told her that I liked her lipstick shade lmao.
After that I couldn't even barely walk like a normal person because my legs were trembling, and in that moment I realised I have a kind ofwas attraction fored to her.
A few weeks later, whenas our English course was coming to an end, I took my heart and asked for her contact details.
Not sure what you mean by 'took my heart'. That's not really a phrase but maybe if you explain what you were trying to say I could make a suggestion
She gave me her IG and suggested tohat we walk together to the bus stop.
I agreed.
During our walk we had a pretty good conversation,; she was really outgoing and talkative.
She even asked if we could go and have a coffee,. I really wanted to but I had to refuse because I was hurrying to get home.
I remember how excited I was after thise walk, so; I called my friend and I was literpractically screaming while I was telling her what happened.
After she passed her exams, we started texting more often.
You know, I rarely do get to meet someone in real life who is as interesting as her, which is one of the reasons why I am so anti-sociablel.
I often have a feeling likethat we are so similar but at the same time we are so different.
I had never met anyone like her.
My feelings for her started growing and I felt like now it' was more than a simple attraction, it' was a crush.
But this thought made me feel morerather hopeless because we live in a very homophobic country, and I knew that most likely I have zero chances +it would be unlikely to go anywhere since she's going to move away to another country before autumn.
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Good text, well explained!
June 22, 2023
thanks
June 22, 2023
A few weeks later, whenas our English course was coming to an end, I took my heart and asked for her contact details.
I meant that I tried to be more confident.
June 22, 2023
I meant that I tried to be more confident.
like I took all my courage, idk
June 25, 2023
like I took all my courage, idk
Ah yes I understand. Maybe it sounds a bit dramatic but you could say that you gathered/ plucked up the courage to do something
June 25, 2023
Ah yes I understand. Maybe it sounds a bit dramatic but you could say that you gathered/ plucked up the courage to do something
yeah, I guess that is what I wanted to say. Thanks a lot
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My diary. My new crush. |
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My diary is in English and before I'll write this story there, I'd like you to check my grammar. My diary is in English and before I |
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Thanks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After my recent heartbreak I told to all my friends that I was not going to fall in love with anyone any time soon. After my recent heartbreak I told |
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How wrong I was! |
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A month ago I got to know an attractive girl with an old money vibe from my English class. |
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She used to compliment me quite often during my course and we've had a few smalltalks. She used to compliment me quite often during my course and we |
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I remember how once after we finished our lessons, I was walking out of the classroom with my another friend and suddenly I heard someone calling me by my name. I remember how once, after we had finished our lesson |
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That was her.
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We already were in the hallway so I stopped to listen to her. |
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She was outstretching a hairpin and telling me how she saw it falling from my bag or overcoat. |
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I told her it wasn't mine (actually, I stopped using all those hairpins and elastics decades ago because my hair is quite short), but her acting was pretty good (well, I believe it was an acting considering the fact how much attention she gave me, yk, compliments and etc) and she continued to insist that she saw it falling, so I told her again that it's not mine and went home. |
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A few lessons later I tried to do the same she did, to compliment her first. A few lessons later I tried to do the same thing that she did, to compliment her first. |
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So after our classes I wanted to tell that she has an unique style, but I was so stressed so I told her that I like her lipstick shade lmao. |
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After that I couldn't even walk like a normal person because my legs were trembling and in that moment I realised I have a kind of attraction for her. After that I could |
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When our English course was coming to an end, I took my heart and asked for her contacts. |
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She gave me her IG and suggested to walk together to the bus stop. She gave me her IG and suggested t |
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I agreed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During our walk we had a pretty good conversation, she was really outgoing and talkative. During our walk we had a pretty good conversation |
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She even asked if we could to go and drink coffee, I really wanted to but I had to refuse because I was hurrying to get home. |
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We didn't chat very much until June 15 because she had to prepare for her exams and I just don't like disturbing people. |
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After she passed her exams, we started texting more often. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You know, I rarely do get to meet someone in real life who is interesting as her, which is one of the reasons why I am so anti-sociable. |
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Anyway, I genuinely like spending time with her, partly because she is really talkative as I said and I do not have to make her talk (I had this problem with other people I was interested in). |
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I often have a feeling like we are so similar but at the same time we are so different. I often have a feeling |
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I had never met anyone like her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My feelings for her started growing and I felt like now it's more than a simple attraction, it's a crush. My feelings for her started growing and I felt like now it |
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But this thought made me feel more hopeless because we live in a very homophobic country and I knew that most likely I have zero chances + she's going to move away before autumn. |
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My diary 1 |
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We already were in the hallway so I stopped to listen to what she was going to tell me. We were already |
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She was outstretching a hairpin and telling me how she saw it falling from my bag. She Can also say 'she held a hairpin in her outstretched hand' if you would like to use that word |
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A few weeks later, when our English course was coming to an end, I took my heart and asked for her contacts. A few weeks later, Not sure what you mean by 'took my heart'. That's not really a phrase but maybe if you explain what you were trying to say I could make a suggestion |
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She even asked if we could go and have a coffee, I really wanted to but I had to refuse because I was hurrying to get home. She even asked if we could go and have a coffee |
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You know, I rarely do get to meet someone in real life who is as interesting as her, which is one of the reasons why I am so anti-sociable. You know, I rarely |
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I told her it wasn't mine (actually, I stopped using all those hairpins and elastics decades ago because my hair is quite short), but her acting was pretty good (well, I believe it was an acting considering the fact how much attention she gave me, yk, compliments and so on) and she continued to insist that she saw it falling, so I told her again that it's not mine and went home. I told her it wasn't mine (actually, I stopped using |
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So when our class ended, I wanted to tell her that she has an unique style, but I was so nervous so I told her that I like her lipstick shade lmao.
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I remember how excited I was after this walk, so I called my friend and I was literally screaming while I was telling her what happened. I remember how excited I was after th |
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But this thought made me feel more hopeless because we live in a very homophobic country and I knew that most likely I have zero chances + she's going to move to another country before autumn. |
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But this thought made me feel more hopeless because we live in a very homophobic country and I knew that most likely I have zero chances + she's going to move away to another country before autumn. But this thought made me feel |
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