Sept. 11, 2024
Today's night a cat slept with me
It was calm. But it wake up and get loud in early morning
Finally I slept badly
I ordered breakfast in grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza
I had hardly work day and stressed meetings
Actually I am tired and going to bed
Today'sLast night a cat slept with me
,
It was calm.
Last night a cat slept with me,
It was calm.
Today's night technically works but does not make logical sense. When talking about a "night" from yesterday, using "last night" is more reasonable.
But it waoke up and geot loud in early morning
Finalin the morning.
Unfortunately, I slept badly
poorly.
I ordered some breakfast inwith a grocery delivery service andthen ate a pieslice of pizza
I had a hardly work day and stressedful meetings
.
Actually I am tired and goingwill go to bed
But it woke up and got loud early in the morning.
Unfortunately, I slept poorly.
I ordered some breakfast with a grocery delivery service then ate a slice of pizza
I had a hard work day and stressful meetings.
Actually I am tired and will go to bed
An English speaker would be able to understand what you are trying to say, however:
- Make sure you are using the correct verb tense when you are referencing the past ("wake up" ---> "woke up")
- Some adverbs and partitive articles do not work in this context
- Slight grammatical errors but overall message is understood
Feedback
Overall, good job ! Just be careful about using the proper verb tense(s) given the context. Furthermore, some adverbs can be switched for more appropriate ones. I think using the correct vocabulary and working on grammatical structures would help you.
English is a weird language but do not give up ! Make sure to keep practicing :)
ToBETTER: Yesterday's night a cat calmly slept with me
It was calm.
BETTER: Yesterday night a cat calmly slept with me.
ButHowever, it waoke up and get loudly in early morning
Finally.
As a result, I slept badly
.
I ordered breakfast inat a grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza
.
I had hardly work day and day at work and felt stressed during meetings
.
Actually, now I am tired and goingwill go to bed.
However, it woke up loudly in early morning.
As a result, I slept badly.
I ordered breakfast at a grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza.
I had hard day at work and felt stressed during meetings.
Actually, now I am tired will go to bed.
PUNCTUATION: Add periods at the end of sentences.
My day
Today'sLast night, a cat slept with me
. It was calm.
Last night, a cat slept with me. It was calm.
But, it waoke up and getwas loud in early morning
Finallyin the morning. I slept badly
poorly. I ordered breakfast infrom a grocery delivery service and ate a pieslice of pizza
. I had hardly work day anda tough day at work with stressedful meetings
Actually. Now, I am tired and going to bed.
But, it woke up and was loud early in the morning. I slept poorly. I ordered breakfast from a grocery delivery service and ate a slice of pizza. I had a tough day at work with stressful meetings. Now, I am tired and going to bed.
Feedback
Try to structure your writing into sentences. It will help us understand your writing more easily.
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My day This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today's night a cat slept with me It was calm.
Today's night technically works but does not make logical sense. When talking about a "night" from yesterday, using "last night" is more reasonable. |
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But it wake up and get loud in early morning Finally I slept badly I ordered breakfast in grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza I had hardly work day and stressed meetings Actually I am tired and going to bed
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PUNCTUATION: Add periods at the end of sentences.
But it w An English speaker would be able to understand what you are trying to say, however: - Make sure you are using the correct verb tense when you are referencing the past ("wake up" ---> "woke up") - Some adverbs and partitive articles do not work in this context - Slight grammatical errors but overall message is understood |
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