Sept. 11, 2024
Today's night a cat slept with me
It was calm. But it wake up and get loud in early morning
Finally I slept badly
I ordered breakfast in grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza
I had hardly work day and stressed meetings
Actually I am tired and going to bed
Today'sLast night a cat slept with me
,¶
It was calm.
Today's night technically works but does not make logical sense. When talking about a "night" from yesterday, using "last night" is more reasonable.
But it waoke up and geot loud in early morning
¶in the morning.¶
Final
Unfortunately, I slept badly
poorly.¶
I ordered some breakfast inwith a grocery delivery service andthen ate a pieslice of pizza
¶
I had a hardly work day and stressedful meetings
.¶
Actually I am tired and goingwill go to bed
An English speaker would be able to understand what you are trying to say, however:
- Make sure you are using the correct verb tense when you are referencing the past ("wake up" ---> "woke up")
- Some adverbs and partitive articles do not work in this context
- Slight grammatical errors but overall message is understood
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Overall, good job ! Just be careful about using the proper verb tense(s) given the context. Furthermore, some adverbs can be switched for more appropriate ones. I think using the correct vocabulary and working on grammatical structures would help you.
English is a weird language but do not give up ! Make sure to keep practicing :)
ToBETTER: Yesterday's night a cat calmly slept with me
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It was calm
ButHowever, it waoke up and get loudly in early morning
¶.¶
Finally
As a result, I slept badly
.¶
I ordered breakfast inat a grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza
.¶
I had hardly work day and day at work and felt stressed during meetings
.¶
Actually, now I am tired and goingwill go to bed.
PUNCTUATION: Add periods at the end of sentences.
My day
Today'sLast night, a cat slept with me
¶. It was calm.
But, it waoke up and getwas loud in early morning
¶in the morning. I slept
Finallybadly
¶poorly. I ordered breakfast infrom a grocery delivery service and ate a pieslice of pizza
¶. I had hardly work day anda tough day at work with stressedful meetings
¶. Now, I am tired and going to bed.
Actually
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Try to structure your writing into sentences. It will help us understand your writing more easily.
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My day This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today's night a cat slept with me It was calm.
Today's night technically works but does not make logical sense. When talking about a "night" from yesterday, using "last night" is more reasonable. |
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But it wake up and get loud in early morning Finally I slept badly I ordered breakfast in grocery delivery service and ate a piece of pizza I had hardly work day and stressed meetings Actually I am tired and going to bed But, it w
PUNCTUATION: Add periods at the end of sentences. But it w An English speaker would be able to understand what you are trying to say, however: - Make sure you are using the correct verb tense when you are referencing the past ("wake up" ---> "woke up") - Some adverbs and partitive articles do not work in this context - Slight grammatical errors but overall message is understood |
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