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My Day
Today, I didnn't have any ideas of subjects to talk about so I decided to talk about my day.
I woke up at 6:35 a.m. because I had to go to school. That's really early so I had to go night night early too.
Yesterday, I forgot to put my alarm on for today, but down to luck, I woke up at 6:41 naturally. That's impressive how our habits can impact our brain.
Afterwards, I went downstairs, did my skincare routine, brushed my hair, and ate a bowl with skyr, chocolate and oat flakes, and I added a banana.
After that, I went to school, and during the commute, I learnt some English words from a list I've made with important words and expressions I heard in Ryan Trahan's videos. That way, I learn about 10 to 15 words a day and I renforce my vocabulary.
Today is Wednessday, so I only have 4 hours of school, but I started with a test. And this test was in a subject I really don't like: NSI (Numeric and Informatic Science). I don't know if I passed the test, but I did my best. I hope I'll have about 12 out of 20. That's not a good grade, but that isn't terrible too.
After the NSI class, I had French class. It's maybe the most boring subject. We always talk about French authors, but let's be honest, who really care about them ahah? Moreover, I don't think this subject is that useful. How can it be useful for you future? You won't talk about Victor Hugo or other different authors?!
I finished the day with a Spanish class. Before, I had a teacher I hated. The class was so bad. We did things we learnt when we just began to learn Spanish, three years ago. However and hopefully, she was just a replacement and the teacher I have now is much better. First, we learn things that are from our level, and secondly, the class is much more interesting. For example, at the moment, we talk about the singer Bad Bunny and it's really cool. We talk about him because he made a statement where he encourage people to earn Spanish in the U.S.A because he will think at the Super Bowl, and in Spanish. His statement caused controversy because the Trump politic try to erase all the Spanish stains in the U.S.A.
I hope you enjoyed reading my text. Please tell me how uou found my English!
My Day
Today, I don't have any ideas of subjects to talk about so I decided to talk about my day.
I woke up at 6:35 a.m. because I had to go to school.
That's really early so I have to go night night early too.
Grammar is fine, but "go night night" is what children say/what you say to children. It could be used in a jokey context with friends, but it feels a little odd in this piece of writing. More typical would be "I have to go to bed early" or "I have to go to sleep early."
Yesterday, I forgot to put my alarm on for today, but down to luck, I woke up at 6:41.
That's impressive how our habits can impact our brain.
Afterwards, I went downstairs, did my skincare routine, brushed my hair, and ate a bowl with skyr, chocolate and oat flakes, and I added a banana.
After that, I went to school, and during the commute, I learnt some English words from a list I've made with important words and expressions I heard in Ryan Trahan's videos.
That way, I learn about 10 to 15 words a day and I reinforce my vocabulary.
Today is Wednessday, so I only have 4 hours of school, but I started with a test.
And a test in a subject I really don't like: NSI (Numeric and Informatic Science).
Maybe it should be NIS if we're translating the English name. But if NSI is how it's written in your language, I suppose it's okay as it is.
I don't know if I passed the test, but I did my best.
I hope I'll have about 12 out of 20.
That's not a good grade, but that isn't terrible too.
Adfter the NSI class, I had French class.
It's maybe the most beauring subject.
lol is this a pun? The English word is "boring" but I assume you purposely "French-ified" it.
We always talk about French authors, but let's be honest, I think whole the class doesn't care about this.
Moreover, I don't think this subject is that useful.
How can it be useful for your future?
You won't talk about Victor Hugo or other different authors?!
I finished the day with a Spanish class.
Before, I had a teacher I hated.
The class was so bad.
We did things we learnt when we just began to learn Spanish, three years ago.
However and hopeful, fortunately, she was just a replacementsubstitute and the teacher I have now is much better.
"Hopefully" means you're guessing about the future, you don't know yet. But it sounds like you know already that she is a sub.
A "substitute (teacher)" = un remplaçant, une remplaçante. Also often shortened to "sub."
First, we learn things that are from our level, and secondly, the class is much more interesting.
For example, at the moment, we talk about the singer Bad Bunny and it's really cool.
We talk about him because he made a statement where he encouraged people to earn Spanish in the U.
S.A because he will thinksing (?) at the Super Bowl, and in Spanish.
His statement caused controversy because the Trump politics try to erase all the Spanish "stains" in the U.S.A.
Stains is very insulting. You can keep the word if you put it in quotes, implying that's what Trump thinks of them. If you don't have the quote, it sounds like you agree with him.
I hope you enjoyed reading my text.
Please tell me how uyou found my English!
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Excellent! There are some small typos, but I can tell you have a strong grasp of English.
