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alina34233

Sept. 11, 2024

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My day

Today's night a cat slept with me
It was calm. But it wake up and get loud in early morning
Finally I slept badly
I ordered breakfast in grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza
I had hardly work day and stressed meetings
Actually I am tired and going to bed

Corrections

Today'sLast night a cat slept with me ,
It was calm.

Today's night technically works but does not make logical sense. When talking about a "night" from yesterday, using "last night" is more reasonable.

But it waoke up and geot loud in early morning ¶
Final
in the morning.¶
Unfortunate
ly, I slept badly poorly.
I ordered
some breakfast inwith a grocery delivery service andthen ate a pieslice of pizza
I had
a hardly work day and stressedful meetings .
Actually I am tired and
goingwill go to bed

An English speaker would be able to understand what you are trying to say, however:

- Make sure you are using the correct verb tense when you are referencing the past ("wake up" ---> "woke up")
- Some adverbs and partitive articles do not work in this context
- Slight grammatical errors but overall message is understood

Feedback

Overall, good job ! Just be careful about using the proper verb tense(s) given the context. Furthermore, some adverbs can be switched for more appropriate ones. I think using the correct vocabulary and working on grammatical structures would help you.

English is a weird language but do not give up ! Make sure to keep practicing :)

ToBETTER: Yesterday's night a cat calmly slept with me
It was calm
.

ButHowever, it waoke up and get loudly in early morning
Finally

As a result,
I slept badly .
I ordered breakfast
inat a grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza .
I had hard
ly work day and day at work and felt stressed during meetings .
Actually
, now I am tired and goingwill go to bed.

PUNCTUATION: Add periods at the end of sentences.

My day

Today'sLast night, a cat slept with me
. It was calm.

But, it waoke up and getwas loud in early morning ¶
Finally
in the morning. I slept badly ¶
poorly. I ordered breakfast infrom a grocery delivery service and ate a pieslice of pizza
. I had hardly work day anda tough day at work with stressedful meetings
Actually
. Now, I am tired and going to bed.

Feedback

Try to structure your writing into sentences. It will help us understand your writing more easily.

My day


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today's night a cat slept with me It was calm.


Today'sLast night, a cat slept with me
. It was calm.

ToBETTER: Yesterday's night a cat calmly slept with me
It was calm
.

Today'sLast night a cat slept with me ,
It was calm.

Today's night technically works but does not make logical sense. When talking about a "night" from yesterday, using "last night" is more reasonable.

But it wake up and get loud in early morning Finally I slept badly I ordered breakfast in grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza I had hardly work day and stressed meetings Actually I am tired and going to bed


But, it waoke up and getwas loud in early morning ¶
Finally
in the morning. I slept badly ¶
poorly. I ordered breakfast infrom a grocery delivery service and ate a pieslice of pizza
. I had hardly work day anda tough day at work with stressedful meetings
Actually
. Now, I am tired and going to bed.

ButHowever, it waoke up and get loudly in early morning
Finally

As a result,
I slept badly .
I ordered breakfast
inat a grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza .
I had hard
ly work day and day at work and felt stressed during meetings .
Actually
, now I am tired and goingwill go to bed.

PUNCTUATION: Add periods at the end of sentences.

But it waoke up and geot loud in early morning ¶
Final
in the morning.¶
Unfortunate
ly, I slept badly poorly.
I ordered
some breakfast inwith a grocery delivery service andthen ate a pieslice of pizza
I had
a hardly work day and stressedful meetings .
Actually I am tired and
goingwill go to bed

An English speaker would be able to understand what you are trying to say, however: - Make sure you are using the correct verb tense when you are referencing the past ("wake up" ---> "woke up") - Some adverbs and partitive articles do not work in this context - Slight grammatical errors but overall message is understood

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