Sept. 25, 2022
My day is always so first a wakeup at 5´clock then I go to brush a tooth and wash me in the tub and switch my clothes for the school then I make my breakfast a egg a tost with bread. I was playing on my computer until 7´clock . I take off my jacket packages my bag with everything my father gives me done the money for my lunch and a go with the subway to the school. The school ends then at afternoon I bought me anything go the home sometimes I also go to the library. When I am home I eat the food from my mom and next I do my homework. The rest of the day I read my book or I hear music of my phone and wait until my father came back from the work or my mom. Whem we are all there we eat dinner.
MEvery day is always so first aI wake up at 5´ o'clock t. Then I go to brush a tooth andbrush my teeth, wash me in the tub, and switchchange into my clothes for the school t. Then I make my breakfast a eggs and toast withfor breadkfast.
Instead of "wash in the tub" it would be more normal to say "take a shower". "I brush my teeth, take a shower, then get dressed".
I take off my jacket, packages my bag with everything my father gives me done the, get money for my lunch and a go withfrom my father, then take the subway to the school.
TheAfter school ends in then at afternoon I bought me anything go theusually go home, sometimes I also go to the library.
I'm not certain what you're trying to say with 'bought' here. Maybe you're trying to say:
"After school ends in the afternoon, I buy some things from the store and then go home. Sometimes I go to the library before going home."
When I am home I eat the food from my mom and nextmade, and then I do my homework.
Rephrased to make it sound more natural.
"When I am home I eat the food my mom left for me"
"When I am home I eat the food my mom made for me"
would also be more natural ways of saying this.
The rest of the day I read my book or I hearlisten to music ofn my phone and wait until my father caor mother comes back from the work or my mom.
Normally you say "listen to music", "I'm listening to music on my phone", "I like listening to music". I would say "I read a book or listen to music on my phone".
Whem we are all thern everyone is home we eat dinner.
Could say "when we are all home we eat dinner together", or "when everyone gets home we have dinner together"
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My day is always so first alike this: I wake up at 5´clock, then I go to brush a tooth and wash me in the tub and switchbrush my teeth and take a shower. I change my clothes befor the school, then I make myself a breakfast: an egg and a toast with bread.
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My day is always so first a wakeup at 5´clock then I go to brush a tooth and wash me in the tub and switch my clothes for the school then I make my breakfast a egg a tost with bread. My day is always
Instead of "wash in the tub" it would be more normal to say "take a shower". "I brush my teeth, take a shower, then get dressed". |
I was playing on my computer until 7´clock . I |
I take off my jacket packages my bag with everything my father gives me done the money for my lunch and a go with the subway to the school. I take off my jacket, pack I take off my jacket, pack |
The school ends then at afternoon I bought me anything go the home sometimes I also go to the library.
I'm not certain what you're trying to say with 'bought' here. Maybe you're trying to say: "After school ends in the afternoon, I buy some things from the store and then go home. Sometimes I go to the library before going home." |
When I am home I eat the food from my mom and next I do my homework. When I am home, I eat the food When I am home I eat the food Rephrased to make it sound more natural. "When I am home I eat the food my mom left for me" "When I am home I eat the food my mom made for me" would also be more natural ways of saying this. |
The rest of the day I read my book or I hear music of my phone and wait until my father came back from the work or my mom. The rest of the day I read The rest of the day I read my book or I Normally you say "listen to music", "I'm listening to music on my phone", "I like listening to music". I would say "I read a book or listen to music on my phone". |
Whem we are all there we eat dinner. Whe Whe Could say "when we are all home we eat dinner together", or "when everyone gets home we have dinner together" |
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