I understand getting tired of talking about literature, especially if the teacher doesn't make it fun, but I do think literature is important! It makes you a more well-rounded person, helps you learn about the past, and generally increases your literacy/reading comprehension. There are so many people who struggle to comprehend complex texts because they didn't study any literature! That's just my opinion. :)
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I finished the day with a Spanish class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before, I had a teacher I hated. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The class was so bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We did things we learnt when we just began to learn Spanish, three years ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However and hopefully, she was just a replacement and the teacher I have now is much better. However "Hopefully" means you're guessing about the future, you don't know yet. But it sounds like you know already that she is a sub. A "substitute (teacher)" = un remplaçant, une remplaçante. Also often shortened to "sub." |
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First, we learn things that from our level, and secondly, the class is much more interesting. First, we learn things that are from our level, and secondly, the class is much more interesting. |
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For example, at the moment, we talk about the singer Bad Bunny and it's really cool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We talk about him because he made a statement where he encourage people to earn Spanish in the U. We talk about him because he made a statement where he encouraged people to earn Spanish in the U. |
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S.A because he will think at the Super Bowl, and in Spanish. S.A because he will |
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His statement caused controversy because the Trump politic try to erase all the Spanish stains in the U.S.A. His statement caused controversy because the Trump politics try to erase all the Spanish "stains" in the U.S.A. Stains is very insulting. You can keep the word if you put it in quotes, implying that's what Trump thinks of them. If you don't have the quote, it sounds like you agree with him. |
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I hope you enjoyed reading my text. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please tell me how uou found my English! Please tell me how |
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Today, I didnn't have any ideas of subjects to talk about so I decided to talk about my day. |
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I woke up at 6:35 a.m. because I had to go to school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's really early so I had to go night night early too. |
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Yesterday, I forgot to put my alarm on for today, but down to luck, I woke up at 6:41 naturally. |
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That's impressive how our habits can impact our brain. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Afterwards, I went downstairs, did my skincare routine, brushed my hair, and ate a bowl with skyr, chocolate and oat flakes, and I added a banana. |
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After that, I went to school, and during the commute, I learnt some English words from a list I've made with important words and expressions I heard in Ryan Trahan's videos. |
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That way, I learn about 10 to 15 words a day and I renforce my vocabulary. That way, I learn about 10 to 15 words a day and I reinforce my vocabulary. |
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Today is Wednessday, so I only have 4 hours of school, but I started with a test. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And this test was in a subject I really don't like: NSI (Numeric and Informatic Science). |
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I don't know if I passed the test, but I did my best. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope I'll have about 12 out of 20. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's not a good grade, but that isn't terrible too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After the NSI class, I had French class. |
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It's maybe the most boring subject. |
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We always talk about French authors, but let's be honest, who really care about them ahah? |
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Moreover, I don't think this subject is that useful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How can it be useful for you future? How can it be useful for your future? |
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You won't talk about Victor Hugo or other different authors?! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, we learn things that are from our level, and secondly, the class is much more interesting. |
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Today, I don't have any ideas of subjects to talk about so I decided to talk about my day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's really early so I have to go night night early too. That's really early so I have to go night night early too. Grammar is fine, but "go night night" is what children say/what you say to children. It could be used in a jokey context with friends, but it feels a little odd in this piece of writing. More typical would be "I have to go to bed early" or "I have to go to sleep early." |
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Yesterday, I forgot to put my alarm on for today, but down to luck, I woke up at 6:41. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Afterwards, I went downstairs, did my skincare routine, brush my hair, and ate a bowl with skyr, chocolate and oat flakes, and I added a banana. Afterwards, I went downstairs, did my skincare routine, brushed my hair, and ate a bowl with skyr, chocolate and oat flakes, and I added a banana. |
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After tht, I went to school, and during the commute, I learnt some English words from a list I've made with important words and expressions I heard in Ryan Trahan's videos. After that, I went to school, and during the commute, I learnt some English words from a list I've made with important words and expressions I heard in Ryan Trahan's videos. |
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And a test in a subject I really don't like: NSI (Numeric and Informatic Science). And a test in a subject I really don't like: NSI (Numeric and Informatic Science). Maybe it should be NIS if we're translating the English name. But if NSI is how it's written in your language, I suppose it's okay as it is. |
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Adter the NSI class, I had French class. A |
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It's maybe the most beauring subject. It's maybe the most beauring subject. lol is this a pun? The English word is "boring" but I assume you purposely "French-ified" it. |
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We always talk about French authors, but let's be honest, I think whole the class don't care about this. We always talk about French authors, but let's be honest, I think whole the class doesn't care about this. |
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