Aug. 2, 2025
My day
Today I wake up at 8 o'clock, because my boyfriend was going to work. After his leaving I went to sleep. Second time I woke up at 1pm. I didn't hace breakfast, but I had a lunch. For lanch I ate pasta with meatbols. All day I didn't do anything. I watched serial and drew picture for numbers. I cooked a dinner. And now I writing this text. After I will go to sleep. Good night!
Today I waoke up at 8 o'clock, because my boyfriend was goheading to work.
The original works too, but this sounds bit natural!
After hise leavingft, I went back to sleep.
"went back to" is more natural to say that you returned to sleep.
I didn't hacve breakfast, but I had a lunch instead.
For launch I ate pasta with meatboalls.
All day I didn't do anything all day.
I watched serial and drew picture for numbers.
serial (?) did you mean series?
I cooked a dinner.
And now I am writing this text.
After this, I will go to sleep.
Feedback
Good job! Just minor typos, but it's nice to write quick journals about your day before sleep
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My day |
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Today I wake up at 8 o'clock, because my boyfriend was going to work. Today I w The original works too, but this sounds bit natural! |
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After his leaving I went to sleep. After h "went back to" is more natural to say that you returned to sleep. |
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Second time I woke up at 1pm. |
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I didn't hace breakfast, but I had a lunch. I didn't ha |
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For lanch I ate pasta with meatbols. For l |
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All day I didn't do anything.
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I watched serial and drew picture for numbers. I watched serial and drew picture for numbers. serial (?) did you mean series? |
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I cooked a dinner. I cooked |
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And now I writing this text. And now I am writing this text. |
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After I will go to sleep. After this, I will go to sleep. |
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Good night! |
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