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adichira

Nov. 5, 2025

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My Dad's Job

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles. He knows how to drive cars, motorbikes, buses, trucks, and also ambulances.

He worked as an ambulance driver when I was a child, but I don't have any memories of it. Later, he started driving vehicles for huge companies. I remember he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products. All these were on cargo trucks, so he did two tasks: driving and lifting heavy materials. That was a hard job, so with years he became injured with his back. Now, he has a frequent pain in his lower back.

Last year, he decided to quit his job. He has different sources of money, and also he's living at our family farm. He's a handyman, he can fix everything. So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability and earn money from different tasks in the village. Also, this is a good ability there, because many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things at their houses.

He has a good reputation there because he's so perfectionist and honest too. Then people trust him and his work.

Thank you for reading!


El trabajo de mi papá

Mi papá es una persona apasionada por conducir todo tipo de vehículos. Sabe conducir coches, motos, autobuses, camiones y también ambulancias.

Cuando yo era niña, él trabajaba como conductor de ambulancias, pero no guardo ningún recuerdo de ello. Más tarde, empezó a conducir vehículos para grandes empresas. Recuerdo que trabajaba en empresas que vendían tuberías, ventanas, cristales y productos para el mercado. Como todos estos eran camiones de carga, realizaba dos tareas: conducir y levantar materiales pesados. Era un trabajo duro, por lo que con los años enfermó de la espalda. Ahora sufre dolores frecuentes en la zona lumbar.

El año pasado decidió dejar su trabajo. Tiene diferentes fuentes de ingresos y además vive en una granja familiar. Es un manitas, puede arreglarlo todo. Así que ahora aprovecha esa habilidad y gana dinero realizando diferentes tareas en el pueblo. Además, es una buena habilidad allí, porque hay muchas personas mayores que viven allí y necesitan ayuda con las cosas que se estropean en sus casas.

Tiene buena reputación allí porque es muy perfeccionista y honesto. Por eso la gente confía en él y en su trabajo.

¡Gracias por leer!

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My Dad's Job

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles.

He worked as an ambulance driver when I was a child, but I don't have any memoriesy of it.

I remember that he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

All these were carried on cargo trucks, so he did two tasks: driving and lifting heavy materials.

That was a hard job, so with years his back have becaome injured with his back.

Now, he has a frequent pain in his lower back.

Last year, he decided to quit his job.

He has different sources of moneyincome, and also he's living at our family farm.

So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability and earning money from doing different tasks in the village.

Also, this is a good ability there, becauseHis skill is very useful as many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things at their houses.

He has a good reputation there because he's soa perfectionist and an honest person too.

Then pPeople trust him and his work.

Thank you for reading!

My Dad's Job

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styledifferent kinds of vehicles.

This sounds more natural.

He knows how to drive cars, motorbikes, buses, trucks, and also ambulances as well.

He worked as an ambulance driver when I was a child, but I don't have any memories of it.

Later, he started driving vehicles for huge companies.

I remember that he worked infor companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

"for" is more suitable here than "in".

All of these were transported on cargo trucks, so he dihad two tasks: driving trucks and lifting heavy materials.

For the sake of parallelism, it makes sense to include "trucks", so that they're both gerund+(possibly modified) noun; also, "driving and lifting heavy materials" gives the erroneous feel that you do both the driving and lifting on the "heavy materials".

That was a hard job, so wias the years he becamewent by, he eventually injured with his back.

Slightly better rephrasing.

Now, he has a frequent pain in his lower back pain.

Last year, he decided to quit his job.

He has different sources of moneyincome, and he also he's livinglives at our family farm.

He's a handyman, so he can fix everything.

So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability andto earn money from performing different tasks in the village.

Also, this is a good ability to have there, because many elderly people live there, and they need help with fixing damaged things at their houses.

He has a good reputation there, because he's soa perfectionist and an honest man, too.

This one is also adjusted for parallelism, too.

Then pPeople trust him and his work.

Thank you for reading!

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Sounds like your father's doing very well for himself! :)

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles.

This is technically correct, but it sounds weird. The following are some suggestions:
"My dad is very passionate about driving all styles of vehicles"
"My dad is a passionate person, especially about driving all styles of vehicles"

He knows how to drive cars, motorbikes, buses, trucks, and also ambulances.

He worked as an ambulance driver when I was a child, but I don't have any memories of it.

Later, he started driving vehicles for huge companies.

