Dec. 18, 2021
My daily routine
Nothing happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored. I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually say - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity. Unfortunately, I didn't solve that problem yet, the fact that I am sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and just wrote 4 lines proves that, so I will just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine. It isn't very interesting, but it's what we have for today.
I don't have an alarm clock, but I wake up early anyway. The first thing I do is to have breakfast and brush my teeth. Then I make a to-do list and decide where to start, it can vary depending on the day, but there are a few things that I do every day: read, work out, and study french. Since I'm on vacation I don't have to go to school and can focus on studying french, which is my main concern at the moment. I also write and publish these journals three times a week and practice English with other people twice a week. I can't study English every day (because I don't have time), but I try to keep in touch with the language so I won't forget it.
My daily routine
Nothing has happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored.
Good sentence!
I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually saytalk about - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity.
Unfortunately, I didhaven't solved that problem yet, and the fact that I am've been sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and justonly wroitten 4 lines just proves that, so I wi'll just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine.
Using "haven't solved" instead of "didn't solve" sounds more natural here, because you're talking about consequences in the present.
I corrected "I will" to "I'll" since you've mostly been using contractions so far, so it seemed reasonable.
It isn't very interesting, but it's what weI have for today.
"we" sounds a bit off, since it's *you* in particular who's writing.
I don't have an alarm clock, but I wake up early anyway.
The first thing I do is to have breakfast and brush my teeth.
Then I make a to-do list and decide where to start, it can vary depending on the day, but there are a few things that I do every day: read, work out, and study french.
Since I'm on vacation I don't have to go to school and can focus on studying french, which is my main concern at the moment.
I also write and publish these journals three times a week and practice English with other people twice a week.
I can't study English every day (because I don't have time), but I try to keep in touch with the language so I won't forget it.
Feedback
Your style comes across very native-like, and I especially like your (mostly) consistent use of contractions. Overall, well-written, and good luck with more journal ideas! :)
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My daily routine This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nothing happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored. Nothing has happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored. Good sentence! |
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I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually say - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity. I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually |
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Unfortunately, I didn't solve that problem yet, the fact that I am sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and just wrote 4 lines proves that, so I will just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine. Unfortunately, I Using "haven't solved" instead of "didn't solve" sounds more natural here, because you're talking about consequences in the present. I corrected "I will" to "I'll" since you've mostly been using contractions so far, so it seemed reasonable. |
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It isn't very interesting, but it's what we have for today. It isn't very interesting, but it's what "we" sounds a bit off, since it's *you* in particular who's writing. |
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I don't have an alarm clock, but I wake up early anyway. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The first thing I do is to have breakfast and brush my teeth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then I make a to-do list and decide where to start, it can vary depending on the day, but there are a few things that I do every day: read, work out, and study french. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since I'm on vacation I don't have to go to school and can focus on studying french, which is my main concern at the moment. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also write and publish these journals three times a week and practice English with other people twice a week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can't study English every day (because I don't have time), but I try to keep in touch with the language so I won't forget it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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