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toshinou_kyouko

April 30, 2024

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My Day Today

I woke up at 8 a.m. My girlfriend had already walked our dogs and I was very grateful for that. Today was the day when she was going abroad for a week. So she had to do a lot of packing and preparing in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee. At 9:30 a.m. I drove her to the ferry and kissed her goodbye.
After that I went home. I have a day off today so I had my afternoon free. Somehow I got into reading about and choosing a note taking app. I was choosing between Obsidian which I use currently, and LogSeq. LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature which Obsidian hasn't. In the end I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian. Sometimes I get too obsessive with choosing between multiple options, be it a program or a thing I want to buy.
After that I was watching The legend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.
Later I played The Binding of Isaac on Switch.
Finally, I fed my dogs and we want for an evening walk. Soon we were back.
Now, I would like to do some studying and maybe finish my day with another game or episode.

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Today was the day when, she was going abroad for a week.

So she had to do a lot of packing and preparing in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.

After thatwards, I went home.

I haved a day off today so I had my afternoon free.

Somehow, I got into reading about and choosing a note taking app.

I was choosing between Obsidian which I use currently, and LogSeq.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature which Obsidian hadoesn't have.

In the end, I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.

Sometimes, I get too obsessive with choosing between multiple options, be it a program or a thing I want to buy.

After that, I was watchinged The legend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.

Later, I played The Binding of Isaac on Switch.

Today was the day when she was going, she left to go abroad for a week.

Your sentence is ok. My correction is a suggestion to sound more natural.

So, she had to do a lot of packing and preparing in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.

After that, I went home.

I have athe day off today so I had my afternoon free.

"The" sounds more natural.

Somehow, I got into reading about and choosingpicking out a note taking app.

I was choosing between Obsidian, which I use currently, and LogSeq.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature, which Obsidian hasn't.

In the end, I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.

After that, I was watchingtched The lLegend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.

Later, I played The Binding of Isaac on Switch.

Finally, I fed my dogs and we waent for an evening walk.

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Sounds like a fun day off! :) Great writing.

My Day Today

I woke up at 8 a.m. My girlfriend had already walked our dogs and I was very grateful for that.

Today was the day when she was going abroad for a week.

So she had to do a lot of packing and preparing in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.

At 9:30 a.m.,

This should be part of the next sentence

I drove her to the ferry and kissed her goodbye.

After that I went home.

I have a day off today so I had my afternoon free.

Somehow I got into reading about and choosing a note taking app.

I was choosing between Obsidian which I use currently, and LogSeq.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature which Obsidian hasn'tdoesn’t have.

In the end I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.

Sometimes I get too obsessive with choosing between multiple options, be it a program or a thing I want to buy.

After that I was watching The legend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.

Later I played The Binding of Isaac on Switch.

Finally, I fed my dogs and we want for an evening walk.

Soon we were back.

Now, I would like to do some studying and maybe finish my day with another game or episode.

My Day Today

I woke up at 8 a.m. My girlfriend had already walked our dogs and, which I was very grateful for that.

Your sentence is 100% correct! I'm suggesting other ways to say it so it sounds a little more natural

Today was the day when she was going abroad for a week.She also had to get ready for her trip abroad.

She'll be gone for a week, so she had to do a lot of packing and preparing to do in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.

At 9:30 a.m.,

I drove her to the ferry and kissed her goodbye.

After that, I went home.

I have athe day off today so I had my, so my entire afternoon was free.

Somehow I got into reading about and choosing a note -taking apps and how to choose one.

I washad to choosinge between Obsidian, which I use currently use, and LogSeq.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature whichthat Obsidian hadoesn't.

In the end, I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.

Sometimes, I get too obsessive with choosing betweenthinking about multiple options, be it a program or a something I want to buy.

Nice use of "be it"

After that, I was watching The legend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actorstched "Avatar: The Last Airbender" on Netflix (the new live-action one, not the cartoon) and finished the first season.

You say "was watching" if something interrupted it. For example, "I was watching a movie when the doorbell rang."

Later, I played "The Binding of Isaac" on Switch.

