May 12, 2025
my day
Today was a very stressful day because my friends and I went to the hospital for the night shift .
During the work a lady came to give birth , one of my friends didn’t support the pain and the shooting of her so she felt down .
The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with fatima and we did eat tacos. It was soo délicieus and I bought some skin care products .
Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother house with my mum to drink coffee there
my day
Today was a very stressful day because my friends and I went to the hospital for the night shift orked the night shift at the hospital.
"Went to the hospital for the night shift" isn't incorrect, just not the most natural wording here
During the work, a lady came to give birth , o. One of my friends didn’t support trelieve her pain and the shooting of her, so she felt down .
"Support the pain" isn't really said in English, to make someone's pain less worse is "relieve/alleviate one's pain"
Not sure what "the shooting of her" means in English, maybe you could write it in your native language and I could use a translator to figure out the equivalent
The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with fFatima and we did eate tacos.
"The positive part of the day" doesn't sound natural, so it could be "A good thing that happened that day" or something like that instead
"We did eat tacos" sounds like you're affirming something, which doesn't make sense because there was no mention of it before
It was soo déelicieous, and I bought some skin care products .
Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother's house with my mum to drink coffee there.
Today was a very stressful day because my friends and I went to the hospital for the night shift .
During the work a lady came to give birth , one of my friends didn’t support the pain and the shooting of her so she felt down .
While we were working, a lady came in to give birth. One of my friends didn't help her with the pain, so she felt down. (Not quite sure what "the shooting of her" means.)
The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with fatima and we did eat tacos.
The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with Fatima and we ate tacos.
It was soo délicieus and I bought some skin care products .
It was so delicious. I also bought some skin care products. (Putting them together in a single sentence make is sound like you bought skin care products at the restaurant.)
Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother house with my mum to drink coffee there
Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother house with my mum to drink coffee. (The final word is unnecessary.)
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Today was a very stressful day because my friends and I went to the hospital for the night shift . This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today was a very stressful day because my friends and I w "Went to the hospital for the night shift" isn't incorrect, just not the most natural wording here |
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During the work a lady came to give birth , one of my friends didn’t support the pain and the shooting of her so she felt down . During the work a lady came to give birth , one of my friends didn’t support the pain and the shooting of her so she felt down . While we were working, a lady came in to give birth. One of my friends didn't help her with the pain, so she felt down. (Not quite sure what "the shooting of her" means.) During "Support the pain" isn't really said in English, to make someone's pain less worse is "relieve/alleviate one's pain" Not sure what "the shooting of her" means in English, maybe you could write it in your native language and I could use a translator to figure out the equivalent |
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The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with fatima and we did eat tacos. The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with fatima and we did eat tacos. The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with Fatima and we ate tacos. The positive part of the day was that I went to a restaurant with "The positive part of the day" doesn't sound natural, so it could be "A good thing that happened that day" or something like that instead "We did eat tacos" sounds like you're affirming something, which doesn't make sense because there was no mention of it before |
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It was soo délicieus and I bought some skin care products . It was soo délicieus and I bought some skin care products . It was so delicious. I also bought some skin care products. (Putting them together in a single sentence make is sound like you bought skin care products at the restaurant.) It was so |
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Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother house with my mum to drink coffee there Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother house with my mum to drink coffee there Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother house with my mum to drink coffee. (The final word is unnecessary.) Tomorrow I will go to my grandmother's house with my mum to drink coffee there. |
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