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courageuse19

Dec. 24, 2021

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My day.

After I woke up in this morning. I drunk a cup of lemon and tea. I hate to have a breakfast.
In this morning, my niece came into my room and told me. she is so sad because her dreams was not realised."

I was explaining her. You should think postive.then You will get you want by will.

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My day.

After I woke up in this morning.,

I druank a cup of lemon and tea.

"Drunk" is only used after "have" or "had," unless you are using it as an adjective.

I hate to have ahaving breakfast.

When talking about meals in general, we generally don't use articles.

In this morning, my niece came into my room and told me. that […]

This should have been combined with the next part.

she is so sad because her dreams was nothave not been realised.

Or "she was" and "had not been."
"Have not been realised" makes more sense to me since it implies that they still are not realised. However, if you mean to say that they were not realised at a certain point in time (maybe she wanted to achieve them before a certain date), "were not" would be fine.

I was explaining her.to her that […]

This should have been combined with the next part.

Y[…] you should think positive.tly. Then Yyou will get what you want by your own will.

"One" is often preferable to "you," when talking about people in general. You could also replace "you" with "she."

I was explaining her.


I was explaining her.to her that […]

This should have been combined with the next part.

My day.


My day.

After I woke up in this morning.


After I woke up in this morning.,

I drunk a cup of lemon and tea.


I druank a cup of lemon and tea.

"Drunk" is only used after "have" or "had," unless you are using it as an adjective.

I hate to have a breakfast.


I hate to have ahaving breakfast.

When talking about meals in general, we generally don't use articles.

In this morning, my niece came into my room and told me.


In this morning, my niece came into my room and told me. that […]

This should have been combined with the next part.

she is so sad because her dreams was not realised.


she is so sad because her dreams was nothave not been realised.

Or "she was" and "had not been." "Have not been realised" makes more sense to me since it implies that they still are not realised. However, if you mean to say that they were not realised at a certain point in time (maybe she wanted to achieve them before a certain date), "were not" would be fine.

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You should think postive.then You will get you want by will.


Y[…] you should think positive.tly. Then Yyou will get what you want by your own will.

"One" is often preferable to "you," when talking about people in general. You could also replace "you" with "she."

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