Sept. 18, 2020
My deep thoughts on well-being
Wealth is well-being. Some people think so. However, let's take a broader look and talk about mental health. We need to understand the depth of its importance, and we need start practicing better habits to improve our well-being. First, let's think about how we behave with other people. Are we rude? If we want peace of mind so that others will treat us well, we should start with tolerance. Let's live in peace!
Some people think sothat wealth is well-being.
It sounds more natural to combine your first two sentences.
However, let's take a broader look and talk about mental health.
We need to understand the depth of its importance, and we need to start practicing better habits to improve our well-being.
First, let'sWe should think about how we behave withour behavior towards other people.
You don't really need "first," because you do not have a "second," or "third," in a series of thoughts.
Are we rude?
If we want peace of mind so that others will treat us well, we should start with tolerance.
Not entirely sure what idea you are going for here, but your sentence is technically correct.
Let's live in peace!
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My deep thoughts on well-being |
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Wealth is well-being. |
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Some people think so. Some people think It sounds more natural to combine your first two sentences. |
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However, let's take a broader look and talk about mental health. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We need to understand the depth of its importance, and we need start practicing better habits to improve our well-being. We need to understand the depth of its importance, and we need to start practicing better habits to improve our well-being. |
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First, let's think about how we behave with other people.
You don't really need "first," because you do not have a "second," or "third," in a series of thoughts. |
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Are we rude? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If we want peace of mind so that others will treat us well, we should start with tolerance. If we want peace of mind so that others will treat us well, we should start with tolerance. Not entirely sure what idea you are going for here, but your sentence is technically correct. |
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Let's live in peace! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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