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Bolabird

March 21, 2025

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My Common Day

Today,I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university.With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full time and energy to get a better score,but,when the exam ended,i knew,everything was too late to change.To perpare the exam,I repited the forms of composers again and again,but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English.So I turn to ask for advise to improve my ability to learn English more effectively.Meanwhile,I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzled moments of my life!Looking forward to exchange ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw,I am a keen reader,maybe you can introduce a inreresting book to me!Thank you for your reading!

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My Common Day

Today, I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of uinto University. With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full time and energyexam coming to a close, I almost spent the maximum amount of time to get a better score,b. But, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. To perepare for the exam, I repited the forms of composviewed notes from my teachers again and again, but there is no pointI was unable to improve my skills ofEnglish learning English.skills. So I turn to ask for advisce to improve my ability ton learning English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life andlong with the puzzleding moments of my life!L I'm looking forward to exchange ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw, I am a keen reader,m by the way. Maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!

I'm assuming you're talking about your experience taking your first English exam to be admitted into University. You also tried memorizing your English notes, but it wasn't improving your learning skills?

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Don't forget about spaces, commas, and periods! They are necessary when writing in English.
Good job, and cheers to you on your learning journey! :)

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Bolabird

March 22, 2025

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Thank you for your advice and couragement! Have a nice day!

My Common Day

Today, I finished my first time English exam tso get the offer ofthat I can get into university. With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full (Sorry, I don't quite know what you mean by "with the drawing of the exam". You could probably delete it and it'd be fine.) I spent so much time and energy to get a better score, but, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. To perepare for the exam, I repieated the forms of composers again and again, (I'm not sure what you mean by "composers of English", a composer is a person who makes music.) but there is no point to improveing my skills of learning English. So I turn to'm asking for advisce to improve my ability to learn English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzleding moments of my life! Looking forward to exchangeing ideas with you and bemaking happy to make friends with you!bfriends! Btw, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!

Good luck!!! If you need a good book, I have a couple of recommendations. There's "Diary of a Wimpy Kid" which I loved as a kid, and still love now. There's also the Magic Treehouse series!

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Bolabird

March 22, 2025

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Thank you for you recommendation! They are very interesting and I love them! Have a nice day!

Today, I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university. (my first English exam for university admission?). With the drawing(?) of the exam, I almost spent the fullall my time and energy to get a better score, but, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. anything. To perepare for the exam, I repieated the forms of composers(?) again and again, but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English. So I am turning to ask for advisce to improve my ability to learn English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzleding moments of my life! Looking forward to exchangeing ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw, BTW, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!

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Your writing is pretty good, but there were several parts (marked with question marks) that I could not understand.

Most importantly, you need to fix the spacing after each comma and period. This is a serious error, one that is much more important in English than in Chinese. If you could fix this issue and repost your text as a new entry, along with a Chinese version of the text for reference, I’d be happy to correct it again. 请加中文版给我们参考。

And if you’re new here, then welcome to LangCorrect! We’re happy you’ve joined us. 🙂

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Bolabird

March 22, 2025

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Thank you! Have a nice day!

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JoeTofu

March 22, 2025

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别客气啦!

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Today,I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university.With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full time and energy to get a better score,but,when the exam ended,i knew,everything was too late to change.To perpare the exam,I repited the forms of composers again and again,but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English.So I turn to ask for advise to improve my ability to learn English more effectively.Meanwhile,I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzled moments of my life!Looking forward to exchange ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw,I am a keen reader,maybe you can introduce a inreresting book to me!Thank you for your reading!


Today, I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university. (my first English exam for university admission?). With the drawing(?) of the exam, I almost spent the fullall my time and energy to get a better score, but, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. anything. To perepare for the exam, I repieated the forms of composers(?) again and again, but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English. So I am turning to ask for advisce to improve my ability to learn English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzleding moments of my life! Looking forward to exchangeing ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw, BTW, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!

Today, I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of uinto University. With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full time and energyexam coming to a close, I almost spent the maximum amount of time to get a better score,b. But, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. To perepare for the exam, I repited the forms of composviewed notes from my teachers again and again, but there is no pointI was unable to improve my skills ofEnglish learning English.skills. So I turn to ask for advisce to improve my ability ton learning English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life andlong with the puzzleding moments of my life!L I'm looking forward to exchange ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw, I am a keen reader,m by the way. Maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!

I'm assuming you're talking about your experience taking your first English exam to be admitted into University. You also tried memorizing your English notes, but it wasn't improving your learning skills?

Today, I finished my first time English exam tso get the offer ofthat I can get into university. With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full (Sorry, I don't quite know what you mean by "with the drawing of the exam". You could probably delete it and it'd be fine.) I spent so much time and energy to get a better score, but, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. To perepare for the exam, I repieated the forms of composers again and again, (I'm not sure what you mean by "composers of English", a composer is a person who makes music.) but there is no point to improveing my skills of learning English. So I turn to'm asking for advisce to improve my ability to learn English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzleding moments of my life! Looking forward to exchangeing ideas with you and bemaking happy to make friends with you!bfriends! Btw, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!

Good luck!!! If you need a good book, I have a couple of recommendations. There's "Diary of a Wimpy Kid" which I loved as a kid, and still love now. There's also the Magic Treehouse series!

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