Dec. 15, 2025
My Daughter’s Hair
When I got home, my daughter looked at my face and kept trying to tell me something. It seemed like she was urging me to notice something, but I couldn’t figure out what it was.
In the end, it turned out that she had her hair cut at the salon.
She said, “Why could you not notice?” but there was nothing I could do about it.
帰宅すると、娘がぼくの顔を見て、しきりに何かを訴えてくる。何かに気づけと言っているようなのだが、よく分からない。結局のところ、娘は美容室で髪を切ってきたのだった。「なんで気づけないの」と言われたが、仕方ないよね。
My Daughter’s Hair
When I got home, my daughter kept lookeding at my face and kepte, trying to tell me something.
The original sentence is not wrong, I think looking at my face is a little unnatural, I think "looked at me" is more natural. "My daughter looked at me and kept trying to tell me something" is okay.
It seemed like she was urging me to notice something, but I couldn’t figure out what it was.
In the end, it turned out that she had cut her hair cut at the salon.
The original sentence is okay grammatically, but I think it's a little unnatural.
She said, “Why couldn't you not notice?” but there was nothing I could do about it.
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Nice work! It makes sense, however, your word order makes it a little formal I think.
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Thank you for your corrections and advice.
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When I got home, my daughter looked at my face and kept trying to tell me something. When I got home, my daughter kept look The original sentence is not wrong, I think looking at my face is a little unnatural, I think "looked at me" is more natural. "My daughter looked at me and kept trying to tell me something" is okay. |
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It seemed like she was urging me to notice something, but I couldn’t figure out what it was. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the end, it turned out that she had her hair cut at the salon. In the end, it turned out that she had cut her hair The original sentence is okay grammatically, but I think it's a little unnatural. |
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She said, “Why could you not notice?” but there was nothing I could do about it. She said, “Why couldn't you |
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