Aug. 27, 2025
My diary
Today get up at 6:20 am, I did a lit bit lazy but I get up bed at 6:30 am them I made the bed, I made the lunch, I prepared fried eggs with cheese and a americano, after a made a hot bath at 7:00 am I dressed with a formal outfit, them I put make up and I went out take a transmilenio.
In transmilenio was quickly, I arrive to office at 9:00 am and I checked my schedule and my mail, at 10:00 am I ate a delicius pinaple and that's it.
Hoy me levante a las 6:20 am, hice un poco de pereza, me levante a las 6:30 am después tendí la cama, me hice el desayuno, prepare huevos fritos con queso y un americano, después me tome un baño caliente a las 7:00 am me vestí formal luego me maquille y salí a tomar el transmilenio
En transmilenio fue rápido, llegue a la oficina at 9:00 am revise mi calendario y el mail a las 10:00 am comí una deliciosa piña y es todo.
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Take a look at using commas for lists and avoiding run-on sentences.
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Feedback
Good writing, just work on punctuation, lists, and prepositions.
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My diary |
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Today get up at 6:20 am, I did a lit bit lazy but I get up bed at 6:30 am them I made the bed, I made the lunch, I prepared fried eggs with cheese and a americano, after a made a hot bath at 7:00 am I dressed with a formal outfit, them I put make up and I went out take a transmilenio. Today Take a look at using commas for lists and avoiding run-on sentences. |
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In transmilenio was quickly, I arrive to office at 9:00 am and I checked my schedule and my mail, at 10:00 am I ate a delicius pinaple and that's it.
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