March 7, 2020
My daughter
I love my daughter. Her name is Hanna. She looks like me and her behavior is also likes me. I won’t leave her by herself because she’s my treasure.
I love my daughter.
Her name is Hanna.
She looks like me and sher behavior is also acts likes me.
My daughter
I love my daughter.
Her name is Hanna.
She looks like me and her behavior is alsoacts likes me, too.
So to fix the grammar, we can just say "her behavior is also like mine."
However, I tried to make this a little more natural.
I won’t leave her by herself because she’s my treasure.
This is OK, but to me it sounds a little better to leave out "by herself." Saying “leave <a person>" by itself captures what you are trying to say.
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初めまして！親切なお母さん見たいと思いますね。
僕はエイダンと申します。If you ever want to practice talking to someone, you are welcome to message me!
よろしくお願いしま！
My daughter
I love my daughter.
Her name is Hanna.
She looks like me and her behaviour is also likes me.
I won’t leave her by herselfalone because she’s my treasure.
Another way you could say it is 'I'll always be by her side because she's my treasure.'
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Well done!
My daughter
I love my daughter.
Her name is Hanna.
She looks like me and her behavior is also likes me.
She looks and behaves like meの方がネイティブ
I won’t leave her by herself because she’s my treasure.
Alternative: I won't ever abandon her because she is my treasure.
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Hanna is very lucky to have a mother who cares so much about her!
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March 8, 2020
Thank you very much!!
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