"huge companies" isn't necessarily incorrect, it's just that I don't think I've ever hear that phrase before. I usually hear/say:
"big companies"
"large companies/corporations"
"massive companies/corporations" (I prefer "massive corporations" if I'm going to use "massive")

I remember he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

Fine as is, but I would use "various* market products," instead, as it helps imply that you are giving a non-exhaustive list.

All these were onwith cargo trucks, so he did two tasks: driving and lifting heavy materials.

It's a minor nit-pick, and plenty of native English speaker would also use "on," however, since your dad is utilizing the cargo trucks to preform the tasks, he did "the tasks with cargo trucks," rather than "on the cargo trucks" (which implies on top of the cargo trucks which doesn't make to much sense).
Additionally, you could say:
"All these were in cargo trucks..."
or my personal preference "These all utilized cargo trucks..."

That was a hard job, so wiover the years heis back became injured with his back.

Last year, he decided to quit his job.

He has different sources of money, and is also he's living aton our family farm.

This sounds a bit disconnected from the previous sentence. You could fix that by adding "Thankfully," to the beginning, e.g.:
"Thankfully, He has different sources of money and is also living on our family farm."

He's a handyman, he can fix everything.!

Alternate suggestion:
"He's also a handyman who can fix anything!"

So, now, he's taking advantage of that abilityskill and earning money from different tasks in the village.

Also, this iit's a good abilityskill there, because many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things atin their houses.

saying "elderly people live there" sounds a little bit repetitive, so you can remove it to sound a bit more natural:

"Also, it's a good skill there, because many elderly people need help with damaged things in their houses." (since it's "obvious" that the elderly people live in their own house.)

He has a good reputation there because he's soa perfectionist and honest too.

Alternate suggestion:
"He has a good reputation there because he's such a perfectionist and honest too."

Then people trust him and his work.

Thank you for reading!

Feedback

Great Job! I could fully understand what you were trying to say, there were only a few sentences that sounded a bit weird.

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles.

It's a bit more natural to be more direct here

Later (on), he started driving vehicles for huge companies.

The on is optional here, but I think it sounds more natural to include it here.

I remember he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

Note quite sure what you mean by market products. It brings to mind things you might sell in an open market like fresh fruit etc? But not sure how that fits with pipes, windows and glass.

That was a hard job, so wiover the years he became injured with his back.

He has different sources of money, and also he'she's also living at our family farm.

So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability and earn money from different tasks in the village.

I've often relied on my own father for handyman type tasks like plumbing and electrical stuff, but he's getting older and less able so I feel bad about asking him for help with that these days.

Also, thisat is a good ability there, because many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things at their houses.

He has a good reputation there because he's souch a perfectionist and honest too.

The noun of perfectionist is much more common than the adjective

ThenBecause of that, people trust him and his work.

If this was all in one sentence, you might say "so people trust him and his work" but starting a new sentence with "So" is considered very casual so mostly only happens in speech, not in writing.

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adichira

Nov. 5, 2025

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Hello! About your question, he also worked in supermarkets where they sell every thing... he were in different kinds of companies.

I think our fathers are happy to help us. Maybe they can't do everything now, but we can help them and ask for their advice, hahaha.

Thank you for your time and your corrections too!

My Dad's Job


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My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles.


My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles.

It's a bit more natural to be more direct here

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles.

This is technically correct, but it sounds weird. The following are some suggestions: "My dad is very passionate about driving all styles of vehicles" "My dad is a passionate person, especially about driving all styles of vehicles"

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styledifferent kinds of vehicles.

This sounds more natural.

My dad is a passionate person about driving all styles of vehicles.

He knows how to drive cars, motorbikes, buses, trucks, and also ambulances.


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He knows how to drive cars, motorbikes, buses, trucks, and also ambulances as well.

He worked as an ambulance driver when I was a child, but I don't have any memories of it.


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He worked as an ambulance driver when I was a child, but I don't have any memories of it.

He worked as an ambulance driver when I was a child, but I don't have any memoriesy of it.

Later, he started driving vehicles for huge companies.


Later (on), he started driving vehicles for huge companies.

The on is optional here, but I think it sounds more natural to include it here.

Later, he started driving vehicles for huge companies.

"huge companies" isn't necessarily incorrect, it's just that I don't think I've ever hear that phrase before. I usually hear/say: "big companies" "large companies/corporations" "massive companies/corporations" (I prefer "massive corporations" if I'm going to use "massive")

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I remember he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.


