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SummerTeaWater

July 1, 2021

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My Childhood in My Hometown

My hometown is a very small city.

In my youth, it was easy to go field, mountain surround by nature.

My friends and I used to go to a small stream near my house and swam there.

Like other elementary school students, I loved to enjoy playing in the playground.

After school, we used to play soccer and hit-and-seek and so on.

We also ate street food at a stationary near my school.

The stationary sold not only goods but also served street food and small game consoles.

There was a hot place for us and we visited there every day even weekend.

My hometown always reminds me of good old memories.

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My hometown is a very small city.

In my youth, it was easy to go field,into fields and mountains, surrounded by nature.

Like other elementary school students, I loved to enjoy playing inplay at the playground.

After school, we used to play soccer and, hitde-and-seek, and so on.

We also ate street food at a stationaryore near my school.

Some options to be more specific: at a convenience store, at a street vendor, at a corner store, at a small store.

The stationaryore sold not only goods but also served street food and small game consoles.

Thereis was a hotpopular place for us and we visited there every day - even on the weekends.

My hometown always reminds me of good old memories.

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Sounds like a fun childhood.

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SummerTeaWater

July 1, 2021

402

Thank you very much.

My Childhood in My Hometown


My hometown is a very small city.


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In my youth, it was easy to go field, mountain surround by nature.


In my youth, it was easy to go field,into fields and mountains, surrounded by nature.

My friends and I used to go to a small stream near my house and swam there.


Like other elementary school students, I loved to enjoy playing in the playground.


Like other elementary school students, I loved to enjoy playing inplay at the playground.

After school, we used to play soccer and hit-and-seek and so on.


After school, we used to play soccer and, hitde-and-seek, and so on.

We also ate street food at a stationary near my school.


We also ate street food at a stationaryore near my school.

Some options to be more specific: at a convenience store, at a street vendor, at a corner store, at a small store.

The stationary sold not only goods but also served street food and small game consoles.


The stationaryore sold not only goods but also served street food and small game consoles.

There was a hot place for us and we visited there every day even weekend.


Thereis was a hotpopular place for us and we visited there every day - even on the weekends.

My hometown always reminds me of good old memories.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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