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liumuzhou

Feb. 20, 2022

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2022.2.20 sunny
Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.Because tomorrow will term begins!!!😢
Well,this isn’s a bad event, but I can meet my classmates,I haven’t seen them since January.
Next term,I will have High school entrance examination, it is very important for me.I planed learn chemistry and physics before this winter vacation .I don’t finish this plan, but I know failure is the mother of success.I will much harder in next term!!!!

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Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.BI'm not happy, because tomorrow will, the term begins!!!😢!

Well, this isn’s a't an entirely bad event, butecause I can meet my classmates, who I haven’t seen them since January.

Next term, I will have Ha high school entrance examination, it which is very important for me. I planned to learn cChemistry and pPhysics before this winter vacation . I don’idn't finish thismy plan, but I know that failure is the mother of success. I will try much harder in the next term!!!!

My daily life

2022.2.20 sunny

Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.Because tomorrow willI'm not doing well because term begins tomorrow!!!😢

Instead of "my emotion isn't good," use something like "I'm not doing well" or "I'm in a bad mood."

Well, this isn’s a bad event, butt entirely bad, because I can meet my classmates,. I haven’t seen them since January.

Next term, I will have Ha very important high school entrance examination, it is very important for me. I planned to learn chemistry and physics before this winter vacation . I don’idn't finish this plan, but I know failure is the mother of success. I will try much harder in next term!!!!

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Great job! Good luck with the entrance exam next term :)

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liumuzhou

Feb. 21, 2022

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Thank you for your congratulations. I will pay attention to these words in the future😄

Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.Because tomorrow willod isn't doing well because term begins tomorrow!!!😢

"emotional state" is how you would use "emotion" in this context. However, "emotional state" sounds dry and clunky, "mood" is the casual equivalent.

Concepts like "mood" and "health" are treated as ongoing events, so "my mood is good" sounds wrong, but "my mood is doing well" sounds correct. If you use the adjective before the concept instead, you can use "good" or "bad" and it will sound correct. For example,

"Although today is sunny, I'm in a bad mood because term begins tomorrow!!!😢"

Well,tThis isn’s a bad event, but't entirely a bad thing because I can meet my classmates, I haven’t seen them since January again.

Next term, I will havehave very important High school entrance examination, it is very important for me.s. I planned to learn chemistry and physics before this winter vacation . I don’t finish this planidn't succeed, but I know failure is the mother of success. I will try much harder in the next term!!!!

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Best of luck in your studies!

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liumuzhou

Feb. 20, 2022

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Thank you for your advice and congratulations. Your advice is really detailing and helpful to me. I will pay attention to these details in the future😄

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2022.2.20 sunny


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Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.Because tomorrow will term begins!!!😢


Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.Because tomorrow willod isn't doing well because term begins tomorrow!!!😢

"emotional state" is how you would use "emotion" in this context. However, "emotional state" sounds dry and clunky, "mood" is the casual equivalent. Concepts like "mood" and "health" are treated as ongoing events, so "my mood is good" sounds wrong, but "my mood is doing well" sounds correct. If you use the adjective before the concept instead, you can use "good" or "bad" and it will sound correct. For example, "Although today is sunny, I'm in a bad mood because term begins tomorrow!!!😢"

Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.Because tomorrow willI'm not doing well because term begins tomorrow!!!😢

Instead of "my emotion isn't good," use something like "I'm not doing well" or "I'm in a bad mood."

Although today is sunny, my emotion is’t good.BI'm not happy, because tomorrow will, the term begins!!!😢!

Well,this isn’s a bad event, but I can meet my classmates,I haven’t seen them since January.


Well,tThis isn’s a bad event, but't entirely a bad thing because I can meet my classmates, I haven’t seen them since January again.

Well, this isn’s a bad event, butt entirely bad, because I can meet my classmates,. I haven’t seen them since January.

Well, this isn’s a't an entirely bad event, butecause I can meet my classmates, who I haven’t seen them since January.

Next term,I will have High school entrance examination, it is very important for me.I planed learn chemistry and physics before this winter vacation .I don’t finish this plan, but I know failure is the mother of success.I will much harder in next term!!!!


Next term, I will havehave very important High school entrance examination, it is very important for me.s. I planned to learn chemistry and physics before this winter vacation . I don’t finish this planidn't succeed, but I know failure is the mother of success. I will try much harder in the next term!!!!

Next term, I will have Ha very important high school entrance examination, it is very important for me. I planned to learn chemistry and physics before this winter vacation . I don’idn't finish this plan, but I know failure is the mother of success. I will try much harder in next term!!!!

Next term, I will have Ha high school entrance examination, it which is very important for me. I planned to learn cChemistry and pPhysics before this winter vacation . I don’idn't finish thismy plan, but I know that failure is the mother of success. I will try much harder in the next term!!!!

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