Aug. 28, 2020
My Day
First I woke up at 9 o'clock. I had some breakfast. I ate two apples and porrige.
After that I went to school, because I needed to take certains and wash it in home.
Then I wanted to walk. I took out my phone and started to listen to podcast. I walked for a long time.
Finally I went to home and wrote this text :)
My Day
Firstly I woke up at 9 o'clock.
This is not incorrect. I think it sounds better though. :)
I had some breakfast.
I ate two apples and porridge.
I think the some as suggested by the other correction is a good choice.
Then I wanted to go for a walk.
I took out my phone and started to listen to a podcast.
I disagree with the other correction. I think having "started to listen" is fine.
I walked for a long time.
Finally I went to home and wrote this text. :)
Feedback
Nice job!
My Day
First I woke up at 9 o'clock.
I had some breakfast.
I ate two apples and some porridge.
I added "some" for parallelism but the way you had it is technically correct.
After that I went to school, because I needed to take the certains and wash it inthem at home.
I'm not sure what you mean by "certains."
Then I wanted to walk.
I took out my phone and started to listened to a podcast.
I walked for a long time.
Finally I went to home and wrote this text. :)
Feedback
Good! Mostly correct sentences, just a few mistakes here and there.
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My Day This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First I woke up at 9 o'clock. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Firstly I woke up at 9 o'clock. This is not incorrect. I think it sounds better though. :) |
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I had some breakfast. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I ate two apples and porrige. I ate two apples and some porridge. I added "some" for parallelism but the way you had it is technically correct. I ate two apples and porridge. I think the some as suggested by the other correction is a good choice. |
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After that I went to school, because I needed to take certains and wash it in home. After that I went to school I'm not sure what you mean by "certains." |
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Then I wanted to walk. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then I wanted to go for a walk. |
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I took out my phone and started to listen to podcast. I took out my phone and I took out my phone and started to listen to a podcast. I disagree with the other correction. I think having "started to listen" is fine. |
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I walked for a long time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally I went to home and wrote this text :) Finally I went Finally I went |
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