I remember he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

Note quite sure what you mean by market products. It brings to mind things you might sell in an open market like fresh fruit etc? But not sure how that fits with pipes, windows and glass.

I remember he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

Fine as is, but I would use "various* market products," instead, as it helps imply that you are giving a non-exhaustive list.

I remember that he worked infor companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

"for" is more suitable here than "in".

I remember that he worked in companies that sold pipes, windows, glass and market products.

All these were on cargo trucks, so he did two tasks: driving and lifting heavy materials.


All these were onwith cargo trucks, so he did two tasks: driving and lifting heavy materials.

It's a minor nit-pick, and plenty of native English speaker would also use "on," however, since your dad is utilizing the cargo trucks to preform the tasks, he did "the tasks with cargo trucks," rather than "on the cargo trucks" (which implies on top of the cargo trucks which doesn't make to much sense). Additionally, you could say: "All these were in cargo trucks..." or my personal preference "These all utilized cargo trucks..."

All of these were transported on cargo trucks, so he dihad two tasks: driving trucks and lifting heavy materials.

For the sake of parallelism, it makes sense to include "trucks", so that they're both gerund+(possibly modified) noun; also, "driving and lifting heavy materials" gives the erroneous feel that you do both the driving and lifting on the "heavy materials".

All these were carried on cargo trucks, so he did two tasks: driving and lifting heavy materials.

That was a hard job, so with years he became injured with his back.


That was a hard job, so wiover the years he became injured with his back.

That was a hard job, so wiover the years heis back became injured with his back.

That was a hard job, so wias the years he becamewent by, he eventually injured with his back.

Slightly better rephrasing.

That was a hard job, so with years his back have becaome injured with his back.

Now, he has a frequent pain in his lower back.


Now, he has a frequent pain in his lower back pain.

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Last year, he decided to quit his job.


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He has different sources of money, and also he's living at our family farm.


He has different sources of money, and also he'she's also living at our family farm.

He has different sources of money, and is also he's living aton our family farm.

This sounds a bit disconnected from the previous sentence. You could fix that by adding "Thankfully," to the beginning, e.g.: "Thankfully, He has different sources of money and is also living on our family farm."

He has different sources of moneyincome, and he also he's livinglives at our family farm.

He has different sources of moneyincome, and also he's living at our family farm.

He's a handyman, he can fix everything.


He's a handyman, he can fix everything.!

Alternate suggestion: "He's also a handyman who can fix anything!"

He's a handyman, so he can fix everything.

So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability and earn money from different tasks in the village.


So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability and earn money from different tasks in the village.

I've often relied on my own father for handyman type tasks like plumbing and electrical stuff, but he's getting older and less able so I feel bad about asking him for help with that these days.

So, now, he's taking advantage of that abilityskill and earning money from different tasks in the village.

So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability andto earn money from performing different tasks in the village.

So, now, he's taking advantage of that ability and earning money from doing different tasks in the village.

Also, this is a good ability there, because many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things at their houses.


Also, thisat is a good ability there, because many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things at their houses.

Also, this iit's a good abilityskill there, because many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things atin their houses.

saying "elderly people live there" sounds a little bit repetitive, so you can remove it to sound a bit more natural: "Also, it's a good skill there, because many elderly people need help with damaged things in their houses." (since it's "obvious" that the elderly people live in their own house.)

Also, this is a good ability to have there, because many elderly people live there, and they need help with fixing damaged things at their houses.

Also, this is a good ability there, becauseHis skill is very useful as many elderly people live there and need help with damaged things at their houses.

He has a good reputation there because he's so perfectionist and honest too.


He has a good reputation there because he's souch a perfectionist and honest too.

The noun of perfectionist is much more common than the adjective

He has a good reputation there because he's soa perfectionist and honest too.

Alternate suggestion: "He has a good reputation there because he's such a perfectionist and honest too."

He has a good reputation there, because he's soa perfectionist and an honest man, too.

This one is also adjusted for parallelism, too.

He has a good reputation there because he's soa perfectionist and an honest person too.

Then people trust him and his work.


ThenBecause of that, people trust him and his work.

If this was all in one sentence, you might say "so people trust him and his work" but starting a new sentence with "So" is considered very casual so mostly only happens in speech, not in writing.

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Then pPeople trust him and his work.

Then pPeople trust him and his work.

Thank you for reading!


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