Jan. 28, 2020
My childhood
Whenever I look back at my past,friendships come in my mind first. Those friendships were much more valuable than what I am having right now.Also the time I've spend with my childhood friends would popped out of nowhere when I am drunk or sad.Being an adult really does suck.It makes me even more cherished those moments I spend with them.But here I am dealing with existential crisis on a daily basis,I truly feel that life is meaningless and whatever I do doesn't matter in the end.But I think those little moments I have had with them is rather meaningful even than my first kiss.Yes,they are alive and well but you know,we don't have much time as we used to.Plus being adult comes with much more responsibilities which is exhausting.I don't even know what I am bragging about.
My cChildhood
Whenever I look back at my past, my friendships come in my mind firstare the first thing that comes to mind.
Those friendships were much more valuable than what I amthe ones I havinge right now.
Also tThe times I've spend with my childhood friends would poppedpop up out of nowhere when I am drunk or sad.
Being an adult really does suck.
It makes me cherish even more cherished those moments I spendt with them.
But here I am dealing with existential crisis on a daily basis,. I truly feel that life is meaningless and whatever I do doesn't matter in the end.
But I think those little moments I havethat I had with them isare rather meaningful, even more so than my first kiss.
Yes, they are alive and well, but you know,we don't have much time as we used to.
Plus, being an adult comes with much more responsibilities which is exhausting.
I don't even know what I am bragging about.
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Nice work :)
Whenever I look back at mythe past, friendships come in my mind firstare the first thing that comes to mind.
Also tThe times I've spend with my childhood friends would poppedpop up out of nowhere when I am drunk or sad.
Being an adult really does suck.
Yes,they are alive and well but you know,we don't have as much time as we used to.
You can really only say "you know," writing it is not very natural.
I don't even know what I am bragging about.
Jan. 29, 2020
Thank you very much!
My childhood
Whenever I look back at my past, friendships come into my mind first.
Those friendships were much more valuable than what I am havinghave right now.
Also tThe times that I've spendt with my childhood friends would popped out of nowhere when I am drunk or sad.
Being an adult really does suck.
It makes me even more cherished those moments I spendt with them even more.
But here I am dealing with existential crisis on a daily basis, I truly feel that life is meaningless and whatever I do doesn't matter in the end.
But I think that those little moments I havethat I had with them is rathereven more meaningful even than my first kiss.
Yes, they are alive and well but you know, we don't have as much time as we used to.
Plus, being an adult comes with much more responsibilities which is exhausting.
I don't even know what I am bragging about.
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Remember to put spaces after commas and periods.
Also, I don't really know what I can comment about your situation, hang in there!!
Jan. 29, 2020
Thanks!!
Jan. 29, 2020
Also tThe times that I've spendt with my childhood friends would popped out of nowhere when I am drunk or sad.
cant "the time ive spent..." also work? or is this just a common thing of native speakers losing grammatical ability? im a native speaker and when i read it read and thought the beggining was okay
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But I think those little moments I have had with them is rather meaningful even than my first kiss.
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