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thomyduran

Nov. 29, 2024

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My daily rotine

Hi everyone, Im Thomy.
Today im want to talk about mi daily routine that i made for practice and improve my english.
I have only 1 month to improve mi english, so i made a table with differents activities that i have to develop during the day. First i woke up early and i start doing meditation, thats for start my day in totally calm. Then i practice my listening english with a website that the name is "Lyricstraining", i really recommended for people who wants to improve their english like me, the grace of this, is to complete the sentence wile you listen the song. The next step is to go to do exercise at the gym for 2 hours, but when i walk to the Gym, i listen short podcast in english. Then, when i arrive to my house, i eat something, i bathe, and start my new task, that is reading an article in english, take notes and then write what i learn or what i understood in this website. Finally in the night, before i go to sleep, i see a chapter of Stranger Things, this series i saw it like 3-4 years ago, but at this time, im repeating it but in english. I think that this would be a good idea, because im contextualizated of the plot.
I really need to improve my english, beacause in one month im going to start working in a company who use a lot the english lenguage, so i dont want to be out of date. I hope not to fail any day.
What do you think about my daily routine?
What do you think about my english?
You can recommended something for to improve my english? Like an app, website, or general comments
I really apreciate your comments.

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My daily routine

Maybe you can be more specific with the title. Perhaps title your work "My daily English learning routine".

Hi everyone, I'm Thomy.

Today imI want to talk about miy daily routine that iI made for practiceing and improveing my eEnglish.

I have only 1 month to improve mi ey English, so iI made a table with differents activities that i have to develop during exercises to do throughout the day.

First iI woake up early in the morning and i start doing meditation, thats forng so that I start my day in totally calm.

Then iI practice my English listening englishskills with a website that the name iscalled "Lyricstraining", i. I really recommended it for people who wants to improve their eEnglish like me, the grace of this, is to complete the sentence. The basic idea of Lyricstraining is that you transcribe the lyrics while you listening to the song.

The next step is to go to do exercise atNext I work out in the gym for 2 hours, but when i. While I walk to the Ggym, iI listen to a short podcast in eEnglish.

Then, when iI arrive to my house, iback at home I eat something, iI bathe, and I start my newxt task, that is. This next task consists in reading an article in eEnglish, takeing notes and then writeing about what iI learned or what iI understood ion this website.

"Bathe" is a word that to me has fallen out of fashion. Saying something like "take a shower" would sound better in my opinion.

Finally in theat night, before iI go to sleep, i see a chapterI watch an episode of Stranger Things, this series i saw it like 3-4 years ago, but . I already watched Stranger Things in Spanish like 3-4 years ago with the catch now being that this time, i I'm repeatwatching it but in eEnglish.

I think that this would be a good idea, because im contextualizated ofI'm already familiar with the plot.

I really need to improve my eEnglish, beacause in one month iI'm going to start working in a company who use a lot the english lenguage, so iich extensively uses English. I don't want to be out of date.

On an additional note, "Out of date" is more so reserved for machinery and not people.

I hope not to fail any dayto be successful in preparing to integrate myself into an English speaking workplace.

This sentence is vague so I made it more specific using context from the preceding sentences.

What do you think about my daily routine?

What do you think about my eEnglish?

You can recommended somethingCan you give me recommendations for to improveing my eEnglish?

Like anSuggestions for apps, websites, or just general comments would be awesome.
I really ap
preciate your comments.

Feedback

Overall, I felt that you communicated your points pretty well. One month sounds like a tight timeframe to get yourself prepared to take on a job where English is very prevalent. And in that, I wish you the best of luck in achieving the sufficient level. Adding onto finachiino's comment mentioning iTalki, if I had to give you some recommendations I would also recommend studying every day through a spaced-repetition flashcard program like Anki especially for making flashcards on each correction you receive. Personally, I used Gabriel Wyner's "Fluent Forever" guide and flashcard formats to accomplish this well.
Otherwise, keep putting in the effort and you'll continue to improve.

And thank you once again for correcting one of my works last week : )

My daily routine

Hi everyone, I'm Thomy.

Today imI want to talk about miy daily routine that iI made forto practice and improve my eEnglish.

I have only 1 month to improve mi ey English, so iI made a table with differents activities that iI have to developwork on during the day.

First i, I woake up early and i start doing meditation, thats foro start my day in totally calma calm mood/state of mind.

Then iI practice my English listening english with a website that the name iscalled "Lyricstraining", i. I really recommended this for people who wants to improve their eEnglish, like me, t. The graceoal of this, is to complete the sentence while you listen to the song.

The next step is to go to doand exercise at the gym for 2 hours, but when iI walk to the Ggym, iI listen to short podcasts in eEnglish.

Then, when iI arrive ato my house, iI eat something, i bathe, and start mya new task, that which is reading an article in eEnglish,. I take notes and then write what iI learned or what i understood inon/from this website.

Finally in the, at night, before iI go to sleep, i see a chapterI watch an episode of Stranger Things, thise series iI saw it like 3-4 years ago, but a. But this time, iI'm repeating it but in eEnglish.

Are you talking about the show or the book? If it's the show, it should be "watch an episode". If it's the book, it would be "read a chapter".

I think that this would be a good idea, because im contextualizatedI know the context of the plot.

I really need to improve my eEnglish, beacause in one month iI'm going to start working in a company who use a lotthat uses the eEnglish leanguage a lot, so i don't want to be out of date.

I hope not toI won't fail any day.

What do you think about my daily routine?

What do you think about my eEnglish?

