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maritaurrent

Feb. 14, 2025

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My Day

I had a busy day today. I studied for the entrance exam. Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is a exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies depending on the course). I also went with my younger sister for the swimming lesson, then went to the gym. Now I´m studying English.


Hoje eu tive um dia cheio. Estudei para o vestibular. Aqui no Brasil nós temos o ENEM, que é uma prova para faculdade pública, e eu preciso de uma nota alta para passar ( a nota necessária varia dependendo do curso). Eu também fui com a minha irmã mais nova na aula de natação, depois fui para a academia. Agora estou estudando inglês.

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I had a busy day today.

I studied for the entrance exam.

Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is a exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies depending on the course).

which

I also went with my younger sister for the swimming lesson, then went to the gym.

for a swimming lesson

Now I´m studying English.

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Very well done!

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maritaurrent

Feb. 17, 2025

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Thanks!

My Day

I had a busy day today.

I studied for the entrance exam.

Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is a exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies depending on the course).

I also went with my younger sister for ther swimming lesson, then went to the gym.

Now I´m studying English.

Feedback

Excellent. Your sentences are simple and easy to understand with good grammar and vocabulary. Good luck on your ENEM!

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maritaurrent

Feb. 17, 2025

1

Thanks!!

I had a busy day today.

I studied for the entrance exam.

Here in Brazil, we have ENEM, whitch is an exam for the public university, and. I need a very high grade to pass ( t. The grade needed varies depending on the course).

I also went with my younger sister for tto her swimming lesson, then I went to the gym.

You could also say, "I also went with my younger sister to her swimming lesson then went to the gym."

Now I´m studying English.

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Great job! A few corrections, but overall fantastic work :)

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maritaurrent

Feb. 17, 2025

1

Thanks!

Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is an exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies dependings on the course).

I also went with my younger sister for thea swimming lesson, then went to the gym.

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Great work !

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maritaurrent

Feb. 17, 2025

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Thanks!!

My Day


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I studied for the entrance exam.


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Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is a exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies depending on the course).


Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is an exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies dependings on the course).

Here in Brazil, we have ENEM, whitch is an exam for the public university, and. I need a very high grade to pass ( t. The grade needed varies depending on the course).

Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is a exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies depending on the course).

Here in Brazil we have ENEM, whitch is a exam for the public university, and I need a very high grade to pass ( the grade needed varies depending on the course).

which

I also went with my younger sister for the swimming lesson, then went to the gym.


I also went with my younger sister for thea swimming lesson, then went to the gym.

I also went with my younger sister for tto her swimming lesson, then I went to the gym.

You could also say, "I also went with my younger sister to her swimming lesson then went to the gym."

I also went with my younger sister for ther swimming lesson, then went to the gym.

I also went with my younger sister for the swimming lesson, then went to the gym.

for a swimming lesson

Now I´m studying English.


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