Finally, I fed my dogs and we want for an evening walk.

Soon we were back.

Now, I would like to do some studying and maybe finish my day with another game or episode.

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Sounds like a lovely, relaxing day!

Today was the day wshen she was going left to go abroad for a week.

I have athe day off today so I had my afternoon was free.

Somehow I got into reading about and choosing a note taking apps and how to choose one.

After that I was watching The legend of Aangtched Avatar: The Last Airbender on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.

My Day Today


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I woke up at 8 a.m. My girlfriend had already walked our dogs and I was very grateful for that.


I woke up at 8 a.m. My girlfriend had already walked our dogs and, which I was very grateful for that.

Your sentence is 100% correct! I'm suggesting other ways to say it so it sounds a little more natural

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today was the day when she was going abroad for a week.


Today was the day wshen she was going left to go abroad for a week.

Today was the day when she was going abroad for a week.She also had to get ready for her trip abroad.

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Today was the day when she was going, she left to go abroad for a week.

Your sentence is ok. My correction is a suggestion to sound more natural.

Today was the day when, she was going abroad for a week.

So she had to do a lot of packing and preparing in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.


She'll be gone for a week, so she had to do a lot of packing and preparing to do in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.

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So, she had to do a lot of packing and preparing in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.

So she had to do a lot of packing and preparing in the morning while I enjoyed my morning coffee.

After that I went home.


After that, I went home.

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After thatwards, I went home.

After that, I went home.

I have a day off today so I had my afternoon free.


I have athe day off today so I had my afternoon was free.

I have athe day off today so I had my, so my entire afternoon was free.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have athe day off today so I had my afternoon free.

"The" sounds more natural.

I haved a day off today so I had my afternoon free.

Somehow I got into reading about and choosing a note taking app.


Somehow I got into reading about and choosing a note taking apps and how to choose one.

Somehow I got into reading about and choosing a note -taking apps and how to choose one.

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Somehow, I got into reading about and choosingpicking out a note taking app.

Somehow, I got into reading about and choosing a note taking app.

I was choosing between Obsidian which I use currently, and LogSeq.


I washad to choosinge between Obsidian, which I use currently use, and LogSeq.

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I was choosing between Obsidian, which I use currently, and LogSeq.

I was choosing between Obsidian which I use currently, and LogSeq.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature which Obsidian hasn't.


LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature whichthat Obsidian hadoesn't.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature which Obsidian hasn'tdoesn’t have.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature, which Obsidian hasn't.

LogSeq has an interesting pdf annotation feature which Obsidian hadoesn't have.

In the end I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.


In the end, I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.

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In the end, I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.

In the end, I spent too much time and energy and decided to stick with Obsidian.

At 9:30 a.m.


At 9:30 a.m.,

At 9:30 a.m.,

This should be part of the next sentence

I drove her to the ferry and kissed her goodbye.


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Sometimes I get too obsessive with choosing between multiple options, be it a program or a thing I want to buy.


Sometimes, I get too obsessive with choosing betweenthinking about multiple options, be it a program or a something I want to buy.

Nice use of "be it"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes, I get too obsessive with choosing between multiple options, be it a program or a thing I want to buy.

After that I was watching The legend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.


After that I was watching The legend of Aangtched Avatar: The Last Airbender on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.

After that, I was watching The legend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actorstched "Avatar: The Last Airbender" on Netflix (the new live-action one, not the cartoon) and finished the first season.

You say "was watching" if something interrupted it. For example, "I was watching a movie when the doorbell rang."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that, I was watchingtched The lLegend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.

After that, I was watchinged The legend of Aang on Netflix (the new one which is not a cartoon but rather with real actors) and finished the first season.

Later I played The Binding of Isaac on Switch.


Later, I played "The Binding of Isaac" on Switch.

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Later, I played The Binding of Isaac on Switch.

Later, I played The Binding of Isaac on Switch.

Finally, I fed my dogs and we want for an evening walk.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, I fed my dogs and we waent for an evening walk.

Soon we were back.


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Now, I would like to do some studying and maybe finish my day with another game or episode.


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