July 16, 2020
My cover letter for a job!
To whom it may concern,
I found out about DLR and the Institute of Transportation Systems at a job fair at Leibniz University Hannover last year, and I was explained about the activities carried out at the institute, hence I was fascinated by the type of research activities and projects. I saw at the job portal of DLR an opportunity to submit a speculative application. Therefore, I am taking this opportunity to submit my application to be part of DLR. I am applying for a position right now because I would like to support my family financially.
After High school, I got a scholarship to obtain my bachelor's degree in Civil Engineering from Jaipur, India. Alongside my bachelor studies, I obtained certain skills such as working with AutoCAD drafting software and also using Primavera which is a project management software. My thesis was about the strengthening of flexible road pavements, and I completed it successfully. After my graduation, I went to Kabul and started working as a road design engineer at the Ministry of Public Works, where I handled the responsibilities of geometrical design and economic evaluation of roadways.
During my work, I got a scholarship to get my master's in transport engineering from Japan. The curriculum of the masters helped me develop a keen interest in research. At the department of transport engineering, Hiroshima University, we used R statistics software for the purpose of decision making in case of urban transport, which was interesting for me. My thesis is titled " Smart Monitoring of Street Roughness". I got interested to work at the Institute of Transportation Systems, Braunschweig after checking the range of projects that have been completed. For instance, a project called L3Pilot is about autonomous vehicles and the possibility to use them in the future.
I am keen to work at the Institute of Transportation Systems and would like to thank you for providing the opportunity to submit my application. I am available during the weekdays from 10:00 to 17:00 and will be looking forward to talking to you further in case you have any questions.
Yours sincerely,
My cover letter for a job!
To whom it may concern,
I found out about DLR and the Institute of Transportation Systems at a job fair at Leibniz University Hannover last year, and I was explai. There, I learned about the activities carried out at the institute, hence and I was fascinated by the type of research activities and projects happening there.
I saw at the job portal of DLR an opportunity to submit a speculative application on DLR's online portal.
Therefore, I am taking this opportunity to submit my application to be part of DLR.
I am applying for a position right now because I would like to support my family financially.
After Hhigh school, I got a scholarship to obtain my bachelor's degree in Civil Engineering from Jaipur, India.
AlongsideDuring my bachelor studies, I obtailearned certain skills, such as working with AutoCAD drafting software and also using Primavera which is, a project management software.
My thesis was about the strengthening of flexible road pavements, and I completed it successfully.
After my graduation, I went to Kabul and started working as a road design engineer at the Ministry of Public Works, where I handled the responsibilities of geometrical design and economic evaluation of roadways.
During myWhile working, I got a scholarship to get my master's in transport engineering fromin Japan.
At the department of transport engineering, of Hiroshima University, we used R statistics software for the purpose of decision making in case of urban transport, which was interesting fored me.
My thesis is titled " Smart Monitoring of Street Roughness".
I gotbecame interested toin working at the Institute of Transportation Systems, in Braunschweig after checlooking at the range of projects that have been completed.
"Checking" makes it seem too official.
For instance, a project called L3Pilot is about autonomous vehicles and their future possibility to use them in the futureies.
I am available during the weekdays from 10:00 to 17:00 and will beI looking forward to talking to you further in casef you have any questions.
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Good luck! I was a little bit harder on this one than others, since it's part of a job application. Overall it was really good and almost 100% correct, your phrasing was just weird occasionally.
July 16, 2020
Thanks a lot for your help! I guess I should write more because when I was learning English, there was no platform like langcorrect, where one can get his texts corrected by the native speakers. I should use this opportunity more! Thanks again and be safe!
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To whom it may concern To whom it may concern, |
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I found out about DLR and the Institute of Transportation Systems at a job fair at Leibniz University Hannover last year, and I was explained about the activities carried out at the institute, hence I was fascinated by the type of research activities and projects. I found out about DLR and the Institute of Transportation Systems at a job fair at Leibniz University Hannover last year |
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I saw at the job portal of DLR an opportunity to submit a speculative application. I saw |
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Therefore, I am taking this opportunity to submit my application to be part of DLR. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am applying for a position right now because I would like to support my family financially. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After High school, I got a scholarship to obtain my bachelor's degree in Civil Engineering from Jaipur, India. After |
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Alongside my bachelor studies, I obtained certain skills such as working with AutoCAD drafting software and also using Primavera which is a project management software.
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My thesis was about the strengthening of flexible road pavements, and I completed it successfully. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After my graduation, I went to Kabul and started working as a road design engineer at the Ministry of Public Works, where I handled the responsibilities of geometrical design and economic evaluation of roadways. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During my work, I got a scholarship to get my master's in transport engineering from Japan.
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The curriculum of the masters helped me develop a keen interest in research. |
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At the department of transport engineering, Hiroshima University, we used R statistics software for the purpose of decision making in case of urban transport, which was interesting for me. At the department of transport engineering |
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My thesis is titled " Smart Monitoring of Street Roughness". My thesis is titled " |
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I got interested to work at the Institute of Transportation Systems, Braunschweig after checking the range of projects that have been completed. I "Checking" makes it seem too official. |
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For instance, a project called L3Pilot is about autonomous vehicles and the possibility to use them in the future. For instance, a project called L3Pilot is about autonomous vehicles and their future possibilit |
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I am keen to work at the Institute of Transportation Systems and would like to thank you for providing the opportunity to submit my application. |
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I am available during the weekdays from 10:00 to 17:00 and will be looking forward to talking to you further in case you have any questions. I am available during the weekdays from 10:00 to 17:00 and |
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Yours sincerely, |
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