Feb. 7, 2022
My day
I would like to tell you about my day. First, I wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock. Then I like to check global and local news and my email. After I start exercising. I love sports very much because it allows me to be in shape. Then I take a shower and finally have breakfast, almost always porridge with fruit. I want to add that this is my favorite food! Then there is time for work or study until lunch. My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat Indian food - palak paneer. Then I sleep a bit and continue to work. In the evening I like walking along the beach and when I get home I have dinner. After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertain me.
My dDay
Each content word in a title should be capitalized.
I would like to tell you about my day.
First, I wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock.
Then, I like to check global and local news, and my email.
I added in commas for better flow. :)
After that, I start exercising.
I love sports very much because it allows me to bethey help me stay in shape.
Then I take a shower, and finally I have breakfast, which is almost always porridge with fruit.
I want to add that this is my favorite food!
Then there is time for work or studying until lunch.
My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat an Indian food -called palak paneer most of all.
Then I sleep a bit and continue tokeep working.
In the evening, I like walking along the beach, and when I get home, I have dinner.
After dinner, I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertain meing.
My day
I would like to tell you about my day.
First, I wake up at 7 or 8 o'clock.
Then I like to check global and, local news, and my email.
After I startthat I exercisinge.
I love sports very much because it allows me to be in shape.
Then I take a shower and finally have breakfast, almost always porridge with fruit.
I want to add that this is my favorite food!
Then ithere is time for work or studying until lunch.
My lunch can consist of different things, but most of all I prefer to eat Indian food - like palak paneer.
Then I sleep a bit and continue to work.
Could also use "take a nap" to sound more natural.
In the evening I like walking along the beach and when I get home I have dinner.
After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertains me.
Feedback
I made palak paneer the other night, actually. Great post!
Feb. 7, 2022
Thank you so much!
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I love sports very much because it allows me to be in shape. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I love sports very much because |
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Then I take a shower and finally have breakfast, almost always porridge with fruit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then I take a shower, and finally I have breakfast, which is almost always porridge with fruit. |
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Then I sleep a bit and continue to work. Then I sleep a bit and continue to work. Could also use "take a nap" to sound more natural. Then I sleep a bit and |
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In the evening I like walking along the beach and when I get home I have dinner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the evening, I like walking along the beach, and when I get home, I have dinner. |
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After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that can entertain me. After dinner I watch some YouTube channels or do something else that After dinner, I watch some YouTube channels or do something else |
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