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arthurprodrigues

Jan. 8, 2020

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My day

Yo guys, today was a good day. I woke up at 4 am, made my bed, took a cold shower, ate my breakfast and prayed. Then I went to my workout, and back hom around 7:30 am. Then I started to study english, did some flash cards on anki and read something while I was waiting my friend from Indonesia, He's learning english too, so then we did some conversation section in english. It was very fun and a learnt a lot, once he's english is a way better than mine but anyway.
After all this I ate my lunch, I has some rice, beans, and chicken breasts for today and it was good, then I started to study for sat exam and after that study section I went to gym, and it was full o people, every beginning of year, at least my gym, is full o people, but the good news is they generally gave up so then I have a gym just for me. After gym a came back home and did another conversation with a girl from NYC, it was very cool. After that I, studied a little bit more and now I'm here almost falling in sleep lol. Good night for y'all BTW.

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My day

Yo guys, today was a good day.

I woke up at 4 am, made my bed, took a cold shower, ate my breakfast and prayed.

Then I went to my work out, and came back home around 7:30 am.

Then, I started to study eEnglish,. I did some flash cards on aAnki and read something while I was waiting for my friend from Indonesia,. He's learning eEnglish too, so then we did some conversation sections in eEnglish together.

It was very fun and a I learnted a lot, once he'. His eEnglish is a way better than mine, but anywayI don't mind.

After all this I ate my lunch, I has some rice, beans, and chicken breasts for today and it was good, tlunch. Then, I started to study for satmy exam and a. After thatmy study sectssion, I went to gym, andthe gym but it was full of people, every. At the beginning of year, at least my gym, ievery year, the gym I go to is always full of people, but the good news is. However, they generally gaive up pretty quickly, so then I have athe gym justall for meyself again.

Try to not make the sentences too long (run-on sentence). It's better to split really long sentences up into smaller ones.

After gym athe gym, I came back home and dihad another conversation with a girl from NYC, i. It was very cool.

After that I, studied a little bit more and. Right now, I'm here almost falling in asleep lol.

Good night forto y'all BTW.

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arthurprodrigues

Jan. 10, 2020

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Thank's man, it helps me a lot.

My day

Yo guys, today was a good day.

I woke up at 4 am, made my bed, took a cold shower, ate my breakfast and prayed.

Then I went to my workout, and came back home around 7:30 am.

Then I started to study eEnglish,. I did some flash cards on aAnki and read something while I was waiting my friend from Indonesia, He's learning english too, so then we did some conversation section in english.

It was very fun and awe learnt a lot, once he'. His eEnglish is a way better than mine but anyways.

Anyway, after all this I ate my lunch, I has some rice, beans, and chicken breasts for today and it was good, then I started to study for sat exam and after that study section I went to gym, and it was full o people, every beginning of year, at least my gym, is full o people, but the good news is they generally gave up so then I have a gym just for me.

After the gym aI came back home and dihad another conversation with a girl from NYC, it whichwas very cool.

After that I, studied a little bit more, and now I'm hereon my bed almost falling in asleep lol.

Good night for y'all BTW.everyone.

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arthurprodrigues

Jan. 10, 2020

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Thanks, I appreciate it!

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Yo guys, today was a good day.


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I woke up at 4 am, made my bed, took a cold shower, ate my breakfast and prayed.


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Then I went to my workout, and back hom around 7:30 am.


Then I went to my workout, and came back home around 7:30 am.

Then I went to my work out, and came back home around 7:30 am.

Then I started to study english, did some flash cards on anki and read something while I was waiting my friend from Indonesia, He's learning english too, so then we did some conversation section in english.


Then I started to study eEnglish,. I did some flash cards on aAnki and read something while I was waiting my friend from Indonesia, He's learning english too, so then we did some conversation section in english.

Then, I started to study eEnglish,. I did some flash cards on aAnki and read something while I was waiting for my friend from Indonesia,. He's learning eEnglish too, so then we did some conversation sections in eEnglish together.

It was very fun and a learnt a lot, once he's english is a way better than mine but anyway.


It was very fun and awe learnt a lot, once he'. His eEnglish is a way better than mine but anyways.

It was very fun and a I learnted a lot, once he'. His eEnglish is a way better than mine, but anywayI don't mind.

After all this I ate my lunch, I has some rice, beans, and chicken breasts for today and it was good, then I started to study for sat exam and after that study section I went to gym, and it was full o people, every beginning of year, at least my gym, is full o people, but the good news is they generally gave up so then I have a gym just for me.


Anyway, after all this I ate my lunch, I has some rice, beans, and chicken breasts for today and it was good, then I started to study for sat exam and after that study section I went to gym, and it was full o people, every beginning of year, at least my gym, is full o people, but the good news is they generally gave up so then I have a gym just for me.

After all this I ate my lunch, I has some rice, beans, and chicken breasts for today and it was good, tlunch. Then, I started to study for satmy exam and a. After thatmy study sectssion, I went to gym, andthe gym but it was full of people, every. At the beginning of year, at least my gym, ievery year, the gym I go to is always full of people, but the good news is. However, they generally gaive up pretty quickly, so then I have athe gym justall for meyself again.

Try to not make the sentences too long (run-on sentence). It's better to split really long sentences up into smaller ones.

After gym a came back home and did another conversation with a girl from NYC, it was very cool.


After the gym aI came back home and dihad another conversation with a girl from NYC, it whichwas very cool.

After gym athe gym, I came back home and dihad another conversation with a girl from NYC, i. It was very cool.

After that I, studied a little bit more and now I'm here almost falling in sleep lol.


After that I, studied a little bit more, and now I'm hereon my bed almost falling in asleep lol.

After that I, studied a little bit more and. Right now, I'm here almost falling in asleep lol.

Good night for y'all BTW.


Good night for y'all BTW.everyone.

Good night forto y'all BTW.

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