After that I made breakfast, cleaned my flat and made the lunch.

If you're in the US or Canada, I would recommend saying "apartment" instead of "flat"

AtIn the afternoon my wife and I we went to the shopping center, which is called Santa Fe.

In my city there is a Hholiday which is called " Feria de las flores" and for that reason, many places in my city they are preparations for the holiday that is cooming sooning for it.

In the Santa Fe shopping center there were some allegorical sculptures ofrom birds and sea animals and a gigantic hot air balloon all of there girded many flowers.

What do you mean by "allegorical sculptures"? Does the hot air balloon have the flowers?

It was so beautiful and my wife was happy, l. Later we takeook our motorbike and rode back home, finally we and watched a Netflisx serie bs. But she doesidn't enjoy it.

In the morning, I work as a house husband at the morning and atnd in the afternoon I am an English student and writter.

What do you mean by house husband? In the US we would use the term "stay at home husband" to mean that someone does not have a full time job but their partner / wife does.

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Hey there friends.,

A comma is more usual than a full stop after starting with this letter style intro.

Yesterday I began my work in the best (possible) way, atin the morning I takeook out my cat and walked together walked around the gardens of my flat condominium.

Best way is correct, best possible way is a little more natural for this point.

Flat is UK English, condominium is US English, normally you’d pick one rather than combine them

After that I made breakfast, cleaned my flat and made the lunch.

AtIn the afternoon my wife and I we went to thea shopping center which is called Santa Fe.

“The” is more for things previously known or introduced

In my city there is a Hholiday which is called " Feria de las flores" and for that reason many places in my city they arehave been preparationsed for the holiday that is cooming soon.

In the Santa Fe shopping center there were some allegorical sculptures, ranging from birds and sea animals andto a gigantic hot air balloon, all of there girdedm surrounded by many flowers.

Girded is very niche vocab- don’t expect your average native speaker to know it

It was so beautiful and my wife was happy, later we takeook our motorbike and rode back home, finally we watched a Netflisx series but she doesn'id’t enjoy it.

“Took” is the active past tense of “take”. (There’s also “taken” which is the passive past tense, but you want “took” here)

If you are wondering “what is my job?”

Better to quote the thought you’re assigning to the reader

I work as a househusband atin the morning and atin the afternoon English student and writter.

When it comes to time, normally “in” is used for larger periods like morning or afternoon, while at is used for precise periods like 9pm, “the crack of dawn”, etc.

During can also be used for large periods and for for very large peeps like years or months is more natural

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Hey there friends.i guys!

This is more common

Yesterday, I began my work in the best way, at; in the morning I takeook out my cat and together walkedwalked my cat around the gardens of my flat condominium.

run on sentence

After that, I made breakfast, cleaned my flat, and made the lunch.

This is how to use commas:

I went to the park, sat on a chair, and then walked back home

3 commas

At theIn afternoon, my wife and I we went to the sSanta Fe Shopping cCenter which is called Santa Fe.

"At" is for locations and you don't need we here. You can use proper nouns to make this sentence shorter

In my city, there is a Holiday which is called " Feria de las flores", and for that reason many places in my city they are preparations for the holiday that is cooming soon.ing for it.

In the Santa Fe shopping center, there were some allegorical sculptures from birds and sea animals and a gigantic hot air balloon all of there girded many flowers.

"allegorical " ?

It was so beautiful and my wife was happy, l! Later, we takeook our motorbike and rode back home, f. Finally, we watched a Netflis sx Series, but she doesidn't enjoy it.

Past tense is important, commas are important, checking for run on sentences is important.

If you areYou're probably wondering what is my job? is.

This is how we say it

I work as a househusband atin the morning and atin the afternoon, I become a English student and writter.

I work as a househusband in the morning and in the afternoon, I become a English student and writer.

My daily text.

Yesterday, I began my work in the best way, at. In the morning I takeook out my cat and together we walked around the gardens of my flat condominium.

Or "we walked together." Also you say "flat" or "condominium" but not both (most people would say "condo" as opposed to "condominium").

If you want to get fancy, you could say "Yesterday, I began my work in the best way: ..."

After that I made breakfast, cleaned my flat and made the lunch.

AtIn the afternoon my wife and I we went to the shopping center, which is called Santa Fe.

In my city there is a Holiday which is called " Feria de las flores," and for that reason many places in my city they are preparationsing for the holiday thatwhich is cooming soon.

You could say "and for that reason..." but I think my correction is more natural. For "preparations" you could instead say "...many places in my city are in preparations for..." instead. Sorry about the "that" vs "which," I think it is pretty subjective but "that" felt wrong.

I might reorganize the sentence entirely, to be honest with you:
"Many places in my city are preparing for the holiday that is coming soon, which is called 'Feria de las flores.'"
I think this sounds better/more natural but that's just me

In the Santa Fe shopping center, there were some allegorical sculptures ofrom birds and sea animals and a gigantic hot air balloon all of there girded manywhich were all draped with flowers.

Not sure if you mean allegorical or something else? Allegory is something that is referencing another story; so like if the sculpture of the birds was a scene from or reference to a story that would be allegorical.

You could say "which all had flowers hanging on them" or "draped on them" instead. That might be more colloquial than what I wrote, which is kind of formal. You used "girded" correctly, but people would look at you funny for saying it.

It was so beautiful, and my wife was happy, l. Later we takeook our motorbike and rode back home, f. Finally, we watched a Netflisx series, but she doesidn't enjoy it.

You could say "she doesn't enjoy it" if it is a series she doesn't like, but I thought you meant she did not enjoy watching it with you at the time.
I think this sounded more natural broken into a few sentences, but there is probably a way to make it just one or two that would also be alright.