Today was a holiday. I was woke up at 6.o clock in the morning.

First, I saiwaved my mother goodbye before she goes to thewent to work.

After that I malde meyself breakfast, which consisted of a sandwich with tea.

SoAfter that, I wasn't hungry anymore.

Then, I watched my favourite episodes on Cthe computer with my sister.

When we done she works for thefinished watching them, she works (walked?) to school there and makedid her homework there.

InDuring this time a, I read my books fromin the library for a paircouple of hours.

Then came my father came back and take iook us all to a restaurant .

Only my big brother doidn't caome.

We all eate chicken and Cchips with Ddrinks.

So that was my whol(a summary) of my entire day.

I hope you'll like it.

Not wrong, but better to say: I hope you like it.

Today was holiday. I was woken up at 6.o o'clock in the morning.

First, I said goodbye to my mother goodbye before she goeswent to the work.

keep the tense the same, if it's past tense, than everything else should be past tense

After that I malde meyself breakfast. It was a sandwich with tea.

I watch my favourite episodes on Cshows on the computer with my sister.

Episodes are particular. Show is the general word for a drama/whatever you watch like The Simpsons is a show, the part when Bart goes to Paris is called an episode.

When we are done, she works for the school there and makedoes her homework.

Assuming she's a student.

In this time a, I read my books from the library for a paircouple hours.

Pair is usually for things, like a pair of sneakers.

Then came my father came back and take iook us all to a restaurant .

Again, keep the tense.

Only my big brother doidn't caome.

past

We all eathad chicken and Chips with Dwith chips and drinks.

"Eat" is a weird word to use for drinking, so I think "had" can just be used here.

I hope you'll liked it.

Today was holiday. I was woken up at 6.o o'clock in the morning.

You could also say "I woke up at 6 o'clock"

First I said goodbye to my mother goodbye before she goeswent to the work.

After that I malde meyself a breakfast a sandwich with tea.

Or "I made myself breakfast, a sandwich with tea"

SoAfter that, I wasn't hungry anymore.

I watched my favourite episodes on Cthe computer with my sister.

When we done she works for the school there and makewere done she did her homework.

In this time a read read one of my books from the library for a paircouple hours.

You said "In this time", if you'd like to emphasize that these two things happened at the same time, I would combine the sentences: "When we were done, she did her homework and I read one of my books from the library for a couple of hours."

Then came my father came back and take iook us all to a restaurant .

Only my big brother doidn't caome.

We all eate chicken and Cchips with Ddrinks.

So tThat was my whole day.