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yaw

April 16, 2023

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My day

today was very difficult for me because I was look after my nephews they are gays so restless

first, i was prepare them breakfast and later we went to shopping but they are not liked anything, I feilt so angry because we went out for nothing after that we were for ice cream and my was mood better moreover they wanted to go to the pool but since they had homework we went back home.

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My dDay

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

tToday was very difficult for me because I was looking after my nephews t. They are gauys so they are restless.

We always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.

fFirst, i wasI prepare themd breakfast for them and later we went to shopping but they are nodidn't liked anything,. I feilt so angry because we went out for nothing a. After that we were forgot ice cream andso my was mood was better moreover. Then they wanted to go to the pool but since they had homework we went back home.

We always capitalize "I."

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You're very kind to look after your nephews. Try to use more sentences when writing. Good work!

My day


My dDay

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

today was very difficult for me because I was look after my nephews they are gays so restless


tToday was very difficult for me because I was looking after my nephews t. They are gauys so they are restless.

We always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.

first, i was prepare them breakfast and later we went to shopping but they are not liked anything, I feilt so angry because we went out for nothing after that we were for ice cream and my was mood better moreover they wanted to go to the pool but since they had homework we went back home.


fFirst, i wasI prepare themd breakfast for them and later we went to shopping but they are nodidn't liked anything,. I feilt so angry because we went out for nothing a. After that we were forgot ice cream andso my was mood was better moreover. Then they wanted to go to the pool but since they had homework we went back home.

We always capitalize "I."

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