May 29, 2025
My day
Hi, I don't know what to write here but maybe something about my day. I woke up at 7:30am, then brush my hair, eat my breakfast and go to work. It was raining almost all day. In my work I was doing my basic administration things like a working with documentaries. After work I came back to home and learning my courses for 2hours and eat with my boyfriend.
Hi,. I don't know what to write about here, but maybe I will write something about my day.
I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, eate my breakfast and gownet to work.
It was raining almost all day.
In myAt work, I was doing my basic administration things like a working with documentarieswork .
After work, I camewent back to home and was learning with my courses for 2two hours and e. I ate with my boyfriend.
I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, eat mye breakfast and gowent to work.
More natural English like this.
It was raining almost allrained most of the day.
More natural sounding.
In myAt work I was doing my basic administration things like a working with documentariesdo administration for a documentary production company.
Sounds better. All administration is "basic" so you don't really need that.
ABack home after work I came back to home and learning my courses for 2hours and eatspent 2 hours learning my coursework before dinner with my boyfriend.
Sounds better.
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Well done.
My dDay
Hi,. I don't know what to write here but maybe something about my day.
I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, eate my breakfast and gowent to work.
Everything needs to be in the same tense here. You started in the past and then used the present.
It was raining almost all day.
In myAt work I was doing my basic administration thingasks like a working with documentaries.
Do you mean 'documents' working with documentaries does not seem like basic admin.
After work I came back to home and learningstudied my courses for 2 hours and eate with my boyfriend.
Needs to be all in past tense not a mixture.
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Good work. Keep an eye on the tenses you are using.
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Hi, I don't know what to write here but maybe something about my day. Hi Hi |
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I woke up at 7:30am, then brush my hair, eat my breakfast and go to work. I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, Everything needs to be in the same tense here. You started in the past and then used the present. I woke up at 7:30am, More natural English like this. I woke up at 7:30am, then brushed my hair, |
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It was raining almost all day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It More natural sounding. It was raining |
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In my work I was doing my basic administration things like a working with documentaries.
Do you mean 'documents' working with documentaries does not seem like basic admin.
Sounds better. All administration is "basic" so you don't really need that.
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After work I came back to home and learning my courses for 2hours and eat with my boyfriend. After work I came back Needs to be all in past tense not a mixture.
Sounds better. After work, I |
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