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zaozao

Nov. 14, 2022

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My Diary

11.13
We are live streaming lectures these days because of the pandemic. Remote learning, certainly, is convenient for both teachers and students. But I found it difficult to be 100% concentrated during the class. As the library has been closed, my study schedule was disrupted.

I tried to find an empty classroom to study but I ended up watching a lot of short videos there. I was supposed to think things over because I actually hated to waste time on useless stuffs, like scrolling through my phone for a long while.

So what should I do? First, get my priorities right. Prioritize difficult tasks that I don’t want to start with immediately. Second, set timer when I get started on a task and try to finish it in a short time. Third, remember to relax and appreciate things around you.

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My Diary

11.13

We are live streaming lectures these days because of the pandemic.

Remote learning, is certainly, is convenient for both the teachers and the students.

But I found it difficult to be 100% concentrated fully during the class.

As the library has been closed, my study schedule whas been disrupted.

I tried to find an empty classroom in which to study but I ended up watching a lot of short videos there.

I was supposed to think things over because I actually hated to waste time on useless stuffs,things like scrolling through my phone for a long whiltime.

So what should I do?

First, get my priorities right.

Prioritize difficult tasks that I don’t want to start with immediately.

Second, set a timer when I get started on a task and, I try to finish it in a short time.

Third, remember to relax and appreciate the things around you.

Smell the roses is an idiomatic way of saying relax and appreciate the things around you.

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zaozao

Nov. 16, 2022

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Third, remember to relax and appreciate the things around you.

Ohh got it! Thank you for correcting!

My Diary

11.13

We are live streaming lectures these days because of the pandemic.

Remote learning, certainly, is convenient for both teachers and students.

But I found it difficult to be 100% concentrated during the class.

As the library has been closed, my study schedule was disrupted.

I tried to find an empty classroom to study but I ended up just watching a lot of shortbunch of videos on there internet.

Your original was ok, but this sounds more natural.

I was supposed to think things ovintended to be productive while I was there because I actually hated to wasteing time on useless stuffs, like spending a bunch of time scrolling through my phone for a long while.

So what should I do?

First, I need to get my priorities rstraight.

PI need to prioritize difficult tasks that I don’t want to start with immediately.

Second, I need to set a timer when I get started on a task and try to finish it in a short timequickly.

Third, I need to remember to relax and appreciate the things around youme.

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It's so hard to get started on something sometimes since life has so many distractions. I know what exactly what you mean here.

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zaozao

Nov. 15, 2022

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Yeah that’s why I am trying hard to cultivate an ability to be focused quickly. And thank you for correcting this!

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We are live streaming lectures these days because of the pandemic.


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Remote learning, certainly, is convenient for both teachers and students.


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Remote learning, is certainly, is convenient for both the teachers and the students.

But I found it difficult to be 100% concentrated during the class.


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But I found it difficult to be 100% concentrated fully during the class.

As the library has been closed, my study schedule was disrupted.


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As the library has been closed, my study schedule whas been disrupted.

I tried to find an empty classroom to study but I ended up watching a lot of short videos there.


I tried to find an empty classroom to study but I ended up just watching a lot of shortbunch of videos on there internet.

Your original was ok, but this sounds more natural.

I tried to find an empty classroom in which to study but I ended up watching a lot of short videos there.

I was supposed to think things over because I actually hated to waste time on useless stuffs, like scrolling through my phone for a long while.


I was supposed to think things ovintended to be productive while I was there because I actually hated to wasteing time on useless stuffs, like spending a bunch of time scrolling through my phone for a long while.

I was supposed to think things over because I actually hated to waste time on useless stuffs,things like scrolling through my phone for a long whiltime.

So what should I do?


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First, get my priorities right.


First, I need to get my priorities rstraight.

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Prioritize difficult tasks that I don’t want to start with immediately.


PI need to prioritize difficult tasks that I don’t want to start with immediately.

Prioritize difficult tasks that I don’t want to start with immediately.

Second, set timer when I get started on a task and try to finish it in a short time.


Second, I need to set a timer when I get started on a task and try to finish it in a short timequickly.

Second, set a timer when I get started on a task and, I try to finish it in a short time.

Third, remember to relax and appreciate things around you.


Third, I need to remember to relax and appreciate the things around youme.

Third, remember to relax and appreciate the things around you.

Smell the roses is an idiomatic way of saying relax and appreciate the things around you.

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