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Migueling

Dec. 27, 2021

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My Day

Today, It was a good day.. How every single day, I brush my teeth, I have a breakfast with a cup of coffee and I went to my office.. Today, It was day less busier than other days. It was just awfull that I had went to a client because he had a fault in his machine, I currently work in a factory that’s so demanding because I must be prepared for any thing what happens in the machine all the clients.

This happened about 3 pm and I get off my office at 5 pm. I thought that today I’ll be so late at home but fortunately I could resolved the fault in the machine quickly.

I get home about 6 pm, time I coming get home it’s rush hour so that I get home one hour late from I get off my work.

My wife usually cook but she currently study programming full stack and she doesn’t have to dinner every day, I often have to dinner but I as not good-cook as her.

And finally I go bed and write my daily routine because is a good practice for learning English and improve my skill.

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My Day

Today, It was a good day.. How e Every single day, I brush my teeth, I have a breakfast with a cup of coffee and I wentgo to my office.. Today, It However, today was day less busiery than other days.

Added "However" in the final sentence to relate back to the message, that "today was a good day".

It was just awfull that I had went to a client's because he had a fault in his machine,; I currently work in a factory that’s so demanding because I must be prepared for any thing wthat happens in the machinewith all the clients' machines.

This happened at about 3 pm and I get off my officework at 5 pm.

I thought that today I’ll'd be so late at homhome very late but fortunately I could resolved the fault in the machine quickly.

I'd = I would

I geot home at about 6 pm, time I coming get home i. It’s rush hour so that I geot home onean hour late fromafter I geot off my work.

Wasn't entirely sure what you tried to express here, hope I interpreted it correctly!

My wife usually cooks but she is currently study programming full -stack programming and she doesn’t have toime to prepare dinner every day,. I often have to cook dinner instead but I'm as not good- of a cook as her.

And fFinally, I go to bed and write my daily routine because it is a good practice for learning English and improveing my skills.

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I'm glad you managed to get home from work at a normal time, despite what happened! And, you're right – simply writing more is definitely the way to improve your writing skills.

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Migueling

Jan. 21, 2022

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Thanks so much for your corrections, I appreciate it a lot..

I thought that today I’ll be so late ato go back home but fortunately I could resolved the fault in the machine quickly.

My wife usually cooks but she is currently study programming full stack and she doesn’t have toime to cook dinner every day, I often have to cook dinner but I asm not as good- of a cook as her.

My Day


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Today, It was a good day.. How every single day, I brush my teeth, I have a breakfast with a cup of coffee and I went to my office.. Today, It was day less busier than other days.


Today, It was a good day.. How e Every single day, I brush my teeth, I have a breakfast with a cup of coffee and I wentgo to my office.. Today, It However, today was day less busiery than other days.

Added "However" in the final sentence to relate back to the message, that "today was a good day".

It was just awfull that I had went to a client because he had a fault in his machine, I currently work in a factory that’s so demanding because I must be prepared for any thing what happens in the machine all the clients.


It was just awfull that I had went to a client's because he had a fault in his machine,; I currently work in a factory that’s so demanding because I must be prepared for any thing wthat happens in the machinewith all the clients' machines.

This happened about 3 pm and I get off my office at 5 pm.


This happened at about 3 pm and I get off my officework at 5 pm.

I thought that today I’ll be so late at home but fortunately I could resolved the fault in the machine quickly.


I thought that today I’ll be so late ato go back home but fortunately I could resolved the fault in the machine quickly.

I thought that today I’ll'd be so late at homhome very late but fortunately I could resolved the fault in the machine quickly.

I'd = I would

I get home about 6 pm, time I coming get home it’s rush hour so that I get home one hour late from I get off my work.


I geot home at about 6 pm, time I coming get home i. It’s rush hour so that I geot home onean hour late fromafter I geot off my work.

Wasn't entirely sure what you tried to express here, hope I interpreted it correctly!

My wife usually cook but she currently study programming full stack and she doesn’t have to dinner every day, I often have to dinner but I as not good-cook as her.


My wife usually cooks but she is currently study programming full stack and she doesn’t have toime to cook dinner every day, I often have to cook dinner but I asm not as good- of a cook as her.

My wife usually cooks but she is currently study programming full -stack programming and she doesn’t have toime to prepare dinner every day,. I often have to cook dinner instead but I'm as not good- of a cook as her.

And finally I go bed and write my daily routine because is a good practice for learning English and improve my skill.


And fFinally, I go to bed and write my daily routine because it is a good practice for learning English and improveing my skills.

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