Feb. 25, 2025
My cat(4)
Bao has adapted to my house and feels more relaxed than before.
I can only now see what he looks like. Compared to other two-year-old cats, Bao is a bit skinny.
According to the staff in the animal hospital, his former owner sent Bao to his friend to take care of before sending Bao to the hospital.
Unfortunately, after his friend cared for Bao for a few days, he decided not to raise Bao anymore.
Surroundings have been changed in a short time, no wonder Bao is so skinny and has a serious stress response.
(Hoping that before raising a pet, everyone can consider whether you can take good care of them seriously.)
我家的猫（4）
小宝已经适应了新家，比刚回来的时候要放松多了。
现在才能清楚看到他的摸样，和其他2岁的猫相比，他有点偏瘦。
听宠物医院的人说，它原来的主人将它放在宠物医院寄养前，已经试过送给他的朋友照顾。
可惜，那位朋友养了几天就养不下去，最终才送来宠物医院。
唉，短时间内换了四次生活环境，怪不得小宝那么瘦，应急那么严重
（真希望大家在养宠物之前，先想清楚自己能不能照顾好它）
I can only now see what he looks like.
I might say, "Now I can see what he looks like." But what is this in reference to? Did he used to look very different, but now he looks like his "true self"?
Unfortunately, after his friend cared for Bao for a few days, he decided not to raise Bao anymore.
This is grammatically correct; there are no problems with it! However, if you want to make it sound a little more native, I would write it as, "Unfortunately, after only caring for Bao for a few days, his friend decided not to raise him anymore."
Surroundings have been changed in a short time, no wonder Bao is so skinny and has a serious stress response.
His surroundings have changed so much in such a short period of time, so no wonder that Bao is so skinny and is having a serious stress response.
(Hoping that before raising a pet, everyone can consider whether you can take good care of them seriously.)
I hope that before people decide to raise a pet, they consider seriously whether or not they can take care of them.
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Nice job! Hope my corrections were helpful, this is my first time correcting :)
Feb. 26, 2025
I appreciate your help, it's so useful thank you
SurroundingsBecause his environment haves been changed so often in a short time, it is no wonder Bao is so skinny and has a serious stress response.
Rewrote this to sound more natural.
(HopingI hope that before raising a pet, everyone can considers whether you can take good care of them seriously.)
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I had pet dogs growing up, but it was me, and my siblings and my parents to take care of them. I've thought about adopting a pet since then, but since it's just me right now, I don't know if I'd be able to care for them well enough, so I haven't. Maybe someday though.
Feb. 26, 2025
Thank you for your correction and I had a pet dog too~
My cCat(4)
Bao has adapted to my house and fseelms more relaxed than before.
'seems' might be better here. It suggests that is how he appears to you.
I can only now see what he looks like.
Compared to other two-year-old cats, Bao is a bit skinny.
According to the staff in the animal hospital, his former owner sent Bao to his friend to take care of before sending Bao to the hospital.
Unfortunately, after his friend cared for Bao for a few days, he decided not to raise Bao anymore.
SHis surroundings have been changed in a short time, so it's no wonder Bao is so skinny and has a serious stress response.
(Hoping that before raising a pet, everyone can seriously consider whether or not you can take good care of them seriously.)
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Good work. If it's a real cat, hope he is happy in his new home.
Feb. 26, 2025
Thank you for your correction
My cat(4)
Bao has adapted to my house and feels more relaxed than before.
I can only now see what he looks like.
Compared to other two-year-old cats, Bao is a bit skinny.
According to the staff inat the animal hospital, his former owner sent Bao to his friend to take care of him before sending Bao to the hospital.
Unfortunately, after his friend cared for Bao for a few days, he decided not to raisekeep Bao anymore.
Surroundings have been changed frequently in a short time, so it's no wonder Bao is so skinny and has a serious stress response.
(Hoping that before raisadopting a pet, everyone can consider whether you can take good care of them seriously.)
Raise is not the correct verb in this context. You can "raise" children, which means educating them. You can also "raise" chickens or puppies (for example) which in this case means reproducing/growing them for future consumption or sale.
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Well written.
Feb. 26, 2025
Thank you very much, I know how to use "raise" now.
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Surroundings have been changed in a short time, no wonder Bao is so skinny and has a serious stress response. Surroundings have been changed frequently in a short time, so it's no wonder Bao is so skinny and has a serious stress response.
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