My dDay tToday

I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate the English lenguajge to a capacity, it never feels like enough.

That wasExcept, on the surface only.

Not wrong, but this might be a more natural way of saying this. "Except" can emphasize that this sentence challenges the sentence which came before.

Another alternative (this might actually be even better): "At least, it was on the surface."

Workload was light, so I had a lot of time to think about the next steps ofin my life and that is basically why I am here today writing this.

"next steps of my life" sounds a little weird, though it's kind of hard to explain why. To me, "of" implies ownership, so it feels weird for "my life" to own "the next steps".

I'm challengeding myself to try toand improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate've mastered the English leanguajge to asome capacity, it never feels like enough.

Most of these corrections are simply slightly more natural alternative phrasings (except "lenguaje" isn't an English word).

Although, I will say that the usage of "dominate" felt particularly strange to me. To me, it feels like a very dramatic word, and it feels strange to use it to mean you are simply good at or know a lot about something. It's far more common to say you have mastered something.

Please help me rate or correct this to know where I can I start improving.

My dDay tToday

Today was an easy day.,

That wasbut only on the surface only.

I think these past two sentences should be combined.

WThe workload was light,; I had a lot of time to think about the next steps of my life, and that is basically why I am here today writing this.

I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate the English leanguajge to a capacity, it never feels like enough.

TAlthough, that was only on the surface only.

Moving "only" to a more natural place, but the original placement is also correct.

WMy workload was light, so I had a lot of time to think about the next steps of my life, and that is basically why I am here today writing this.

I challenged myself to try to improve my writing skills because even though I can say I dominate've mastered the English leanguajge to a capacityertain extent, it never feels like enough.

Please help me rate or correct this to know where I can I start improving.