Nov. 2, 2020
My day
My sleeping schedule still messed up. I don't sleep yesterday. I pass all night on YouTube.
My plans for the day was ruined when a visitor came. I don't expect him, but isn't a problem. We talk all day and play Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. I can't study much today which make a little be sad
After the visitor has gone I feel tired and think that I would not study languages but, after a cup of coffee, my energies back did some activities.
Today I made A2 test and I pass, but I still unhappy with my English. Maybe I have to read and write more, I didn't this before. Always I learned vocab and listen to music and sometimes watch something.
Now I feel energized but I'll go to bed.
Good night.
My sleeping schedule is still messed up.
I doidn't sleep yesterday.
I passstayed up all night onwatching YouTube.
My plans for the day wasere ruined when a visitor came.
I doidn't expect him, but that isn't a problem.
We talked all day and played Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed.
I cadidn't study much today which makes me a little be sad.
After the visitor has goneleft, I feelt tired and thinkought that I would not study languages but, after a cup of coffee, my energies backy came back and I did some activities.
Today I made A2 test and I passpassed my A2 test, but I am still unhappy with my English.
Maybe I have to read and write more,. I didn't do this before.
Always I learned vocab andby listening to music and sometimes watch something.
Now I feel energized, but I'll go to bed.
Feedback
Good job overall -- pretty understandable overall what you want to convey. A couple of tense errors and awkward sentences, but still pretty readable. Keep up the good work and don't get discouraged!
Nov. 2, 2020
Ok. Thank you
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Good night. |
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My day |
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My sleeping schedule still messed up. My sleeping schedule is still messed up. |
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I don't sleep yesterday. I d |
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I pass all night on YouTube. I |
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My plans for the day was ruined when a visitor came. My plans for the day w |
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I don't expect him, but isn't a problem. I d |
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We talk all day and play Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. We talked all day and played Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. |
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I can't study much today which make a little be sad I |
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After the visitor has gone I feel tired and think that I would not study languages but, after a cup of coffee, my energies back did some activities. After the visitor |
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Today I made A2 test and I pass, but I still unhappy with my English. Today I |
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Maybe I have to read and write more, I didn't this before. Maybe I have to read and write more |
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Always I learned vocab and listen to music and sometimes watch something.
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Now I feel energized but I'll go to bed. Now I feel energized, but I'll go to bed. |
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