Feb. 26, 2024
My Cats Luna and Purry (52)
I have two cats named Luna and Purry.
They are 5 years old and are sisters.
Luna is a quiet, white cat and Purry is a mischievous, black and white cat.
Purry always pick a fight to Luna, and dominates the fight right from the beginning.
Her punch is real quick.
Luna doesn't want to take on the challenge.
She hisses at Purry and intimidate her, but Purry never be scared of her.
Luna always ends up running away.
I would appreciate it if you could help me sound more natural, even if you have to change whole sentences. Thank you.
私は、ルナとペーリーという名前の猫を二匹飼っています。
彼らは、5歳で、姉妹です。
ルナは真っ白な静かな猫です。ペーリーは白と黒の、いたずらな猫です。
ペーリーは、いつもルナに喧嘩を吹っ掛け、最初から優位に立ちます。
彼女のパンチは素早いです。
ルナはそのチャレンジを受けたくありません。
彼女は、シャーと言って威嚇しますが、ペーリーは全く怖くないようです。
結局ルナはいつも逃げちゃいます。
文章全部を変えても構わないので、自然に聞こえるように直してもらえると嬉しいです。ありがとうございます。
My Cats Luna and Purry (52)
I have two cats named Luna and Purry.
They are 5 years old and are sisters.
Luna is a quiet, white cat andwhile Purry is a mischievous, black and white cat.
Purry always picks a fight towith Luna, and dominates the fight right from the beginning.
Luna doesn'tnever wants to take on the challenge.
She hisses at Purry and intimidthreatens her, but Purry is never be scared of her.
Luna always ends up running away.
I would appreciate it if you could help me sound more natural, even if you have to change whole sentences.
Thank you.
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I enjoyed reading this post. I have two cats. The older one is very calm and laid back, while the younger one is very active and curious. When is play time, the laid back older cat becomes aggressive and usually dominates the younger one. Right after the finish fighting, they become friends again. It's funny!
March 12, 2024
Interesting! It sounds like they are similar to my cats. Cats are very funny and happy animal. Thank you so much for your correction!
My Cats Luna and Purry (52)
I have two cats named Luna and Purry.
They are 5 years old and are sisters.
Luna is a quiet, white cat and Purry is a mischievous, black and white cat.
Purry always pick as fight tos with Luna, and dominates the fight right from the beginning.
Sometimes when we refer to habitual events, we use the plural, so "fights" works here. "A fight" is also fine.
Her punch ises are real quick.
Again, same as above, just using the plural.
Luna doesn't want to take on the challenge.
She hisses at Purry and intimidthreatens her, but Purry never seems to be scared of her.
"Intimidate" is better if Luna's threats were successful. Otherwise, just "threaten" works.
Luna always ends up running away.
I would appreciate it if you could help me sound more natural, even if you have to change whole sentences.
Thank you.
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I often wonder about pets that often get in fights like this. Do you think Luna likes Purry since she is so often picked on? Or are they still close despite this?
Feb. 27, 2024
They are still get along well with each other. They groom each other, and sleep together when it's cold. But I think Luna doesn't like Purry when she is energetic.
Thank you so much for your correction!
My Cats Luna and Purry
I have two cats named Luna and Purry.
They are 5 years old and are sisters.
Luna is a quiet, white cat and Purry is a mischievous, black and white cat.
Purry always picks a fight towith Luna, and dominates the fight right from the beginning.
Her punch ises are really quick.
Luna doesn't want to take on the challenge.
She hisses at Purry and intimidates her, but Purry is never be scared of her.
Luna always ends up running away.
I would appreciate it if you could help me sound more natural, even if you have to change whole sentences.
Thank you.
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Nicely written! It's interesting how your cats have such different personalities even though they're sisters and the same age. :-)
Feb. 26, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction! They are very interesting and I've never be bored watching them.
My Cats Luna and Purry
I have two cats named Luna and Purry.
They are 5 years old and are sisters.
Luna is a quiet, white cat and Purry is a mischievous, black and white cat.
Purry always pick a fight to Luna, and dominates the fight right from the beginning.
Her punch is real quick.
Luna doesn't want to take on the challenge.
She hisses at Purry and intimidate her, but Purry never be scared of her.
Luna always ends upkeeps on running away.
I would appreciate it if you could help me sound more natural, even if you have to change whole sentences.
Thank you.
Feb. 26, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
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I would appreciate it if you could help me sound more natural, even if you have to change wholentire sentences.
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I changed some sentences even though the original was fine grammatically. There are definitely other ways to rephrase, so please take them as purely suggestions.
Feb. 26, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction! Provocation is a new word for me. This is a good word. Thank you so much!
Luna is a quiet, white cat and Purry is a mischievous, black and white cat.
Purry always picks a fight towith Luna, and dominates the fight right from the beginning.
Her first punch is really quick.
She hisses at Purry and intimidated her, but Purry never beis scared of her.
Feb. 26, 2024
Thank you so much as always
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