June 4, 2022
My Day
Today, I woke up around 8:15 am. I watered the plants,cleaned the house, called my sister and i was talking a few times. Then I ate liftover from yesterday. I was feeling tired that's why i went to bed and to lie down and watched tv.
In the evening, I took a shower because the weather is hot.
Notice: I put all the verbs in the simple past.
My Day
Today, I woke up around 8:15 am.
I watered the plants,cleaned the house, called my sister and i was talking(talked to her a few times.)?
Then I ate lieftovers from yesterday.
I was feeling tired, and that's why i went to bed, and to lie down and watched tv TV.
June 5, 2022
Thank you.
My Day
Today, I woke up around 8:15 am.
I watered the plants, cleaned the house, called my sister and i was talkingI spoke a few times.
Then I ate lieftovers from yesterday.
I was feeling tired that's why i, so I went to bed and to lie down and watched tv. TV.
In the evening, I took a shower because the weather iwas hot.
Notice: I put all the verbs in the simple past.
June 5, 2022
Thank you.
My Day
Today, I woke up around 8:15 am.
I watered the plants, cleaned the house, called my sister and iI was talking a few times.
While this "and I was talking a few times" is grammatically well-formed I don't understand what you mean by it.
Then I ate lieftovers from yesterday.
I was feeling tired, that's why i went to bed and to lie down and watched tv.
In the evening, I took a shower because the weather is hot.
Notice: I put all the verbs in the simple past.
"was talking"? ;)
Feedback
Nice work.
June 4, 2022
I watered the plants, cleaned the house, called my sister and iI was talking a few times.
Thank you for your help. apreciate it!
Imagine: first action: I call to my sister
second action: I talk with her.
That's why i said: ....called my sister and I was talking a few times( I talked, talked and talked for a long hours).
June 4, 2022
Thank you for your help. apreciate it! Imagine: first action: I call to my sister second action: I talk with her. That's why i said: ....called my sister and I was talking a few times( I talked, talked and talked for a long hours).
In that case I'd suggest: ...called my sister and we talked and talked.
June 4, 2022
Thank you for your help. apreciate it! Imagine: first action: I call to my sister second action: I talk with her. That's why i said: ....called my sister and I was talking a few times( I talked, talked and talked for a long hours).
And you're welcome. :)
June 5, 2022
Thank you. I got it!
June 5, 2022
Thank you. I understood.
June 5, 2022
Thank you. I understood.
I'm glad :-)
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I watered the plants,cleaned the house, called my sister and i was talking a few times. I watered the plants, cleaned the house, called my sister and While this "and I was talking a few times" is grammatically well-formed I don't understand what you mean by it. I watered the plants, cleaned the house, called my sister and I watered the plants,cleaned the house, called my sister and i |
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Then I ate liftover from yesterday. Then I ate l Then I ate l Then I ate l |
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I was feeling tired that's why i went to bed and to lie down and watched tv. I was feeling tired, that's why i went to bed I was feeling tired I was feeling tired, and that's why i went to bed, and to lie down and watch |
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In the evening, I took a shower because the weather is hot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the evening, I took a shower because the weather |
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Notice: I put all the verbs in the simple past. Notice: I put all the verbs in the simple past. "was talking"? ;) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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