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yudma82

July 30, 2022

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My daily life

Hi everyone,

I hope it will be nice experience to practice my writing skills in English and help others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

It is Saturday morning, I do not have plans for the day therefore I am starting from doing my homework. Recently I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as improving my general English level significantly. For this I need to practice. I promised myself to spent 15 minutes everyday but unfortunately do not do it.

It is too hot outside for any journey. Even going for a short walk is not an option. The sea also is dangerous in this period since Jellyfishes are all other the sea.
So making homework and writing my first assay seems to be a best choice for this morning.

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My daily life

Hi everyone,

I hope it will be a nice experience to practice my writing skills in English and help others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

It is Saturday morning,. I do not have plans for the day therefore, so I am starting fromby doing my homework.

Recently I have startI have recently joined an English class and would like to achieve my goals assignificantly improvinge my general English level significantly.

For this I need to practice.

I promised myself toI will spentd 15 minutes studying every day but u. Unfortunately do not do it, I haven't managed to keep that promise.

It is too hot outside for any journey.to travel.

The sea also is dangerous inat this period since Jellyfishes are all other the seatime of year, there are jellyfish everywhere.

So makdoing homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice foroption this morning.

My dDaily lLife

Capitalize titles.

It is Saturday morning, and I do not have plans for the day t. Therefore, I am starting fromwith doing my homework.

Alt: "So, I am starting with..."

Recently I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals asto improvinge my general English level significantly.

For this to happen, I need to practice.

I promised myself to spentd 15 minutes every day but unfortunately do not do it.

It is too hot outside for any journeyto do anything.

Suggesting "to do anything" because it sounds more natural.

The sea also is dangerous in this period since Jjellyfishes are all othver the sea.

More common to see the plural form of jellyfish as written above.

So mak, doing my homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice for this morning.

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Great job!

I hope it will be nicea pleasant experience to practiceing my writing skills in English and helping others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

It is Saturday morning,. I do not have plans for the day therefore I am starting from doingon my homework.

Recently, I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as of significantly improving my general English level significantly.

For thisTo meet this goal, I need to practice.

I promised myself toI would spentd 15 minutes every day, but unfortunately do not do, I have not been doing it.

It is too hot outside for any journey.

TGoing into the sea is also is dangerous since this period since Jellyfishes are all other the seaere are a lot of jellyfish in the water.

The other sentence was a bit awkward, I think something like this works better :)

So making, doing my homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice for this morning.

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Good work! :)

My daily life

Hi everyone,

I thopeught it willould be nice experience to practice my writing skills in English and help others with their Russian and Hebrew languages.

It is Saturday morning, and I do not have any plans for the day therefore I am. I’ve just startinged from doing my homework.

Recently I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as of improving my general English level significantly.

ForTo achieve this I need to practice.

I promised myself to spent 15 minutes everyday but unfortunately do not doI haven’t been doing it.

It is too hot outside for any journey.

Even going for a short walk is not an option.

The seaOcean swimming is also is dangerous in this period since Jjellyfishes are all othereverywhere this time of the syear.

So makdoing homework and writing my first aessay seems to be amy best choice for this morningbet today.

Always doing homework. Never making.

I hope it will be a nice experience to practice my writing skills in English, and help others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

It i's Saturday morning, I do non't have plans for the day therefore I am starting from doingwith my homework.

These are correct - but it sounds more natural to use the contractions

Recently I haveI have recently started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as to improvinge my general English level significantly.

It is too hot outside for any journey.

It's too hot outside to travel.

The sea also is dangerous in this periodnow, since Jellyfishes are all other the seaver.

So making homework and writing my first aessay seems to be a best choice for this morning.

Feedback

Your journal was great! No glaring errors and all very understandable. I just made some small corrections to sound more natural. Great work :) Stay safe with the jellyfish!

I hope it will be nice experience to practiceing my writing skills in English and helping others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

It is Saturday morning, and, since I do not have plans for the day therefore, I am starting fromby doing my homework.

Recently, I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as of significantly improving my general English level significantly.

I promised myself tohat I would spentd 15 minutes everyday but unfortunately doI have not done it.

The sea is also is dangerous in this period since Jellyfishes are all other the seathere are a lot of jellyfish in the water.

