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I've always been passionate about books. At nine years old, I looked at my mother and said: "I wanna be a writer!" and this decision changed my life. I started creating comic books about mystery (yes, I wrote and drew too). I showed to my friends and it was amazing to them. Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out (is this right?) as I'm planning ;) 🤍
Sempre fui apaixonada por livros. Aos nove anos, olhei para minha mãe e disse: "Quero ser escritora!", e essa decisão mudou minha vida. Comecei a criar histórias em quadrinhos sobre mistério (sim, eu escrevi e também desenhei). Mostrei para meus amigos e eles acharam incrível. Agora, estou tentando começar um romance e espero que saia como planejei ;) 🤍
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I understand what you mean, just changed the wording for clarity
I've always been passionate about books.
At nine years old, I looked at my mother and said: "I wanna be a writer!"
and this decision changed my life.
I started creating comic books about mystery (yes, I wrote and drew too).
I showed it to my friends and they thought it was amazing to them.
Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out well (is this right?)
Yes! Almost :)
as I'm planning ;) 🤍
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Beleza! Good luck!
I showed it/them to my friends and it was amazing to them.they found it amazing.
You can use ‘it’ when talking about an object, or ‘them’ when talking about multiple objects.
Saying ‘they found it amazing’ sounds more natural.
Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out (is this right?)
Yes saying ‘I hope it turns out’ is correct/ sounds natural to say.
Feedback
I wish you luck with your novel! It’s interesting that you started with comic books as they are so inspiring and take a lot of patience and effort to create!
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my contact with writing
I understand what you mean, just changed the wording for clarity |
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I've always been passionate about books. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At nine years old, I looked at my mother and said: "I wanna be a writer!" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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and this decision changed my life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I showed to my friends and it was amazing to them. I showed it to my friends and they thought it was amazing I showed it/them to my friends and You can use ‘it’ when talking about an object, or ‘them’ when talking about multiple objects. Saying ‘they found it amazing’ sounds more natural. |
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Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out (is this right?) Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out well (is this right?) Yes! Almost :) Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out (is this right?) Yes saying ‘I hope it turns out’ is correct/ sounds natural to say. |
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as I'm planning ;) 🤍 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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