YCou can recommended something for told you give me recommendations on how I can improve my eEnglish?

Like an app, website, or general comments ?
I
will really appreciate your comments.

Feedback

Your English is good! You know how to explain a series of ideas well. Your routine is also great and gives you lots of good practice! If possible, try using an app or website like italki and find some tutors that can help you with speaking English and having conversations. Other than that, keep up the good work and good luck on your improvement journey!

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thomyduran

Nov. 30, 2024

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Thank you man, I really appreciate your corrections and your comments.!
And I will try you recomendations of italki website!.

My daily rotine


My daily routine

My daily routine

Maybe you can be more specific with the title. Perhaps title your work "My daily English learning routine".

Hi everyone, Im Thomy.


Hi everyone, I'm Thomy.

Hi everyone, I'm Thomy.

Today im want to talk about mi daily routine that i made for practice and improve my english.


Today imI want to talk about miy daily routine that iI made forto practice and improve my eEnglish.

Today imI want to talk about miy daily routine that iI made for practiceing and improveing my eEnglish.

I have only 1 month to improve mi english, so i made a table with differents activities that i have to develop during the day.


I have only 1 month to improve mi ey English, so iI made a table with differents activities that iI have to developwork on during the day.

I have only 1 month to improve mi ey English, so iI made a table with differents activities that i have to develop during exercises to do throughout the day.

First i woke up early and i start doing meditation, thats for start my day in totally calm.


First i, I woake up early and i start doing meditation, thats foro start my day in totally calma calm mood/state of mind.

First iI woake up early in the morning and i start doing meditation, thats forng so that I start my day in totally calm.

Then i practice my listening english with a website that the name is "Lyricstraining", i really recommended for people who wants to improve their english like me, the grace of this, is to complete the sentence wile you listen the song.


Then iI practice my English listening english with a website that the name iscalled "Lyricstraining", i. I really recommended this for people who wants to improve their eEnglish, like me, t. The graceoal of this, is to complete the sentence while you listen to the song.

Then iI practice my English listening englishskills with a website that the name iscalled "Lyricstraining", i. I really recommended it for people who wants to improve their eEnglish like me, the grace of this, is to complete the sentence. The basic idea of Lyricstraining is that you transcribe the lyrics while you listening to the song.

The next step is to go to do exercise at the gym for 2 hours, but when i walk to the Gym, i listen short podcast in english.


The next step is to go to doand exercise at the gym for 2 hours, but when iI walk to the Ggym, iI listen to short podcasts in eEnglish.

The next step is to go to do exercise atNext I work out in the gym for 2 hours, but when i. While I walk to the Ggym, iI listen to a short podcast in eEnglish.

Then, when i arrive to my house, i eat something, i bathe, and start my new task, that is reading an article in english, take notes and then write what i learn or what i understood in this website.


Then, when iI arrive ato my house, iI eat something, i bathe, and start mya new task, that which is reading an article in eEnglish,. I take notes and then write what iI learned or what i understood inon/from this website.

Then, when iI arrive to my house, iback at home I eat something, iI bathe, and I start my newxt task, that is. This next task consists in reading an article in eEnglish, takeing notes and then writeing about what iI learned or what iI understood ion this website.

"Bathe" is a word that to me has fallen out of fashion. Saying something like "take a shower" would sound better in my opinion.

Finally in the night, before i go to sleep, i see a chapter of Stranger Things, this series i saw it like 3-4 years ago, but at this time, im repeating it but in english.


Finally in the, at night, before iI go to sleep, i see a chapterI watch an episode of Stranger Things, thise series iI saw it like 3-4 years ago, but a. But this time, iI'm repeating it but in eEnglish.

Are you talking about the show or the book? If it's the show, it should be "watch an episode". If it's the book, it would be "read a chapter".

Finally in theat night, before iI go to sleep, i see a chapterI watch an episode of Stranger Things, this series i saw it like 3-4 years ago, but . I already watched Stranger Things in Spanish like 3-4 years ago with the catch now being that this time, i I'm repeatwatching it but in eEnglish.

I think that this would be a good idea, because im contextualizated of the plot.


I think that this would be a good idea, because im contextualizatedI know the context of the plot.

I think that this would be a good idea, because im contextualizated ofI'm already familiar with the plot.

I really need to improve my english, beacause in one month im going to start working in a company who use a lot the english lenguage, so i dont want to be out of date.


I really need to improve my eEnglish, beacause in one month iI'm going to start working in a company who use a lotthat uses the eEnglish leanguage a lot, so i don't want to be out of date.

I really need to improve my eEnglish, beacause in one month iI'm going to start working in a company who use a lot the english lenguage, so iich extensively uses English. I don't want to be out of date.

On an additional note, "Out of date" is more so reserved for machinery and not people.

I hope not to fail any day.


I hope not toI won't fail any day.

I hope not to fail any dayto be successful in preparing to integrate myself into an English speaking workplace.

This sentence is vague so I made it more specific using context from the preceding sentences.

What do you think about my daily routine?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What do you think about my english?


What do you think about my eEnglish?

What do you think about my eEnglish?

You can recommended something for to improve my english?


YCou can recommended something for told you give me recommendations on how I can improve my eEnglish?

You can recommended somethingCan you give me recommendations for to improveing my eEnglish?

Like an app, website, or general comments I really apreciate your comments.


Like an app, website, or general comments ?
I
will really appreciate your comments.

Like anSuggestions for apps, websites, or just general comments would be awesome.
I really ap
preciate your comments.

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