I changed this one a little more, I think it gets at what you mean. :-)

So makdoing homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice for this morning.

Feedback

Good job! It's hot here, too, and I spend way too much time inside. I can't wait for autumn.

My daily life


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My dDaily lLife

Capitalize titles.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hi everyone,


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I hope it will be nice experience to practice my writing skills in English and help others with Russian and Hebrew languages.


I hope it will be nice experience to practiceing my writing skills in English and helping others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

I hope it will be a nice experience to practice my writing skills in English, and help others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

I thopeught it willould be nice experience to practice my writing skills in English and help others with their Russian and Hebrew languages.

I hope it will be nicea pleasant experience to practiceing my writing skills in English and helping others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

I hope it will be a nice experience to practice my writing skills in English and help others with Russian and Hebrew languages.

It is Saturday morning, I do not have plans for the day therefore I am starting from doing my homework.


It is Saturday morning, and, since I do not have plans for the day therefore, I am starting fromby doing my homework.

It i's Saturday morning, I do non't have plans for the day therefore I am starting from doingwith my homework.

These are correct - but it sounds more natural to use the contractions

It is Saturday morning, and I do not have any plans for the day therefore I am. I’ve just startinged from doing my homework.

It is Saturday morning,. I do not have plans for the day therefore I am starting from doingon my homework.

It is Saturday morning, and I do not have plans for the day t. Therefore, I am starting fromwith doing my homework.

Alt: "So, I am starting with..."

It is Saturday morning,. I do not have plans for the day therefore, so I am starting fromby doing my homework.

Recently I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as improving my general English level significantly.


Recently, I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as of significantly improving my general English level significantly.

Recently I haveI have recently started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as to improvinge my general English level significantly.

Recently I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as of improving my general English level significantly.

Recently, I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals as of significantly improving my general English level significantly.

Recently I have started an English class and would like to achieve my goals asto improvinge my general English level significantly.

Recently I have startI have recently joined an English class and would like to achieve my goals assignificantly improvinge my general English level significantly.

For this I need to practice.


ForTo achieve this I need to practice.

For thisTo meet this goal, I need to practice.

For this to happen, I need to practice.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I promised myself to spent 15 minutes everyday but unfortunately do not do it.


I promised myself tohat I would spentd 15 minutes everyday but unfortunately doI have not done it.

I promised myself to spent 15 minutes everyday but unfortunately do not doI haven’t been doing it.

I promised myself toI would spentd 15 minutes every day, but unfortunately do not do, I have not been doing it.

I promised myself to spentd 15 minutes every day but unfortunately do not do it.

I promised myself toI will spentd 15 minutes studying every day but u. Unfortunately do not do it, I haven't managed to keep that promise.

It is too hot outside for any journey.


It is too hot outside for any journey.

It's too hot outside to travel.

It is too hot outside for any journey.

It is too hot outside for any journey.

It is too hot outside for any journeyto do anything.

Suggesting "to do anything" because it sounds more natural.

It is too hot outside for any journey.to travel.

Even going for a short walk is not an option.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The sea also is dangerous in this period since Jellyfishes are all other the sea.


The sea is also is dangerous in this period since Jellyfishes are all other the seathere are a lot of jellyfish in the water.

I changed this one a little more, I think it gets at what you mean. :-)

The sea also is dangerous in this periodnow, since Jellyfishes are all other the seaver.

The seaOcean swimming is also is dangerous in this period since Jjellyfishes are all othereverywhere this time of the syear.

TGoing into the sea is also is dangerous since this period since Jellyfishes are all other the seaere are a lot of jellyfish in the water.

The other sentence was a bit awkward, I think something like this works better :)

The sea also is dangerous in this period since Jjellyfishes are all othver the sea.

More common to see the plural form of jellyfish as written above.

The sea also is dangerous inat this period since Jellyfishes are all other the seatime of year, there are jellyfish everywhere.

So making homework and writing my first assay seems to be a best choice for this morning.


So makdoing homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice for this morning.

So making homework and writing my first aessay seems to be a best choice for this morning.

So makdoing homework and writing my first aessay seems to be amy best choice for this morningbet today.

Always doing homework. Never making.

So making, doing my homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice for this morning.

So mak, doing my homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice for this morning.

So makdoing homework and writing my first aessay seems to be athe best choice foroption this morning.

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