My daily routine(1)

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I normally wake up at 7:00 am every morning. Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I sleep again for 10 to 20 minutes.
I turn off the alarm on my phone, get out of bed and go to the bathroom.
I don’t like to skip breakfast, so I prepare it. Usually I eat rice or oats for my breakfast.
During breakfast, I often watch YouTube videos. I like watching videos from BBC learning English, Smosh Reddit reading, or something interesting, especially about language learning. After breakfast I need to get dressed. I change out of my pajamas. I usually wear jeans, black pants, T-shirts and hoodies at my work. I wash my face and brush my teeth. Then I pack my bag. I put my thermos and some aprons, they’re my workwear, in my bag.
I go down the stairs and leave the apartment. I commute to work by car every day.While I’m going to work I often listen to podcasts in English or Russian.
It takes me about 20 minutes to get to my workplace.

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My daily routine(1)

I normally wake up at 7:00 am every morning.

Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I fall asleep again for another 10 to 20 minutes.

The original is okay, but this feels better. I don't know why, sorry...

[Then,] I turn off the alarm on my phone, get out of bed and go to the bathroom.

Optional, but flows better

I don’t like to skip breakfast, so I prepare it.

Usually I eat rice or oats for my breakfast.

During breakfast, I often watch YouTube videos.

I like watching videos from BBC to learn~~ing~~ English, reading the Smosh Rsubreddit ~~reading~~, or something else interesting, especially about language learning.

Couldn't tell exactly what you meant to say, the other person's correction is probably correct (editing my correction because I just saw that)
without including "else" it sounds like you're saying the other things you listed AREN'T interesting by contrast

After breakfast I need to get dressed.

I change out of my pajamas.

I usually wear jeans, black pants, T-shirts and hoodies at my work.

Idk why, but even though we say "my job" we don't really say "my work." "work" by itself to refer to your job is fine
In other contexts "my work" is fine, when you're referring to the actual work that was done, ie. "My work was displayed in an art gallery," "My work with them went well."

I wash my face and brush my teeth.

Then I pack my bag.

I put my thermos and some aprons, (they’re my workwear,) in my bag.

I go down the stairs and leave the apartment.

I commute to work by car every day.

While I’m going to work

I often listen to podcasts in English or Russian.

It takes me about 20 minutes to get to my workplace.

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Smosh is still around?? Man, I remember watching them when I was like 13 (so around 2010?)

vikingschism

My daily routine(1)

I normally wake up at 7:00 am every morning.

Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I sleep again for 10 to 20 minutes.

I turn off the alarm on my phone, get out of bed and go to the bathroom.

I don’t like to skip breakfast, so I prepare it.

Usually I eat rice or oats for my breakfast.

During breakfast, I often watch YouTube videos.

I like watching videos from BBC lLearning English, Smosh Reddit rReading, or something interesting, especially about language learning.

I'm guessing these are youtube channels. For clarity it is best to use title case (capitalise every word besides minor ones such as "the" or "a").

After breakfast, I need to get dressed.

I change out of my pajamas.

I usually wear jeans, black pants, T-shirts and hoodies at my work.

I wash my face and brush my teeth.

Then I pack my bag.

I put my thermos and some aprons, they’re my workwear, in my bag.

I go down the stairs and leave the apartment.

I commute to work by car every day.

While I’m going to work

I often listen to podcasts in English or Russian.

It takes me about 20 minutes to get to my workplace.

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I normally wake up at 7:00 am every morning.

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Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I sleep again for 10 to 20 minutes.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes I feel like sleeping a little more, so I fall asleep again for another 10 to 20 minutes.

The original is okay, but this feels better. I don't know why, sorry...

I turn off the alarm on my phone, get out of bed and go to the bathroom.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

[Then,] I turn off the alarm on my phone, get out of bed and go to the bathroom.

Optional, but flows better

Then I pack my bag.

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I don’t like to skip breakfast, so I prepare it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Usually I eat rice or oats for my breakfast.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During breakfast, I often watch YouTube videos.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like watching videos from BBC learning English, Smosh Reddit reading, or something interesting, especially about language learning.

I like watching videos from BBC lLearning English, Smosh Reddit rReading, or something interesting, especially about language learning.

I'm guessing these are youtube channels. For clarity it is best to use title case (capitalise every word besides minor ones such as "the" or "a").

I like watching videos from BBC to learn~~ing~~ English, reading the Smosh Rsubreddit ~~reading~~, or something else interesting, especially about language learning.

Couldn't tell exactly what you meant to say, the other person's correction is probably correct (editing my correction because I just saw that) without including "else" it sounds like you're saying the other things you listed AREN'T interesting by contrast

After breakfast I need to get dressed.

After breakfast, I need to get dressed.

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I change out of my pajamas.

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I usually wear jeans, black pants, T-shirts and hoodies at my work.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually wear jeans, black pants, T-shirts and hoodies at my work.

Idk why, but even though we say "my job" we don't really say "my work." "work" by itself to refer to your job is fine In other contexts "my work" is fine, when you're referring to the actual work that was done, ie. "My work was displayed in an art gallery," "My work with them went well."

I wash my face and brush my teeth.

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I put my thermos and some aprons, they’re my workwear, in my bag.

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I put my thermos and some aprons, (they’re my workwear,) in my bag.

I go down the stairs and leave the apartment.

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I commute to work by car every day.

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While I’m going to work

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I often listen to podcasts in English or Russian.

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It takes me about 20 minutes to get to my workplace.

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I work from 8:30 am to around 6:00pm every day.

I don’t prepare lunch for work because my workplace serves lunch for employees.

It’s one of my favorite things about my work.

I teach English to children at school.

My tasks really vary, there are so many things to do.

But I like my job at the moment.

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