Nov. 9, 2024
My Current Rule (98)
I used to like collecting books, but now I've sold most of my books I have had for a long time.
I only have a few books for studying English.
I also like buying clothes.
However, it's a hustle to organize all the clothes if you have lots of items.
So I made a rule.
If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't get too many clothes.
私は、以前本を集めるのが好きでした。でも、長い間持っていたほとんどの本を売りました。
今は英語の勉強のための本を数冊持っているだけです。
また私は、洋服を買うのも好きです。
でも洋服があまりたくさんあると片付けるのが大変なのでルールを作りました。
洋服ダンスがいっぱいにならないように、一つ洋服を買ったら一つ捨てます。
My Current Rule
I used to like collecting books, but now I've sold most of my books I havethat I had for a long time.
I only have a few books for studying English.
I also like buying clothes.
However, it's a hustassle to organize all theof your clothes if you have lots of ithems.
"Hustle" has different meanings, but I think it doesn't go with the sentence you're writing here. "Hassle" is a good word to use when talking about something that's 大変 in English.
So I made a rule.
If I buy a new clothes, I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't gethave too many clothes.
Feedback
That's a good strategy if you like buying clothes! My strategy is a bit different. I just don't buy new clothes very often, so I don't have many clothes that I need to organize. 😅
Nov. 11, 2024
I'm jealous. I like your way, but I can't resist buying clothes. It's good for a change of pace for me. But I don't like spend lots of money on clothes, so I like GU(>_<)
Thank you for your corrections!
My CurrentNew Rule
I used to like collecting books, but now I've sold most of my books I have had for a long time.
Now, I only have a few books for studying English.
However, it's a hustle to organize all theassle putting away clothes if you have a lots of ithems.
So I’ve made a rulenew rule for myself.
If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't get too many clothesSo that my wardrobe won’t get too full, I have to throw out something every time I buy something new.
How I’d write this.
Nov. 10, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! I appreciate that you changed everything for the last sentence because I want to know how native English speaker would say.
Nov. 10, 2024
Thank you!
I used to like collecting books, but now I've sold most of mythe books I have hadthat I had owned/kept for a long time.
I only havekept a few books for studying English.
Or:
→ I only have a few books left for studying English.
I also like buying clothes.
However, it's a hustle to organize all the clothes[x] to keep organized if you have lots of itemclothes.
[X]
→ a pain
→ difficult
→ impossible
→ annoying
→ a never ending job
etc.
So, I made a rule.
If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't get too many clothes.
Every time I buy a new piece of clothing, I have to get rid of one that I already own. That way, my wardrobe will not overflow with clothes!
Feedback
Great post!
Nov. 9, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! I appreciate that you changed the last sentence into a completely different sentence. I always want to now how native speaker would say. ありがとう！
Nov. 10, 2024
いえいえ！
私も’natural'言い方したいです。
Keep it up!
My Current Rule
I used to like collecting books, but now I've sold most of my books that I have had for a long time.
I only have a few books for studying English.
I also like buying clothes.
However, it's a hustassle to organize all theyour clothes if you have lots of items.
So, I made a rule.
If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't gethave too many clothes.
Feedback
Great job! That's a good rule.
Nov. 9, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
My Current Rule
I used toPreviously, I like collecting books, but now I've sold most of my books I ha've had for a long time.
I only have a few books for studying English.
I also like buying clothes.
However, it's a hustleexhausting to organize all the clothes if you have lots of ithems.
So I made a rule.
If I buy a new clothes I will get rid of one iteman old piece of clothing, so that my wardrobe won't gethave too many clothes.
You can't use article a/an with clothes because it's a plural noun.
Nov. 9, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Nov. 10, 2024
You are welcome :)
However, it's a hustle to organize all the clothes if you have lots of items.
However, it’s a hassle to organize all the clothes if you own a lot of them.
If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't get too many clothes.
If I buy new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe will not be too full.
Feedback
Very good! Just small fixes.
Nov. 9, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't get too many clothes. If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't get too many clothes. If I buy new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe will not be too full. If I buy You can't use article a/an with clothes because it's a plural noun. If I buy If I buy a new clothes I get rid of one item, so that my wardrobe won't get too many clothes. Every time I buy a new piece of clothing, I have to get rid of one that I already own. That way, my wardrobe will not overflow with clothes!
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