Oct. 13, 2021
When I need chicken breast I do the following: First, If I am shirt-less, I put on a shirt. I take my bike, open the door, and being at the threshold I make sure that I have my bike lock's keys and my mask (here for entering to a supermarket it is necessary to use a mask). After that I bike to a supermarket that is near my house. I stop some meters before the entrance, at a place where a big and long guardrail lies, and lock my bike to the rail or to one of its pots. I enter to the supermarket, go directly to the butcher shop. If there is someone, I just stand in line after him; if not, I ask the butcher for one big chicken breast or more (depending on the day and the money I get). This butcher shop has its own employees and is, in some sense, separate from the supermarket, but still you should pay for your order in the supermarket's cash register. I go to the registers and select the one with less people or less things to be pay (because sometimes there is just a person with a big shopping though). I wait as long as is needed and pay for my chicken. I go out and do the former actions in reverse: I unlock, get on and ride my bike home, make sure I have the chicken and the change, and finally I throw open the door and take off my shirt.
My description tof a trip to the supermarket
When I need to buy chicken breasts, I do the following: First, Iif I am shirt-less, I put on a shirt.
I take my bike, open the door, and being at the threshold I make sure that I have my bike lock's keys and my mask (here for entering to a supermarket it is necessary to usewear a mask).
"It is necessary" is fine to use, but a more informal way to say it would be "we have to" or "you have to." In general, you can use "you have to" to mean "es necesario" or "se necesita."
After that, I bike to a supermarket that is near my house.
I stop somea few meters before the entrance, at a placwhere wthere is a big and long guardrail lies, and lock my bike to the rail or to one of its posts.
You can say "where a big and long guardrail lies" but it sounds unnecessarily formal or old-fashioned.
I enter to the supermarket, and go directly to the butcher shop.
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"Should" means that it isn't necessary but that it is recommended.
I go to the registers and select the one with lessthe fewest people or lessthe fewest things to be paybought (because sometimes there is just aone person with a big shopplot of things thougho buy).
Alternatives:
... sometimes there is just one person buying a lot of things
... sometimes there is just one person with a full shopping cart
I wait as long as isI needed to and pay for my chicken.
I go out and do the formerprevious actions in reverse: I unlock, get on and ride my bike, ride home, make sure I have the chicken and the change, and finally I throw open the door and take off my shirt.
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When I need chicken breast I do the following: First, If I am shirt-less, I put on a shirt. When I need to buy chicken breasts, I do the following: First, |
I take my bike, open the door, and being at the threshold I make sure that I have my bike lock's keys and my mask (here for entering to a supermarket it is necessary to use a mask). I take my bike, open the door, and "It is necessary" is fine to use, but a more informal way to say it would be "we have to" or "you have to." In general, you can use "you have to" to mean "es necesario" or "se necesita." |
After that I bike to a supermarket that is near my house. After that, I bike to a supermarket that is near my house. |
I stop some meters before the entrance, at a place where a big and long guardrail lies, and lock my bike to the rail or to one of its pots. I stop You can say "where a big and long guardrail lies" but it sounds unnecessarily formal or old-fashioned. |
I enter to the supermarket, go directly to the butcher shop. I enter |
If there is someone, I just stand in line after him; if not, I ask the butcher for one big chicken breast or more (depending on the day and the money I get). If the |
This butcher shop has its own employees and is, in some sense, separate from the supermarket, but still you should pay for your order in the supermarket's cash register. This butcher shop has its own employees and is, in some sense, separate from the supermarket, but still you "Should" means that it isn't necessary but that it is recommended. |
I go to the registers and select the one with less people or less things to be pay (because sometimes there is just a person with a big shopping though). I go to the registers and select the one with Alternatives: ... sometimes there is just one person buying a lot of things ... sometimes there is just one person with a full shopping cart |
I wait as long as is needed and pay for my chicken. I wait as long as |
I go out and do the former actions in reverse: I unlock, get on and ride my bike home, make sure I have the chicken and the change, and finally I throw open the door and take off my shirt. I go out and do the |
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