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ponta

Nov. 12, 2020

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I watch YouTube almost every day, and I've subscribed to channels about a Shiba dog because I'm a big fan of Shiba. I'll show you two of my favorite channels.
The first is ShibeNation. The channel upload videos about a black Shiba dog, Max, and the videos are about one minute so it's easy to watch. In the videos, he speaks in weird English such as hooman (human). The editing is also funny.
The second is 柴犬らんまる (Shibainu Ranmaru). This channel is about a red Shiba dog, Ranmaru. (Actually, He looks brown but we call the coat color red) He is very round-shaped and cute. I like the videos' titles; these are humorous.
I heal daily tiredness enjoying these videos.

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My Daily Healing

I watch YouTube almost every day, and I've subscribed to channels aboutthat each feature a Shiba dog because I'm a big fan of Shibas.

I'll show youtell you about two of my favorite channels.

In this context "show" would usually mean showing the videos to us, rather than writing about them.

The first is ShibeNation.

The channel uploads videos about a black Shiba dog, Max, and the videos are about one minute so it'slong, so they're easy to watch.

"it's" for the "the channel is easy to watch"
"they're" for "the videos are easy to watch"

In the videos, he speaks in weird English, such as saying "hooman" (human).

The editing is also funny.

The second is 柴犬らんまる (Shibainu Ranmaru).

This channel is about a red Shiba dog, Ranmaru.

(Actually, Hhe looks brown, but we call the coat color red.) He is very round-shaped and cute.

I like the videos' titles; thesey are humorous.

Or: "I like the videos' humorous titles."

I heal daily tiredness enjoying these videos.

Your sentence works, but something like "Watching these videos every day rejuvenates me." sounds more natural. Other options besides "rejuvenate" could be "refresh" or "reinvigorate"

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ponta

Nov. 16, 2020

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Thank you so much!

My Daily Healing

I watch YouTube almost every day, and I've subscribed to channels about a Shiba dogs because I'm a big fan of Shibas.

I'll show you two of my favorite channels.

The first is ShibeNation.

The channel uploads videos about a black Shiba dog, Max, and the videos are about one minute long so it's easy to watch.

In the videos, he speaks in weird English such as hooman (human).

The editing is also funny.

The second is 柴犬らんまる (Shibainu Ranmaru).

This channel is about a red Shiba dog, Ranmaru.

(Actually, He looks brown but we call the coat color red) He is very round-shaped and cute.

I like the videos' titles; these are humorous.

I heal daily tiredness enjoying these videosEnjoying these videos heals my daily fatigue.

Your sentence is grammatically correct, but I feel like it sounds more natural the way I have written it. Fatigue fits a bit better in my opinion - but tiredness is not incorrect.

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ponta

Nov. 13, 2020

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Thank you so much!

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jenni

Nov. 13, 2020

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You're welcome -glad to help :)

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I watch YouTube almost every day, and I've subscribed to channels about a Shiba dog because I'm a big fan of Shiba.


I watch YouTube almost every day, and I've subscribed to channels about a Shiba dogs because I'm a big fan of Shibas.

I watch YouTube almost every day, and I've subscribed to channels aboutthat each feature a Shiba dog because I'm a big fan of Shibas.

I'll show you two of my favorite channels.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll show youtell you about two of my favorite channels.

In this context "show" would usually mean showing the videos to us, rather than writing about them.

The first is ShibeNation.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The channel upload videos about a black Shiba dog, Max, and the videos are about one minute so it's easy to watch.


The channel uploads videos about a black Shiba dog, Max, and the videos are about one minute long so it's easy to watch.

The channel uploads videos about a black Shiba dog, Max, and the videos are about one minute so it'slong, so they're easy to watch.

"it's" for the "the channel is easy to watch" "they're" for "the videos are easy to watch"

In the videos, he speaks in weird English such as hooman (human).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the videos, he speaks in weird English, such as saying "hooman" (human).

The editing is also funny.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The second is 柴犬らんまる (Shibainu Ranmaru).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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This channel is about a red Shiba dog, Ranmaru.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(Actually, He looks brown but we call the coat color red) He is very round-shaped and cute.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(Actually, Hhe looks brown, but we call the coat color red.) He is very round-shaped and cute.

I like the videos' titles; these are humorous.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like the videos' titles; thesey are humorous.

Or: "I like the videos' humorous titles."

I heal daily tiredness enjoying these videos.


I heal daily tiredness enjoying these videosEnjoying these videos heals my daily fatigue.

Your sentence is grammatically correct, but I feel like it sounds more natural the way I have written it. Fatigue fits a bit better in my opinion - but tiredness is not incorrect.

I heal daily tiredness enjoying these videos.

Your sentence works, but something like "Watching these videos every day rejuvenates me." sounds more natural. Other options besides "rejuvenate" could be "refresh" or "reinvigorate"

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