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My current goal(1)
My current goal is to become a Japanese teacher.
Now I’m going to tell you why I decided on this goal.
First of all, I’d like to explain my career and current situation a little bit.
I’ve been working as an English teacher at school, teaching children the age of three to twelve. I think teaching English to children is rewarding and it’s a perfect job for me.
However, since there are tons of duties I need to do besides teaching English, I don’t have enough time to focus on my work. Sometimes I can’t even prepare materials for lessons. I love interacting with the kids, but it’s too much for me.
I started thinking about changing jobs last year, but I had no idea what I should do.
So, at that time, I just decided to resume up and improve my English as a first step.
I tried to find some language partners, started talking to them in English.
Here is a turning point. One of my language partners is an American who is studying Japanese.
He often asks me questions about Japanese and I always do my best to answer them.
While I teach him Japanese, an idea came up in my mind. “If I could become a Japanese teacher, that would be great.”
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I agree with the corrections that you have received and won't repeat them. If you like working with kids, maybe an international school or a bilingual English Japanese school would be a good option for you, especially if you'd like to teach both languages. Experience at that kind of school might also lead to opportunities to teach outside of Japan because some of the larger international schools have a standard approach that you would be familiar with.
My current goal (1)
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My current goal is to become a Japanese teacher.
Now I’m going to tell you why I decided on this goal.
First of all, I’d like to explain my career and current situation a little bit.
I’ve been working as an English teacher at school, teaching children thefrom age ofs three to twelve.
This is a slightly more natural way to phrase it.
I think teaching English to children is rewarding and it’s a perfect job for me.
However, since there are tons of duties I need to do besides teaching English, I don’t have enough time to focus on my work.
Sometimes I can’t even prepare materials for lessons.
I love interacting with the kids, but it’s too much for me.
I started thinking about changing jobs last year, but I had no idea what I should do.
So, at that time, I just decided to resume upcontinue teaching and improve my English as a first step.
Resume implies that you stopped teaching, continue means that you didn't stop (though you may have thought about it).
I tried to find some language partners, and started talking to them in English.
Here iThat was a turning point.
One of my language partners is an American who is studying Japanese.
He often asks me questions about Japanese and I always do my best to answer them.
While I teaching him Japanese, an idea came up in myto mind.
"Came to mind" is a set phrase
“If I could become a Japanese teacher, that would be great.”
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いいアイデアと思います。頑張ってください！
My current goal(1)
My current goal is to become a Japanese teacher.
Now I’m going to tell you why I decided on this goal.
First of all, I’d like to explain my career and current situation a little bit.
I’ve been working as an English teacher at a school, teaching children between the ages of three to twelve.
I think teaching English to children is rewarding and it’s a perfect job for me.
However, since there are tons of duties I need to do besides teaching English, I don’t have enough time to focus on my work.
Sometimes I can’t even prepare materials for lessons.
I love interacting with the kids, but it’s too much for me.
I started thinking about changing jobs last year, but I had no idea what I should do.
So, at that time, I just decided to resume up and improve my English as a first step.
I tried to find some language partners, and started talking to them in English.
Here iThis was a turning point.
One of my language partners is an American who is studying Japanese.
He often asks me questions about Japanese and I always do my best to answer them.
While I teach him Japanese, an idea came up in my mind.
“If I could become a Japanese teacher, that would be great.”
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Excellent writing, and I wish you the best of luck in becoming a Japanese teacher!
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